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Did we? I forgot if we have. If something happened in Two Towers, it'd be Yavanna trying to save Aragorn from the doom of the cliff. Guess she also had bad luck with falling of cliffs. Maybe the first fall here might make a bigger impact, then the second.

Yeah, they would be :) I was always planning of Yavanna to be growing in power.

If I go with the first one, which I am preferring at the moment. The second fall won't happen with Yavanna. Feel like this first one, gives her a bit more room to Develop. Either fall, would still effect Yavanna/Legolas the same way I think.
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Ok, then perhaps we should stick to your idea. I just re-watched the scene, and I figured it would be a good set-up.
Unless we get Saeril to fall with her. Hmm...
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I am glad you agree with it :) I was thinking that since Yavanna and Saeril wouldn't be on good terms, when Yavanna finds out the truth; as Yavanna would be hurt, angry and upset....Yavanna's fall would impact Saeril too. So, they could...fix their 'friendship' when Yavanna finds the group again by the mines.

Plus more epic reunions with the Fellowship will be included too. Of course, very warm/feely/sweet moments with Legolas of course.

If Saeril would go with her; it'd kind of defeat the purpose of Yavanna getting out of the situation herself. Which is why I didn't want anyone saving her/or falling down with her ect. If I didn't plan for her handling it herself...I would be ok with someone rescuing her...but sometimes she needs to get out of situations herself. If you know what I mean :) and that situation is the one, where I'd prefer if she didn't have someone save her/go down with her. So it can have the full impact...I am hoping it'll have when it happens and Yavanna gets out of it on her own.
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That's very true, on all terms. But, what about Kili? How would he be, after finding out the truth?
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I think he react almost like Yavanna. Of course maybe a little bit in denail, as he would think 'His' Delva wouldn't do such a thing...so he would be more confused, but also hurt and angry. As her orders to kill the Durin line came true...and only he's left. So he might have mixed feelings towards Saeril.
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But as they come to terms, after learning that she has been kidnapped, tortured, and brainwashed, they could come around show to pity and sympathy for her, as well as see her as a victim. Perhaps until they get to the mines of Moria.
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Yeah, it'll take them a while. Kili might get there first...after Yavanna's accident. And Yavanna might come to terms with it ect...when they reunite.
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Ooh! If Yavanna gains telepathic power, one of her visions might involve Saeril's past. Just a thought...
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That's a good idea :)
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Just the note, Saeril didn't actually speak in Black Speech at that moment; she only felt the urge to :)
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I might be tired, but can you remind me what happened next after the meeting?
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If I remember correctly. I think there might have been a goodbye scene of sorts (If it wasn't on the normal version, might have seen it on the Extended version), which we can include a goodbye scene/extra scenes in there if we want before they leave Rivendell.
I think then there was the start of the journey. Boromir/Aragorn teaching the Hobbits how to fight and the crows from Dunland scene.
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Thanks.
I don't particularly have an idea for a goodbye scene, but if you want to add one, that's okay too :)
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You're welcome :)

I think, maybe we could add in something along the lines of Elrond having words with Legolas. Legolas comforting Yavanna, maybe asking what she meant about her brothers (not sure, she told him the story), As for the Goodbye, I think maybe Arwen/Yavanna goodbye scene would be nice :) as she'd be worried for her little sister. So we got a few extra bits before they leave.
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Oh and I almost forgot. Bilbo/Frodo scene regarding the ring. Bilbo giving Frodo his sword (The stinger) and the Mithrel Shirt.
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I'm pretty much out of what to say for each of these scenes. Do you want to edit and move to the next part?
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Yeah sure, give me a mo.
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Edits are done :)
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I think this is the perfect time for a first kiss :)
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Oooh, well he's free to swoop in any time he wants :)
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