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Looks good, except your character says “Christ” in his interview. Obviously not the most lore friendly reference.

I find no material issues with the character, however.
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Looks good, except your character says “Christ” in his interview. Obviously not the most lore friendly reference.

I find no material issues with the character, however.


Obviously I was referencing Jedi Master Jesus Christ smh
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<Snipped quote by Jackdaw>

Obviously I was referencing Jedi Master Jesus Christ smh


o well carry on champ
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Only one minor thing stood out in the sheet for us...

In the flaws:
"racist" wouldn't be right when the dislike concerns other species. The correct term would be "speciesist".

Fix that, and you can consider your sheet approved.
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Only one minor thing stood out in the sheet for us...

In the flaws:
"racist" wouldn't be right when the dislike concerns other species. The correct term would be "speciesist".

Fix that, and you can consider your sheet approved.


Consider me accepted then
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