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I found an idea I wrote long time ago and totally forgot about, I thought I should post it and people might be interested.

"I get why you are upset, I truly do from the bottom of my heart. I think I would be broken too if I were in your position, but your time will come. You are just too young for this, I hope you can understand."

Those were the words of Travor Raventail to his youngest sister, Cicilia "Cissy" Raventail. He left her, another sister and another brother behind in a psychiatric facility he found on the internet. Never did they see him again.

While her older sister began a relationship with an unstable boy who is at times totally in love with her and at other times physically agressive.

Her older brother hangs out a lot with another boy in the facility that is very smart and whose reason for being in a psychiatric institution is unknown. Rumours are going around that they are in love with each other, but it is not known if they are even homosexual.

Cissy spends a lot of her time drawing in the library - even though it is called like that, it contains very few books for a library. There she often meets a mysterious guy who entertains her and protects her, but she doesn't know his name or psychiatric condition, is he even real?

On the grounds is a janitor who talks a lot more with the patients then you would expect from a janitor.

Are the three left behind brother and sisters going to escape or staying there? And what are they going to do after the janitor is rumoured to rape patients?

Locations
- the reception
- your own room
- the library
- the cafetaria
- a room where everybody can hang out, it has a couch and a television, something similar to a living room
- the kitchen
- the basement (According to the rules of the facility: only meant for the janitor, but who knows? You might be able to get there somehow...)
- the garden

Roles
- Cissy: taken by Squirrel98
- Mysterious friend of Cissy (you decide yourself if you are real or a hallucination of Cissy): taken by Marko Ramius
- Older sister: free
- Boyfriend of older sister: free
- Older brother: free
- Best friend of older brother: free
- Janitor (you decide yourself how bad you actually are): free

If you have a good concept of another character and can tell me how they would fit into the story, I might allow other characters



Comment which role you would like to play.

Writing style
- third person, past tense
- always write the name of your character above every post to avoid confusion
- at least two paragraphs (there is no maximum)
- I will also make a group chat in PM or on Discord (what you prefer), so you can say in your post that you will continue in chat if the things get so explicite that it wouldn't be allowed in thread
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@Squirrel98

I would be interested in playing this mysterious friend of Cissy's. The title alone calls out to me like an unexplored tomb calls out to a treasure hunter.

That said what is the major direction of this story if you don't mind me asking? Kind of like life in a Mental Institution and eventual escape? Some dark secret no one knows about? Slice of life type scenario?
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@Marko Ramius I am happy that you are interested and I will write you down for the role!

The major direction was for the brother and two sisters to be in a conflict of wanting to keep their new friends, but also extremely wanting to go back to the old life outside of the institution. But when they try to think of an escape they get stopped some how, maybe the janitor plays a role in it? So the question is if they stop trying to escape or if they keep going.
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@Squirrel98 Hm. That leaves a lot of good space for me to develop this character and figure out what side of the spectrum he truly lays on. I am already rolling over concepts for him and the reasons why he would protect and entertain Cissy. But first is there a particular age my character should be or is it open to my discretion?
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I was planning for Cissy to be 18 years, so maybe the easiest would be if he wasn't younger then that. However, I give you the freedom to decide the age difference ;)
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@Squirrel98 No worries I try not to play minors in role plays either way so that works out fine. Well way I figure it he can be maybe about 23, that's a good round age and the difference isn't creepily unrealistic. The age would determine how long he has been there for, I was thinking at least over five years or more with no chance of ever getting out. As for the reasons for him being there, could leave that as a surprise but add in some hints here and there in his bio to keep the ball rolling.

I can picture a very quiet person, doesn't talk to no one (beside Cissy) everyone is weary of him due to past incidents so everyone kind of gives him a wide birth. A character haunted by a mysterious past that drives him to find companionship in an eighteen year old girl. A secret violent nature perhaps, maybe even contributed to obsessive tendencies. On the outside he is almost emotionless, as if he doesn't even care about anything at all, extremely cold and decisive when he needs to be. But on the inside chaotic and unstable. This is one general idea anyways, I can probably think much more in depth after I catch some sleep been up 24 hours again.
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@Marko Ramius Character Sheet Code is available ;)
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