@AHeartlessNobody Is there anything you want to add to make this part more interesting to write? It's a bit of a slow scene by nature, but maybe we could throw in a storm or something else to give it a little more action ^^
@Summer I can probably add something in my post. We could do a storm, him being curious about something, or something else XD I'm thinking of making Evelyn good at some other talent (being that Toni's taking up the whole good at building role that Cassie used to have). Such as art or agriculture (perhaps she has a little flower or something in the home plane and a whole garden in another plane that she uses to grow veggies and fruits?).
Okay! I'm good with anything you want to do. At this point in the story, he probably wouldn't admit that he's curious about anything she does. She would probably just catch him staring at her xD I also like your idea of giving Eve another talent. Maybe in addition to what you had planned for her, she could also be good at singing or something musical? That would definitely pique Caeyin's interest, since Lunairans who knew music were few and far between (they would only use music for mating ceremonies)