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Oh okay I think I actually read the whole trapping thing wrong because I was really tired lol. But looking over it again, and you explaining it makes sense now. Him being able to trap living things could come very in handing for him. What with him making potions. Haha yeah I think if he could create the human would be a little weird =P I like that you don't want to make his ridiculously powerful.

I think that summoning the human in the intro sounds good, seeing how it is where we are starting the roleplay instead of part of the actual back stories of the characters.
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I am going to make him the trickster. The one who is out for his own skin and no one else's. The one who will give out help if there is something in it for him but usually it turns out to not fully be what the other person wants. If that makes sense.

That was my thought too. ^.^
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Haha Rumpel's a trickster and Belle's a thief! They sound like they could make a perfect pair don't they! Oh I like the idea of him being a trickster though, and having to get something out of helping someone. After all. All magic comes with a price dearie ^_^
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What about Hook? What do you have in mind for him? I really like how our characters are turning out for this! I'm really excited! Yes, magic indeed comes at a price!
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Mhmm well Hook is turning into a fun loving yet protect big brother type, which I hadn't planned on actually happening. But he is pretty fun. I decided to actually make him a lost boy, instead of pan's brother. Tiger Lilly is in the story (because I actually loved her in the movie) and as of right now he hasn't became the Captain yet. I have a bit of a headache so I haven't written on his story today though. And I'm trying to decide if I should have his hand cut off like the story so he can really be called Hook lol.
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Awe! I'm so sorry your head hurts. :-/ though Hook sounds really awesome!! I think the protective type and the lonely, ignored, and rebellious girl will work well together!
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I'm glad you think so :) I do plan on him being the Captain for sure :) He would be more than willing to protect Ariel though! I'm loving writting his story now that I figured out how I want it to go. That thing you said about switching pan and Hooks roles was so much help thank you for that by the way.

What do you think about the hand though, I really need help choosing what to do. Because I like the idea of the hand being cut off, but I like the idea of it not as well.
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I could see that as the way that they meet! Ariel having to run for whatever reason, and she finds a ship on her way only to end up on Hook's ship and in need of protection. It could be kind of sweet and cute! I am glad that I helped. I just thought it would be cool if Peter Pan was not who everyone thought he was ^.^

I am typing on my computer, it feels so nice!!

As for his hand, I say cut it off. The imperfection could be kind of cool and be something he can struggle with in his image of himself. Something Ariel could help him over come ^.^
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Awe that would be a very sweet way for them to meet. And my Hook would of course go out of his way to protect a lady in trouble for sure :) Oh I'm still working on it but Peter Pan is not who everyone thinks he is that is for sure.

Whoop whoop I can only imagine how nice that much feel after all week on your phone lol.

Alrighty!! Sounds good! Thank you I just needed someone else's opinion :)
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Would Hook protect a mermaid? Or would it be better for her to hide who she is? I'm so excited to read about hook!!! You have no idea! ^.^

I could totally see Ariel helping him come to terms with his missing hand. ^.^
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Hmm well I think there were mermaids in Neverland, though I never thought about bringing them up. Though I wouldn't think that he knows about Ariel at first when she runs to his ship for protection. Unless of course the person she is running from says it to him? I don't really know if he would be as welcome of her on his ship if he knew she was a mermaid. But even if he was told, he would protect her at least while she is on his ship ^.^ If she played on his sense of honor though he would likely keep her protected until he left the port. So that would give her time to make him like her either way. Haha my headache finally easing up I might work on it a bit before I go to bed.

I can totally see it too. Though as she is Ariel, I can see her being fascinated his hook haha!
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I'm not sure how I'll play it out. I might have her hide it and let it be like a betrayal when he finds out. If I wait for him to find out until he has fallen for her, it could cause a lot of drama. I could even bring in prince Eric and have her end up running into him if Hook sends her away... Then he would have to come get her back. It could be fun. ^.^

All the possibilities!! Yay for working on Hooks back story!!! ^.^

Yeah, I could see her fascinated by his hook as well! I could see her playing with it all the time. Lol
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Mhmm I like both the idea of her lying and telling the truth, though it would be funny if she did betray him and ran into Eric.Then I think either Hook would have to safe her, or try and win her back. It would all depend on how you twisted prince Eric around really.

Haha I could see him finding it strange, her playing with his hook at first. Lol.
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I think that is what I will do! I'll have her keep it from him because she was raised to hide herself from humans. So she hides it from him thinking he wouldn't help her if he knew. Then what I do with Eric will depend on how hook and Ariel develop. ^.^

I bet he would find it strange, he will probably find her strange! Lol
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Sounds like a good plan to me ^.^

And let's face it Ariel wouldn't be Ariel if she wasn't strange, though hook will likely enjoy her strangeness I think. He will probably like her because she is strange more than only other reason. Lol
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And Hook is finally up!!!! -Does a dance than sleepily crawls in bed-
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Yay!!! I really like what you did with Hook! ^.^ it was a fun read. :)

I cannot wait to start writing on Rumpel again! I think you will really like what I am doing with him. :)
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Yay! I'm glad you like him! I was really tired when I finished it, so please over look any spelling errors lol.

Oh I'm so excited to see what you have for Rumpel!! Like I'm probably more excited to read about Rumpel than you were to read about Hook. Lol.
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I didn't notice any mistakes. ^.^

I'm excited to show you Rumpel! I think you are really gonna like him. :)
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Okay that's good, than if I made any they weren't bad enough to notice ^.^

I'm pretty sure I will like him a lot. Rumpel is such a great character to work with. I even used to love his actual fairy tale, the beauty of him though is that he is so powerful that you can do so much with him. And since you are such a great writer I can't even imagine how you are going to twist him.
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