[OOC] Star Wars: Forged By Fire (KOTOR)

[Lucky Knight]

@Dark Wind -- Take all the time you need.

[Gwynbleidd]

Alright, apologies for the delay. Haven't been able to get in the right mood but I'm writing right now.

[Lucky Knight]

Here is the alternate character I proposed in my PM yesterday. Hopefully he works, but I'm open to re-tooling him as necessary. And definitely let me know if you'd prefer I proceed in a different direction!

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Rennet Haru Kyne

Basic Information
Name: Rennet Haru Kyne
Age: 35
Sex: Male
Theme Song: youtube.com/watch?v=8N21t5DTmlw

Appearance
Under normal circumstances Rennet is not a man most would remember; he dresses plainly and usually without much regard for the fashions of the day. He grooms only as much as he must; he nearly always sports a healthy degree of stubble and a head of close-cropped red hair to reduce the effort required to maintain his appearance. Dark circles undercut his eyes and there is a gauntness to him that speaks of other sorts of neglect (or reckless addiction), but where most in his position would have a pale pallor he is tanned and otherwise has the appearance of good health. Blue eyes the color of midwinter ice are set below thick brows, and seem to never cease drinking in the sights around him.

Beneath the outwards signs of self-disregard are a different set of truths. He is extremely well-built, lithe but firmly muscular. He bears a vast array of scars and poorly-healed wounds across most of his body, including a rather distinctive scar over his heart that suggests a brutal attempt on his life that didn't quite succeed. Rennet carries himself with lethal grace despite the languidity of his movement and is never far from a weapon if he can help it, though it may not always be obvious where that weapon hides.

When able, he goes about fully armed with a set of blasters on his belt and slung across his back. He also possesses a set of segmented body armor fashioned by those who knew their craft and could afford to charge handsomely for it – dark green plates and a darker pressure suit to match, with a helm and hoses to ensure he could survive in the void of space if things take a serious turn for the worse. He wears it rarely, though, and prefers to be unencumbered when able.

History
Rennet's youth was unremarkable. No history of abuse, no tragic inciting events, nor any grand quests of revenge motivated him or set him upon his path. He grew up in a family of moderate means not far from the surface of Coruscant and lived the life of one in the shadow of the grander world, unable to afford the kind of lifestyle he saw in the holovids but generally indifferent to his lack of means. He showed little interest in most things that children cared about, save perhaps the sports played amidst the alleyways and wider plazas below the dazzling lights of the upper city.

The moment he was of age he enlisted in the Republic's armed forces and was promptly dispatched to quell an uprising on a distant world not long after passing through boot camp. A peaceful resolution to the civil strife proved impossible and Rennet soon found himself in armed conflict with citizens of the government he'd taken an oath to protect … and found that not only did it not bother him, he actually rather enjoyed the fight.

Each passing year brought him more and more assignments to dangerous places. Lacking any sort of compunction, he proved himself well-suited to the kind of worlds that most soldiers hope never to go, and it made him stronger. He learned much of his craft in those years, and was inducted into a different sort of role when his aptitude became obvious to his superiors. The Galactic Republic Special Forces helped to hone his skills even further and provided him with a number of opportunities to work with the sorts of individuals that citizens of the Republic were better of never knowing. More time passed, and by his tenth year of service he figured it was time to move on and made his way free of the people who owned him.

Going into business for himself was one of the best decisions he'd ever made. The work was slow at first – odd mercenary jobs, smuggling, and protection rackets mostly – but soon blossomed into a much more lucrative trade when word got around of his efficiency and his willingness to do most anything; as an independent contractor his resume expanded to include everything from personal “requests” to freelance work for the GRSF, and even for those he once called enemies.

Presently Rennet is wrapping up a contract in the heat-soaked grasslands of Cathar. He plans to be on his way as swiftly as able, but plans often have a way of going awry. Especially now that the galaxy is about to be dragged into a war the likes of which it has never known...

Personality
In that same vein, the prospect of galactic war is an exciting one to a man like Rennet. He finds himself easily bored and in need of distraction when not actively working a contract or being shot at, and that does tend to take a toll on him. He's fairly easy-going, however, and usually very open to new experiences where he finds them. In life, he's found that no culture in the galaxy has a monopoly on wisdom or on the perfect way to live … so why not try a little of everything and incorporate the elements which work?

That easiness and open-mindedness often give others the impression that he's warm and friendly, however, and that's something of a mistaken impression; while he's quite capable of playing the part when necessary, his default mode of conduct is one of internal reaction and rational response, and he usually doesn't empathize with anyone but himself unless prompted to try.

It makes him a good soldier and an excellent assassin, but rather impotent in the arena of romance or friendship … though his inclination towards the latter pair is spotty at best.

Likes: Guns, music, travel, new experiences, freedom of movement.

Dislikes: Formality, social events, popular culture, obligation.

Skills / Abilities
Rennet has trained in most of the standard weapons of the galaxy and many which are significantly less common. He's an excellent marksman and is proficient at close-range combat as well, though is much less comfortable as a pilot or when forced to participate in squad-based tactics. His abilities with a blade are nothing to scoff at but he'd be hard-pressed to compete with anyone who had trained extensively in the use of swords – especially those able to wield the Force as well.

Strengths: Rationality and quick-thinking, leading to clever tactics that some might struggle to keep up with. He is fast and mobile and rarely takes the time to slow himself to the pace of others. Has no illusions as to his lack of heroism and will not hesitate to do what must be done.

Weaknesses: Drink and stronger intoxicants. Vices which might not tempt a nobler or more conscientious man are a weakness for Rennet, though rare is the occasion when it actively interferes with a job. He also lacks empathy, which can sometimes hurt him in situations where diplomacy might overcome a misunderstanding.

[Gwynbleidd]

You guys are wonderful. Just had to say. Lol.

[Sohtem]

Whew, finally got that up, had a lot of fun writing up Iri's post, hopefully the fight scene is believable enough, tried my best with it and felt it came out pretty good

[Lucky Knight]

A bit rough and rushed, but I've capped Kujata's adventure for now. And put some work in on Rennet. Will hopefully have something up for him in the next couple of days.

[Lucky Knight]

...you four are the weakest of your clan if that’s the only way you can get a woman.

@Sohtem

ICE BURN

But seriously. These guys are basically the worst human beings ever! I think even Mandalore might've given these dudes a skeptical eye ... and maybe an execution to boot. Except the "if they’re old enough to fight, they’re old enough to die" guy. He seems to get it.

EDIT: Should've said "sentients"!

[Sohtem]

@Lucky Knight Yeah, well I figured that not all the of the Mandos would be so honor bound like the rest and some of them would be scumbags, gotta throw a little flavor in there, no fun with all of them being just combat hungry.

[vancexentan]

@Lucky KnightCan they use a ice heal to recover?

[Gwynbleidd]

At last, I am at work. It's literally been one thing after another lately.

Anyway, enough talking. I HAVE MANDOS TO KILL!

[Sohtem]

Sorry that took so long, been having a bit of writer's block the past few days, as a result I don't feel it's my best, but it's okay at the very least, no doubt I made a few errors that I'll be correcting later, hehe.

[vancexentan]

I've been under the weather the past two days and just got back into college.

[The Dow Dragon]

Woah, I've found my people. I love KOTOR ad Star Wars in general. Are you guys still accepting?

EDIT: Nevermind, can't fit it in. Have fun you guys!

[Gwynbleidd]

Whenever you can find free time Dow Dragon you're always welcome to join! @The Dow Dragon

[Gwynbleidd]

@Sohtem TOTALLY feel you on writer's block. Always feel like stepping away and re-figuring out the direction we want to go with the characters always helps out.

[Gwynbleidd]

@vancexentan

No worries, take your time especially if things get busy in college. Lol, who am I kidding, it definitely will. Real life first.

[The Dow Dragon]

@Dark Wind Good news, I can join! I'll get started on a character.

[Gwynbleidd]

@The Dow Dragon

WOO! Time to grab the dancing Ewoks!

[The Dow Dragon]

@Dark Wind One question, what year is it? The early raids of the war are in 3976 BBY while the main conflict starts in 3964 BBY.

[The Dow Dragon]

Name: Sola Jansen
Race: Zabrak/Human
Age: 19
Sex: Male
Theme Song:



Appearance:



Sola has an intelligent and sharp look about her, she is slim but if one looks closely her body is toned with muscle. Her sharp features and piercing sapphire eyes make her look much older than she actually is. Her black hair, blue eyes, attractive features, and more lithe build is thanks to her human father. Her muscle, orange skin, natural tattoos and face markings, and horns are thanks to her zabrak mother. Sola often wears a brown and black tunic with a robe of a dark color over it.

Like This

Sola's Tunic

The fabric around the arms and legs are tighter to her limbs, as she dislikes the unnecessary extra space.

Her lightsaber hilt looks like this. Its double bladed and purple.

Hilt

Background/History:

Sola Jansen was born in 3989 BBY on a space station in the outer rim. Her mother was a Zabrak mercenary and her father...well no one knows who her father is. No one really knows much about her family. Her mother came stumbling into the Jedi citadel with a 3 year old Sola, told the Jedi Sola's name, then dropped dead right there in the hall. Much to the Jedi's relief, Sola turned out to be strong in the force and they started to care for her.

Sola grew up as an arrogant, charming kid who had a presence, even as a child, that commanded respect. Teaching her humility and love and the peaceful ways of the jedi was a difficult task indeed for the masters. She was the popular one among her peers, talented in the force and saber play and despite her arrogance and fearlessness, Sola had a soft and protective spot for her friends and peers. As she got older, Sola began to display more of an aptitude for physical combat and saber play than the force. Her instructors began to consider the possibility of instructing her in Juyo, the most ferocious and darkest of the lightsaber forms. There was much objection of course, Juyo was a style that teetered on the edge of darkness and would be detrimental to Sola's already aggressive personality.

The instructors pointed out that even though the young Zabrak had an aggressive and voracious personality, she had never lost control or gave in to her darker impulses and always showed honor and mercy to her sparring opponents. Additionally, this form could channel her darkness into a weapon of light and teach her discipline. After much debate, they agreed that she would be allowed to practice Form VII. Sola built her lightsaber during her Padawan trials and her creation only caused further doubt within the masters. A double-bladed saber, an infamous model used often by dark jedi, with a purple crystal. The masters then decided that only a weapons master could train the young padawan, to teach her the ways of physical and saber combat and to instill in her the discipline of the light.

They chose Master Molindi Kaiser, Jedi Weapons Master.

Master Kaiser was a veteran of The Great Sith War and Sola's instructors were confident that she could train Sola effectively.

Sola and Molindi took to each other immediately and launched right into training. And Sola loved every minute of it. The challenge, the style of fighting, the double bladed combat, Molindi's views on life and the order. She was refreshed by everything, she felt so free with her master, no restrictions of the uptight jedi instructors. And as the years passed, Sola thrived and became stronger. Even at age 16, she was being considered as one of the more skilled warriors within the order. She still had trouble with things such as humility and complete detachment, especially with such a passionate personality and way of life. It was as if the force sensed this and it made everyone in her presence feel a certain way. Intimidated, impressed, whatever it was, Sola commanded a respect simply by standing still.

But even through all this, she never lost her soft spot for her friends and the innocent. And while traveling with Molindi through the galaxy and seeing all walks of life, she began to feel an affection towards the citizens of the universe, which was only rivaled by her disdain of those who prey on the weak. She had developed a certain fondness and respect for soldiers and warriors of all types, especially those who protect their home and their people (and after a night of passion with one certain soldier, which Molindi swiftly found about and put a stop to, Sola's affection for them only increased.) And yet despite all this, against the many expectations of her many instructors, Sola never allowed her emotions to compromise her duty, however strong they might be.

Sola passed her trials and became a full fledged Jedi Knight and certified Guardian at the age of 19, just a month before her tale starts. Many were impressed, not many became knights this young, but of course they expected nothing less of the exceptional Sola Jansen. She's currently traveling to meditate on her success and to think before she is assigned a mission.

Personality:

Sola is not what you call a traditional Jedi. She loosely follows the code of the Jedi, as she feels it detaches them from the people they're sworn to protect. Many of Sola's views are heavily inspired by her master, Molindi Kaiser. She loves fitness and is interested in history. As a Jedi Guardian, her connection to the force is more connective and combative rather than ethereal and contemplative. She's developed a strong affection for people over the years, especially her fellow jedi and warriors, who she can relate to sometimes more than her masters. She has overwhelming disdain for those who prey on the weak, despite not understanding those who refuse to fight or simply won't will themselves to.

Sola has a certain presence which is amplified by the force. But even without the force, many would find her intimidating or impressive. Combined with her striking sharp features and beautiful face, Sola is truly a sight to behold. She is known throughout the order as an exceptionally skilled combatant and as one of the few Jedi who use Juyo and a double-bladed lightsaber. She has surprisingly good control over her emotions and is able to hide what she is feeling from most people. Thanks to Juyo she can channel all her negative energy into the fight and use her negative feelings as a tool for the light.

Skills/Abilities:

Force Abilities:

Force Push/Pull (Advanced)
Force Speed (Advanced)
Force Persuasion/Intimidation (Intermediate, not conscious, just a by-product of her personality.)
Force Alteration: Sola can use the force to manipulate certain things about her body, such as the strength at which she fights, speed of her reflexes or how powerful she can wield her saber.

Form VII-Juyo (Expert)
Guardian Martial Arts (Advanced)
Double-Blade wielding (Advanced)

Strengths: Fearless, Intelligent, Charming, In excellent physical shape, Can speak the most common languages, Has excellent control of her emotions, Has the ability to inspire troops and fellow jedi to be fearless in battle.

Weaknesses: Impatient, arrogant, weaker in the more abstract ways of the force. Refuses to wear armor, making her a glass cannon.
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@Dark Wind All done!