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Goodnight.
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I wrote this one on the bus, but I had to send it during a work break. I think I am getting more used to the keyboard on this phone. G'night properly!
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I just got home. I'll respond as soon as I can.
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No rush. I'm about to get breakfast.
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Hmm...I get the feeling that we should play out more scenes with Ma'tanza if we want to pursue the angle of Tzirret being interested in her. They have gotten to know each other over the past week and a bit, but I'm not sure I have. Without knowing the more nuanced parts of Ma'tanza's personality, if she even has them, it makes it a bit difficult to say that Tzirret isn't just physically attracted to her and is confusing himself again. I mean, we could have Tzirret just be confused, but I don't know.
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There will be time for it during their travels. I especially don't want to skip entirely over the desert. If you want to do those scenes alongside the main one at any point, feel free.
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I'll see what I can do.
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I'm good to finish these scenes if you like.
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In that case, I'll need to skip to the next bit The few weeks of a journey to Senchal would not be eventful. In the interest of time, I think I'll take us to the point where the clan is some distance outside the city, and has been selling off everything they can to buy the food and water they need. We would be at the point where Meesei, Colors, and a few others are finalizing the deal with Colors contacts, then getting on a ship to go pickup the "slaves." If you want another scene to go on simultaneously, feel free.

Who do you think should be with Meesei and Colors?
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Fendros could pose as the representative of the fake client. Gallus might help as a fast talker as well. Anyone else would just be there as protection.
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I have to go to work in about fifteen minutes. A timeskip post will probably be a bit large, so a bonus phone post is not guaranteed.
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Yeah. I'm about done, so you'll probably at least get to read it first.
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Dahaha! You weren't joking about that quota for Tzirret, weren't you?

Also, I think you accidentally made S'nishi a Cathay-raht.
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Oh, yeah, I meant Senche-raht. One moment.
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Alright, goodnight!
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Goodnight.
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I have to head off in about twenty minutes. Probably no bonus post this time, so g'night!
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Goodnight. Next time, we can probably get everyone loaded on the ship.
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Sure thing.
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Just got home. I'll respond shortly. I think I'll have Fendros arrive back in my next one, as I assume those two scenes were not happening at the same time. He would tell everyone to start getting into position, right?
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