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The character looks good. But like Azure mentioned perhaps you should tone down the more edgy stuff. As for character name i can give you a couple of names, and see if you like them.
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The character looks good. But like Azure mentioned perhaps you should tone down the more edgy stuff. As for character name i can give you a couple of names, and see if you like them.

please do. Im trying to figure out what things to tone down, outfits an obvious one, and we are working on the name but what else?
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His backstory mostly. And perhaps some more weakness to his powers.
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understood, still would appreaciate name ideas though. will make the backstory less edgy. probably redo basically all of it
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@Eviledd1984 also understood will add more weaknesses
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Weaknesses:

Bright lights
Fire/heat

My brain ain't workin. Send any ideas you think would be a good fit
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Revised backstory: the family stuff partially the same, taken in by grandpa who ran a dojo.
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im really bad with names currently i have Iranon Valerius Sigismund. which i dont know how i feel about it


Don't sleep on simple names. If you're looking to go exotic, look up names and naming conventions that fit the heritage you imagine for your character. And more over, consider the genre you're writing in.

In short, don't feel like you need to reach for a name just for cool factor.
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Don't sleep on simple names. If you're looking to go exotic, look up names and naming conventions that fit the heritage you imagine for your character. And more over, consider the genre you're writing in.

In short, don't feel like you need to reach for a name just for cool factor.


that is good advice, but i got Iranon Valerius Sigismund from a random name generator. im just honesty really bad with names, and i seem to get in a bad habit of re-using the same name for all my OC's
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that is good advice, but i got Iranon Valerius Sigismund from a random name generator. im just honesty really bad with names, and i seem to get in a bad habit of re-using the same name for all my OC's
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Like I said, simplicity can be your friend on this matter. I usually run a search on Google for name ideas. Example: search 'German surnames' and pick out one that I like the sound or meaning of.
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Iranon Herbert Lovecraft?
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Also, there's no shame in reusing/recycling/carrying over characters. Given your submission here is comparable (in terms of power set) to the one you're running in Heroes Rise, carrying over the name would work just fine.
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@IAmTheIsland true, but after a bit i do feel bad about it
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