[OOC] Call of the Hunt [EliteCommander and Muttonhawk]

[EliteCommander]

I gave a short post. Need to go to bed now though.

[Muttonhawk]

Cool. G'night!

[EliteCommander]

Hmm, what should we do now?

[Muttonhawk]

We could skip forward to describe whatever Kaleeth wants to do to get more advice. You might have a lot of writing to do with that, seeing as its mostly between characters under your control. Other than that, unless there was anything else to do today, we could skip to the next day for the ritual.

[EliteCommander]

I wouldn't really have time to write a lot tonight. I think I'll write a bit more from Kaleeth's perspective.

And I am honestly not sure what to do with Kaleeth. I never expected her to be a significant character, so I have no idea.

[Muttonhawk]

Well, if you want to flesh her out some more, you could consolidate what you've developed about her into a hidden character sheet. That might help.

The arc I had planned way down the track to do with Janius' sleaziness has kind of been disrupted by this event no matter how it turns out. Unless Kaleeth doesn't come along and I turn him into an arsehole for a bit.

If Kaleeth does join, then you'll be managing a forth character for the foreseeable future and we'll have some arcs with how her relationship fluctuates with Janius and the pack. Kaleeth will certainly have plenty of development opportunities as she sees places other than Black Marsh and comes to terms with being a werewolf.

If Kaleeth doesn't join, then sure, there'll be tears, but by the magic of narrative we could have her come into the fold later on. She might decide to change her mind and come looking for the pack. Janius is going to walk away changed, but there's certainly some drama that could occur if a sufficient amount of time passes with him thinking he'll never see her again.

I don't mind either way though. Just get in her mind and make a decision that makes sense.

[EliteCommander]

In any case, I think you'll like the next thing I have in mind, after the thing with Ahnasha. It shall be interesting.

[Muttonhawk]

Do you have any more dialogue between Kaleeth or Janius, or do you want me to skip?

[EliteCommander]

You can skip if you wish. I need to go to bed. Goodnight.

[Muttonhawk]

G'night!

[Muttonhawk]

I think you may have mistaken Meesei and Kaleeth's names at the start of you last post :P

[EliteCommander]

I was thinking of focusing on the ritual for now, then the situation with Kaleeth after that. Should I move them to the ritual now?

[Muttonhawk]

Sure thing

[Muttonhawk]

Alright, so just to confirm, I need to write Sabine as experiencing flashbacks of past events that she regretted not doing differently? I've prepared four of them in advance.

Also, do they need to be in chronological order?

[EliteCommander]

Yeah, she gets to relive those events and change her choices. Meesei would be there as well, but no one in the vision would see her but sabine. Chronological order would probably make most sense.

[Muttonhawk]

I'm afraid I'm going to be occupied for a few hours. See you later!

[EliteCommander]

Talk to you later.

[Muttonhawk]

On second thoughts, the forth choice I had in mind is actually kind of redundant, so I think I'll drop it. Anyway, it's about a quarter to three in the morning here, so I will conclude the ritual later, methinks. G'night!

[EliteCommander]

Goodnight.

[Muttonhawk]

A bit busy today. I probably won't be able to get any more posts in.