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Thats good ^^

Thr first option has my attention simply because it will lead to confusion and fjikt after hes finished. Note also that his magic becomes more powerful and seems to have a mind of its own as well.

In truth I'm not sure how to control him while he's basically not there, advoce on that would be helpful for my next post.
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I was hoping you'd go with the first. You've got the perfect setup for that going, and the tension in it is wonderful.

Noted. Hmm. I gave her that “Energy Absorption” ability. Maybe she could accidentally discover she has that if necessary, and have it work against the energy behind his powers? If nothing else, it could still be a shorter attack for your guy, snapping out of it just in the nick of time, but still after a bit of damage? By the time they encounter, Thea’s going to be on the verge of dropping… and probably having frostbite. xD

Advice? Hmm. Well, since he’s blacked-out, I would probably avoid any internal monologue, such as opinions and emotions, and just stick with his actions. Or write as if from the perspective of a crazed wolf, with any thoughts and feelings done in that mindset instead of Byrce’s. If you mean on how he’s going to act, that’s really up to you. Just remember the original purpose was to make it seem like he had murdered Thea. If he’s completely out of control, maybe something like a rabid wolf on a rampage, sniffing out anything and everything he could possibly attack?

Until later, signature copy-cat! <3
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Viva la tension! Can't wait to see how this plays out ^^

It'll be my first time playing a Feral-wolf...can't wait! :D

Lol, opps? xD
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It should be fun!

So, uh, that got longer than anticipated (surprise, surprise). I apologize. Hope it's at least a semi-enjoyable read. Heh. So, I end with her in the forest, but technically before Byrce's episode. Go ahead and have him find her around sunrise, and I'll get her caught up to dawn and add her reaction to Byrce's attack into my next post. The only additional detail I can think of at the moment that may be necessary is that Byrce may be capable of smelling her blood. Not a lot, but a bit. Of course, if you need anything else from me, just let me know! All that sound good?
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Long post=Happy Ari ^^

Roger! So I start off my post with Byrce's attack just starting, he's mindlessly searching for anything or anyone and catches a faint hint of Thea's scent? I get to play a Feral wolf amd I'm excited and yet hesitant. New territory and all, I'll give it my all though! I won't be writing this is Bryce's point of view right? It'll be like from the outside looking in...?
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Heh, glad to hear. ^.^

If that's how you want to start it, yep! In all likelihood, he would find her resting. And on an animal path. And that's cool you get to delve into new territory. It's always exciting, but a bit nerve-wracking! The whole scientist part a bit new to me. I don't usually deal with any kind of science side, even if mixed with magic!

For the POV, it's up to you! Since Byrce blacks out for them, then yeah, personally, I would use either a sort of camera-type view, where you follow him and describe his actions, but don't touch on his inner emotions/monologue, OR do emotions from the perspective of the beast. Heck, depending on how you have Byrce effected, you could make it kind of like a Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde type deal, where the pulses mess up his mind, shoves who he really is aside, and brings another sort of dark, feral personality out... Which would be interesting if it were to roll over into his human form. If he ever takes it. Just random thoughts.
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I'll more then likely have it be from an outsider point of view, hopefully it'll be long enough x3 Hm....good idea there, I'll have to remember that for later ^^

Now to see if I can do justice to this post xD
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"Long enough?" So long as it is not, like, a single paragraph in this case, I think you should be fine. Heh. We are nearing close character interaction again. Posts will likely get shorter for the sake of reactions. Especially in a fight between player-characters. Not every post is going to be the average length of a novel chapter. I just get carried away when left alone with my characters.
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Who doesn't? Lol, but that's true enough. Let's keep moving forward and see what we can create from this RP ^^
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I see a more detailed plot discussion in our future. ;-) For now, onward and upward!

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Roger! ^<^
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Happy October!
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Likewise!! I'm excited to see what happens this month ^^
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Magic, of course, as the leaves change colors and the temperature grows wondrously chilly! Man, I've missed jacket and long sleeve weather. BRING ON AUTUMN!
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....WHY IS IT HOT AGAIN....it's supposed to be chilly and great!

I call BS x,x

I also might message you with a fee questions that relate to my post :)
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It is 65° fahrenheit where I am right now. But that could change in ten minutes. xD

You are welcome to ask them here, you know!
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It's like 80° -not now since it's night and all- and I'm here like "Noooooo, go awwwwwaaaaayyyy I wanna wear hoodies!" x3

True enough, when people stop bogging me I'll type up my questions ^^
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Yeash! Stupid summer weather, taking up the autumn season. I hope it cools off for you soon! I love wearing hoodies. So very much.

Alrighty! I eagerly await your questions! As always, though, there's no rush.
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It's cold this morning so I can only hope it'll be a more cool day then yesterday. Lol

'Kay! Alao, good morning ^^
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Fingers crossed it stays that way for you!

And good morning (it is morning skmewhere) and afternoon!
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