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@Parfex

Will be editing this post to include information.
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Ok, I'm in!
And, I didn't get the notification for this. I must have left this website up on my page on my phone again. =/
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Do you have an event planned? Because we've given the reader a lot of mystery and back story. I think now would be a good time to have 'something happen' that rips our characters away from the information within the device and distracts them with a bit of action.
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@Din Wow. I was tired last night.
Rereading my previous post, I realize that it was lackluster.
@Endrance showed that it didn't make sense.
I fixed it now. We're going to do better! lol
(P.S. you are allowed to criticize my work. That's how I'm going to get better.) lol
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@Parfex Heard, I'll keep that in mind. Please do the same for me.

Do you want like super hero action or to get them going on the helicopter to go home?
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@Din What I really want to see is your skeleton for how this is going to play out. We are kinda 1x1 RPing Nyt's storyline and not so much Adrian's. Vega just needs to interact and fight to grow his powers so he can generate a portal for you.
So basically, you are calling the shots. But reading your chapter skeleton, we are around chapter 2 or 3?
...so next would be to find her dog or maybe interact with Din?

- If this were a marvel movie, I think there would either be a battle or a mission assignment or the scene would switch to what the main villain is up to.
What are you feeling?
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@Din What I really want to see is your skeleton for how this is going to play out. We are kinda 1x1 RPing Nyt's storyline and not so much Adrian's. Vega just needs to interact and fight to grow his powers so he can generate a portal for you.
So basically, you are calling the shots. But reading your chapter skeleton, we are around chapter 2 or 3?
...so next would be to find her dog or maybe interact with Din?

- If this were a marvel movie, I think there would either be a battle or a mission assignment or the scene would switch to what the main villain is up to.
What are you feeling?


Ah, the chapter outline was mostly meant for Din. She left Nyt alone after they met and didn't come back until years later to retrieve her. It was suppose to be at age 16, I believe or around there. How about a mission to gather something in space? :D
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Ah, the chapter outline was mostly meant for Din. She left Nyt alone after they met and didn't come back until years later to retrieve her. It was suppose to be at age 16, I believe or around there. How about a mission to gather something in space? :D


Sounds good. I can work that into my next post. Is there anything that would help Nyt in space as far as story goes? (A gem, alien tech, a shard from the mirror?)
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Sounds good. I can work that into my next post. Is there anything that would help Nyt in space as far as story goes? (A gem, alien tech, a shard from the mirror?)


She's on her own haha. Maybe the next file on the recorder is instructions on a simple shuttle? I'm sure you know more about that :P
Remember her old spacecraft from when she landed?
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She's on her own haha. Maybe the next file on the recorder is instructions on a simple shuttle? I'm sure you know more about that :P
Remember her old spacecraft from when she landed?


She's on her own? Then I'll probably make part of Vega's purpose in this RP tracking down the villain who killed his mom.
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She's on her own? Then I'll probably make part of Vega's purpose in this RP tracking down the villain who killed his mom.


That's perfect! I really didn't want to influence this entire rp :) We help each other.
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Okay, so, should i make a guest appearance thingy soon? :P
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Okay, so, should i make a guest appearance thingy soon? :P


Anytime you want!
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@Din
Is there anything else you want to do on the ship or are you ready to do a small time Jump forward?
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Go for it.
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What link?
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Okay then. I'm going to first tweek Aja's bio in this timeline.
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@Parfex
Going to post soon.
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So i think i may need to edit the CS just because Parfex said this is set in the future and not a different parallel universe??? im confused.
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