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Sweet! Hehehe yes Ari really likes her new lightning powers already XD
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Oh man, fights are going to be so epic...

Hey, do you think she could infuse Yerbol's saber with the lightning? That would be kinda cool. Combo, much? xD

Update on post: grading as usual(*sigh*), but on the home stretch. Will be posting near the end of your day :)
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Oh man, I didn't even think of that but that sounds AWESOME! :D definitely going to have to incorporate that into the next fight scene somehow mwahaha XD

no worries, no rush as usual :P
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I am so sorry to do this, but I have a lot more going on than I thought today. I'll post first thing tomorrow!
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No worries, don't stress about it! Haha I shall look forward to it whenever it gets here :P
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And bam! Trying to go super creepy. I've been playing through Resident evil 7, so I was a bit inspired by that.

I'll flesh out what they saw in my next post, so feel free to do whatever you want with Ari and the others :)
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Oooohhhhh maaan, we are DEFINITELY heading for super creepy here, wow O_O *shudders* I got a little feeling about what they might have seen but can't wait to see what it is XD

Will work on a post tomorrow as it's getting quite late here and I am beat haha but it'll probably be up before you're online again tomorrow your time :P
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Post is literally minutes away! XD I blame exercise, I went running today and it took me longer to get back than I thought it would (gah I'm so unfit T_T)

I didn't want to jump ahead much at all so you had chance to do the big reveal so I've kinda just tried to build on some speculation of why the ruins were down there, and then add to the overall creepiness we got going on XD
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Awesome! My wife is a runner and I am...a person that runs, so I understand! xD

Sounds great! Looking forward to reading as always :)

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I have not run in a shamefully long time...my lungs and my legs forgot how hard it was XD

Tah dah! *ominous music* XD
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Well, that was a willies inducing post for sure!

So...ok, I've been struggling with this, but I think it might be interesting if...well, I don't know if you'll like it, but here goes:

I want Yerbol to get captured by the Xiis.

Now let me explain why:
-The Xiis are still few in number and need strong figureheads. Illesia(our female Xiis baddie) identifies the capture of both Aria and Yerbol to draw out the "most powerful" of society (ask me to clarify if need be...hamlet has my brain all >_<)
-With the Xiis basically concentrated in that one location, the odds are stacked against all of them making it out alive. Yerbol, being Yerbol, would want to sacrifice himself for the group to make it out alive.
-There's also the draw of Illesia to Yerbol because...well, if you haven't guessed it, she's rather in touch with her physicality. She would see him as a way to begin reproducing even more powerful Xiis(seeing as they're already hybrids) and...well, she would see him as an object to be used(man, this is super dark xD)
-Yerbol would also be able to tip off Aria where he was at and bring her wrath upon the Xiis xD

Think this would fit? Let me know if I'm crazy and then I'll post accordingly
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Wahahaha glad I could keep the whole creeping thing going! :P

...Would I be a terrible person if I said I actually really loved this idea as a plot point? XD I mean, Ari is gonna hate us for sure
and she is probably gonna LOSE it after it happens (Force help that Xiis lady when Ari gets her hands on her mwahahaha XD) but heck yes for this! *evil cackle* but plot wise this is a GREAT idea O_O Like you say I mean, they're in a sewer literally FULL of Xiis, they don't know the layout of said sewer at all, and even though there's not that many Xiis yet I'd bet there's still more Xiis than the six of them could realistically take on at once....it makes sense that not everybody's gonna get out of there and certainly that those that do are going to probably get bashed about a bit in the process of it

*bounces excitedly* Yes, thumbs up, brilliant, let's do it! XD
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Yessssssssssssssssssssss

Done. Give me until tomorrow? My next post is going to be super long and emotional, so I need all my brains for it xD
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Awesome! Mwahaha

And no worries, as always no rush, whenever it gets here it gets here! XD I shall look forward to it! :D
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No peeking! Almost finished!
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There we go!

I can't wait to see Ari take Illesia down xD
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Ooohhh man these guys are brutal! I feel sorry for that poor other dude O_O

Mwahahaha Ari is gonna kick some butt for sure! XD just to recap so I make sure I keep us going in the right direction, they end up having to leave Bol behind and then come back to rescue him later after they've regrouped right? o.o

Will have a post up tomorrow probably, wanna make sure it's a good one :P
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Yeah, so basically we can have Ari and Havoc(and someone else who's GOING to appear in the next post! xD) get off world, seeing as the Xiis would want to reactivate other stasis pods their brethren were located in. Seeing as Illesia was one of Renso's most "worked with" Xiis(I'll explain that soon!), she remembers vaguely where a couple of the other stasis pods are. The one she remembers clearly is on Coruscant, which is where they'll be headed next.

Yerbol could tip off Aria about their location once he regains consciousness, seeing as Illesia can't exactly detect their bond.

Sound ok?
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Sweet, sounds good! I shall look forward to meeting our new NPC as well XD
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Ended up being a kinda long one, sorry ;A; xD

You better ruuuuunnn, Illesia, cause Ari is hella angry and she's coming for you as soon as she can actually breathe slash walk again XD

Hopefully that was believable enough as well, I don't imagine there are chances of any doctors being left alive so they'd have to Macguyver (hope I'm not the only one who remembers that dude...does that make me old? o.o) it and get back to Zinuthra or something with their new buddy's help?
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