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She is the prized daughter of an aristocrat, born to privilege and wealth and lined up to marry a man of wealth and status. One night in celebration of her coming nuptials, she attends the Gypsy fair that has come to the city.

Among the usual fortune tellers, freak shows and dancers there is one that captures her eye, the animal tamer. Devilishly handsome with tanned skin and dark hair, a body of perfectly sculptured muscles, he instantly has the girls in frenzy. But the to-be bride is enthralled, watching as he so easily and calmly works with the animals, from fierce tigers to more graceful horses; it is almost like their minds are connected.

Intrigued by him, she makes her way over after his display to talk to him. And the spark is instant.
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Woah, just woah. You...you sure know how to write, haha. Even better than what I've seen from all those months back. I don't yet know how I'll be able to keep up with the quality, but I'll try my best. Either way, it's surely going to take a lot more time for me than it apparently does for you. I'm naturally not a fast writer, and especially not when such high standards need to be upheld. Plus inspiration can be finicky sometimes. Posting once every day (aside from emergencies) is all I can promise.

Hope I won't disappoint you!
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That was just an opener, I tend to babble a bit during an opening post. I won't keep up the 1000+ words in the future, don't worry. Three decent paragraphs is good enough for me. And also, it's about quality not quantity and you're a good writer.

Please don't feel like you need to do novel style posts each time. Interaction posts will naturally be shorter.
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Thanks for the kind words. We'll see how much the situation allows for in every case.

I posted your character in the CHAR tab for the sake of clarity. Hope you don't mind, haha.
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Reply will be with you shortly.
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I thought closing the scene like that made sense, seeing as both Tobias and Catherine are sought for at other places. Now the question is, will she be able to accept his offer?
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