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The Gate of Nemesis.

It is a protective barrier between the realm of mortals and another realm.

Eons ago, a civilization known as "Vancia", formed of Humanoid Dragons, prospered. Vancians were lovers of knowledge and always aimed for scientific and magical progress, banishing undesirables to a barren dimension, the "Realm of the Black Stone".

In order to prevent banned criminals from leaving the Realm, the Vancians set up the Gate of Nemesis as a means of sealing both dimensions and setting them apart.

Time passed, and the Vancian civilization came to pass. Humans were born, and a civilization of Humans named "Eden" prospered. Criminals banned to the Realm of Black Stone spent countless generations building up power from their existance, turning themselves into hideous monsters of many shapes, ranging from corrupted Vancians to Giants, and invaded Eden.

A war of centuries ensued, and only ended when the Sorceress Maya fused her body with the wind goddess Sylph, and sealed the Gate of Nemesis. After the war of Eden, several civilizations prospered in the realm of mortals, with the Realm of the Black Stone absorbing other realities and looking for a princess pure of heart, with an affinity for wind elemental magic to complete the process.

An alchemist, turned into a vampire while seeking for immortality, set his eyes on a beautiful noblewoman. He knows about the story of the Gate of Nemesis, and wants to use its power for his own goal, while the noblewoman herself is a girl, saddened by her harsh, rigorous lifestyle, and dreams of finding someone to be happy with.

All while a wanderer raised in a distant land, who's also a young master in the ways of the ninja, suddenly gets wrapped on this intrigue...
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Roleplay I've combined to do with @Hidden Lilly.


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Rafflesia kingdom is a place where flowers blossom, blessed by the light of the sun and the power of the winds. In other words, Netherlands in a fantasy setting. The king of Rafflesia has a beautiful daughter named Zafiria.
She's a wind magician (The elite guards of the land), and learned the big stuff so she can fend off for herself in times of crisis.

Zafiria however lives in a rather compromising situation in terms of social relations. A high-ranking member of the nobility herself, she's constantly dragged into political plots and diplomacy - things that carry her away from the things she wanted to have the most, like a friendship and someone to trust.

One day, a vampire lord named Demitri Maximoff Edward Cullen Adam Frost appeared and started causing havoc. He wants to use Zafiria's powers as a vessel to open Stargate The gate of Nemesis, of which would release monsters under his control to take over the power of the Wind.

That's when a young ninja drifter named Chris Falcon appears. Being the sort of Maverick that he is, he ended up in the Rafflesia kingdom for the sake of just wandering.

I'm giving total freedom of choice for the moment of which the plot starts, and the appearance of the princess is of her choice.
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The captial city in the Rafflesia Kingdom was always a fun place to visit. Surprisingly, it was not where the Royal family resided. Since ancient times the royal family lived in a town nestled between two mountains. It was raised above the capital city and it seemed as though the castle its self was carved right out of the mountainside. The interior of the castle was full of smooth lines and large arching supports, displaying the incredible craft of those who built the castle. It made quite the visual note when things like the stone throne were angular and edged with hard lines, it did the job of drawing the onlookers eye.

None the less, the capital had been restless since Adam Frost made his first appearance there at the annual interkingdom meeting for the kingdoms that held alliances with Rafflesia. Many of the people seemed unsettled and on edge, shying away from supporting Frost. Some supported Frost whole heartedly and accusing the crown family of many things. Zafiria was unable to go anywhere without more than the usual escort. She remained ever courteous with the men that accompanied her around but she grew irritated with her position. Today, for example, she was irritated that she couldn't walk along her favorite garden path in the capital due to the unrest. It was hard to find green and growth when you lived in the mountainside. However, she was able to convince her company to go outside of the castle, along the main road to the patch of wildflowers that grew where the water tended to pool and run off during heavy rain seasons.

Here, she breathed deeply. Thoroughly enjoying letting the natural wind play with her loose strands of hair.

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Clearly, I was ready to jump right into it ^^" I didn't even realise I was in the OOC!

Umm, I'm going to sketch up a picture of her appearnece... I just don't know when I'll be getting to that this week. I was hoping that the two could meet in the capital somewhere, somehow. Then She can relay the info to her father and he can more formaly call on Chris. What do you think?
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That's a good starter post. Really immersive writing.

I'm not much used to the OOC and IC tags in threads, so it's okay for you to go and jump on the play.

Umm, I'm going to sketch up a picture of her appearnece... I just don't know when I'll be getting to that this week. I was hoping that the two could meet in the capital somewhere, somehow. Then She can relay the info to her father and he can more formaly call on Chris. What do you think?


I am perfectly fine with it. Usually, this character of mine keeps often a low profile, but it wouldn't be hard for her to find him.
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Okay :)

I will move that post over and await your IC response :)
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@Kurisu Shiruba

I am so sorry for ghosting on this. I didn't realise I had quite done that until now.

If you want to continue with the story I can, I'm posting about once a week these days. If this is dead then don't worry about it.

Again, I apologize for disappearing on you.
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I would be glad to continue the story. I had a really busy life until recently, but that was helpful to flesh out a few ideas about my character.

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Okay :)
I will likely be putting up a response tomorrow evening!
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Hey :)

I've recieved my marks back from my first set of midterms and they aren't good >.< I might have to spend less time on RPG :( I'll still post as often as I can but I might end up being a 'weekend warrior' writer for a while :/
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Just want to double check.
He's in the village/capital in a library and she is up in the castle study. We are mirroring here, he didn't just like teleport into the castle with her right?
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Hey :)

I've recieved my marks back from my first set of midterms and they aren't good >.< I might have to spend less time on RPG :( I'll still post as often as I can but I might end up being a 'weekend warrior' writer for a while :/

Fair enough. I too got bad grades due to RP and I know that feel. So, please, don't worry about it.

Just want to double check.
He's in the village/capital in a library and she is up in the castle study. We are mirroring here, he didn't just like teleport into the castle with her right?

Ahh. My bad. Let me check it.

Yeah, that makes sense. I'll come up with something better later. And something that doesn't sound weird or confusing. The effects of posting while trying to struggle to sleep...

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No worries, I thought it would be cute if they were mirroring one another. I can work with what's there :) I hope to have a post up by tomorrow evening
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I thought they were still mirroring one another? Since I wrote about how she could see the library from where she was in the mountainside castle?
I can have her come down there though, if that works better for where you are going?
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I'm going to redo my post later.

Had barely anytime to proofread my stuff, so I apologize in advance for any troubles.
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It's alright, I wanted to make sure I was on the same page before responding :)
let me know when you are done your edits
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I changed the post to something more fitting to the narrative.
Took me a visit to Wikipedia to understand the meaning of "mirroring each other" (English is not my native language) and I've took extra care in re-reading and proofreading the previous posts in order to make more sense.

The most difficult part was to take the mirroring one another part to an extent that it not only refers to the studying part, but also Zaph's dust cloud spell. I really wanted to make something interesting like this.
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Oh my goodness! I had no idea, I'm sorry. If that happens again, let me know and I'd be more than happy to explain :)
Good for you for writing in another language! Seriously, it takes a lot to be so fluent in a language that's not one's mother tongue.

I'm going to go read your edits and we can work in as much of your idea as we can while still making spacial sense.

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What you wrote was wonderful! You really took the mirroring a step further, I loved it.
I had no idea that he looked like that :P I was picturing something more like this
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I saved the picture of the ninja you showed me. It's from a videogame I've played a bit. It was painful to play, not because it was bad... but it was hard to play.

And I appreciate the compliment. I did my best to make sure the narration would fit the idea.
Part of why I love roleplays so much - I'm always knowing something new.

And I wish you happy holidays!
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Really? I had no idea it was from a video game :P

I agree, I'm always trying something new with my writing. I always find it helpful to get feedback from people I RP with so I kinda assume that it's the same for others. I'm glad you found my comments encouraging :)

You too! Merry Christmas!!!
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Hiya, happy new year!

How's things going?
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Doing okay!

Been visiting with family a lot this week before I head back home/to school. I'm not super looking forward to it ^^" I'm too much of a home-body to enjoy being away for so long.
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