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On a different note, did you guys want the "answer" to Wesley/Westbound or are we good with it being kind of up to interpretation?

Admittedly, I kinda want the answer, but at the same time, it's nice to leave it up to interpretation! I'll see what the others say

Oh, and I'm gonna be dropping out of this RP with Morgan now that Wesley's catharsis is wrapped up ;-; I'll come back with a more fleshed out OC in the future, but for now I'll just be spectating. (I really can't think of anything for him and I'm. very busy atm and would like to focus on just one or two rps for now). It was lovely RPing with y'all though, Sirpa and Teresa are awesome
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@Tlazolteotl Oooo yeah, I want to know what you had in mind for Wesley!

Also, with Vicis/Teresa, it would help to have hiders showing what the characters perceive lol. I also love chaos as long as I can navigate it somehow πŸ˜… I know for me, I don't want Sirpa and Damien to perceive each other because that will end up confusing me. I'm gonna have Damien not perceive Jay but Sirpa will. For her, she's only going to perceive human/humanoid characters

@Auragreedia Totally understandable! It was fun RPing with you! Morgan is a cool character. I'll look forward to seeing your writing again sometime! 😁
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@Auragreedia Aw... sorry to see you go, but I understand. Also thank you, you were literally the first person who showed their interest to this RP, so I can say that your support is what made Catharsis come into existence. So again, thank you.

If you're okay with it, can I get feedback for this RP in general? Things you liked, disliked, think can be improved, and/or anything that comes to mind? You can PM instead if it makes you comfortable.

Don't be a stranger, and I hope I get to see you again soon! (If you need help brainstorming ideas, you know where to find us!)
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@silver21Gotcha, so Sirpa and Damien will also not be perceiving each other πŸ“ Can they perceive all the other characters though? (which I should probably ask the same question to you too, @Stanifly)
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@Auragreedia Aw... sorry to see you go, but I understand. Also thank you, you were literally the first people who showed their interest to this RP, so I can say that your support is what made Catharsis come into existence. So again, thank you.

If you're okay with it, can I get feedback for this RP in general? Things you liked, disliked, think can be improved, and/or anything that comes to mind? You can PM instead if it makes it comfortable.

Don't be a stranger, and I hope I get to see you again soon! (If you need help brainstorming ideas, you know where to find us!)

I'll come back eventually, don't worry! Again, it was super fun to play out with everyone and I'm keen on bringing back a more fleshed out character next time around

For feedback, I liked how you did Wesley's catharsis in general (the club symbolism, the visions, etc), it was super interesting and fun to explore. Also love how you incorporated the nickname I gave him into the story too! Although, I think you could give more freedom in terms of exploration? Maybe give a more detailed layout and whatnot, although I understand it's the first catharsis we solved, so keeping it simple is fine.

Otherwise, that's most of the feedback I got. You're an amazing GM, and I'll just tack this on, I always pictured your pfp as like. the default keeper in everyone's catharsis LMFAO
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We'll hold you to that!


Thanks for the feedback, I'll keep that in mind πŸ™‚β€β†•οΈ

You're an amazing GM, and I'll just tack this on, I always pictured your pfp as like. the default keeper in everyone's catharsis LMFAO


Aw shucks, you're kind, thank you 😊 And actually it kind of is the default appearance of the Keeper πŸ˜†

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I'll come back eventually, don't worry!

yay!! t'was fun RPing w you so I look forward to your return :)) and also honestly even if Morgan wasn't a fleshed-out character, he felt fleshed out to me, in terms of his mannerisms and dialogue. you did a great job making him seem complete!

@Tlazolteotl yes, I'd be interested in knowing what's up w Wesley too πŸ‘€

@Stanifly If we do go with this, I'm thinking maybe the easiest option is to use the hiders and explicitly tell us what the others do or do not hear from Teresa and Vicis.

in that case, I'll do hiders. I'd say for now that Teresa atm can perceive the chars there were alr present when she arrived + Jay, and Vicis can perceive Damien, Jay, Silas, and Aelvira.
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@silver21Gotcha, so Sirpa and Damien will also not be perceiving each other πŸ“ Can they perceive all the other characters though? (which I should probably ask the same question to you too, @Stanifly)


I'm gonna have Damien perceive Vicis, Silas, and Aelvira like just to keep it simpler for me and then Sirpa will perceive everyone else.
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@silver21 @Stanifly @Auragreedia You guys are largely correct!

Wesley/Westbound grew up pretty isolated. His mother was the bread winner of the family and worked a lot. That usually meant Wesley was often under the care of someone else when he was little, but once he hit a certain age he more or less took care of himself. The father wasn't present for most of his life, and what he does remember is of him using corporal punishment on him "for no reason."

It is unknown if Wesley/Wesbound is actually on the spectrum, because he has never been diagnosed, however he (and other members of the maternal side of his family) has displayed traits of it. He has high Neuroticism, and as such, he's constantly battling with anxiety, depression, sudden outbursts of anger (though one could say this is more because of his father's parental methods), and low self-esteem/worth.

Another thing to note is that Wesley has a mixed background and actually knows more than one language. But that came with its own set of difficulties when communicating with others who only spoke one language.

All this combined, Wesley has struggled with communication on various levels and forms, and has learned, more or less to bottle things up. When he was younger, he expressed himself through the arts, but as he got older he had less time to do these things and eventually stopped doing arts all together.

While Wesley can be considered an introvert, he actually likes hanging out with people (he in fact strongly craves it when he hasn't spoken/texted someone for days), and he doesn't mind being in busy places, but this comes from extreme loneliness.




The massive disconnect with the conversations in his Catharsis is based on my personal experience, bumped up to 10. I've had many instances where I meant to say/write one thing, but then when I look back on it, I realized how it was taken another way 😭 One example is actually when I said:

On the flip side, is it frustrating to see bad grammar? ... Cause I may be guilty of that πŸ˜‚


In my head, I meant that I was guilty of using bad grammar... but then I realized later on that it sounded like I get frustrated at seeing bad grammar 😭

So yeah... communication's hard.
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in the interest of not leaving ppl hanging, I will post Vicis first! Teresa is coming soon 😭

@Tlazolteotl ahhh, that makes a whole lotta sense. that multilingual spice just makes wesley all the more interesting! I'd be interested in how his Catharsis progresses later on in if he ever makes a reappearance. Miscommunication: Electric Boogaloo (except we alr did a dance club thing... maybe the next time will be somewhere less overstimulating lol).

In my head, I meant that I was guilty of using bad grammar... but then I realized later on that it sounded like I get frustrated at seeing bad grammar 😭

if it helps, I understood it as the former when you said it at the time 😜 personally I'm always worried about over-explaining in my own attempts at avoiding miscommunication. the worst is when ppl think you're thinking too much abt it when you're just trying to make sure that everyone's on the same page πŸ₯€
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@Tlazolteotl Thank you for sharing!! I get the communication thing too lol similarly to what @Stanifly said with being worried about over-explaining. I often ask people β€œdoes that make sense?” and some people apparently think I believe they aren’t smart enough to follow me when in reality I think I am incoherent hahaha

I also interpreted your comment as being guilty of using bad grammar lol but also I think it adds to creative storytelling! I use bad grammar on purpose when I talk with friends irl to get the vibe of what I want to say just right 🀌

I like how flushed out Wesley is! I definitely didn’t expect him to be that detailed since it was just a demo and I am pleasantly surprised. Guess that’s what makes a good RP scenario 😁
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personally I'm always worried about over-explaining in my own attempts at avoiding miscommunication. the worst is when ppl think you're thinking too much abt it when you're just trying to make sure that everyone's on the same page πŸ₯€


similarly to what @Stanifly said with being worried about over-explaining. I often ask people β€œdoes that make sense?” and some people apparently think I believe they aren’t smart enough to follow me when in reality I think I am incoherent hahaha


Gasp Samesies!



I've also had instances when I over explain, and others still misunderstand 😭

But I'm glad that wasn't the case for my bad grammar comment πŸ˜€

I'm glad you liked Wesley! I hadn't considered bringing him back, but maybe I should...
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@Tlazolteotl High key Sirpa would be thrilled to see Wesley again haha
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I am waiting to see if anyone else's going to post, but if not, I'll post something over the weekend.
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You know what's so funny is that I wrote out a whole post for Damien and apparently that only happened in my head and did not actually make it onto my laptop πŸ™ƒ
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I really, really, wanted to put "Student" as Vicis' occupation on his sheet. it just seemed funny to me. for the sake of avoiding confusion, though, I controlled myself.

in other news, new char sheet for the big worm snake dragon thing! :)
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Ooh, I do like big worm-snake dragon things!

Also, apologies if I haven't been saying much (if anything) lately. Been busy with post holiday chaos. Decompressing, trying to get back to a normal routine, taking down the Christmas tree, all that fun stuff (sarcasm).

Oh, and Happy Nude Deer to everyone! May 2026 be slightly more tolerable than 2025 was!
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no worries at all! hope you get to calm down from all the holiday biz.

happy new year! I'm sure 2026 will turn out fine... OR WILL IT?

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@BaronOBeefDip As one should after the holidays! A happy new year to you too!
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happy new year! I'm sure 2026 will turn out fine... OR WILL IT?



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