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Anyone who's in and hasn't posted yet, feel free to do so.
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I'm working on my intro post. Should hopefully be up late tonight cause I'm working all day.
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Should have my post up by tomorrow.
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Would of loved to have seen our take on Lion king 2: SImba pride but alas:

3: Sword in the stone
2. Notra dame
1. Pride lands .... Maybe. On a serious note. Toy story
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Basic Information:
Name: Rex Darkheart
Age: 18
Gender: Male
Homeworld: Old Bastion
Affiliation (light, dark, or other): light

Physical Information:


Casual Attire: Same as Appearance
Battle Attire: Minus the keyblade


Personal Information:
Personality: Rex is a shy, yet caring person. because of the travesties in his life it is hard to open up to anyone and yet he will listen to peoples problems and try to help them the best he could. He always feared that because of his dark past and twisted keyblade, he would be rejected by the light and be thrown into the darkness. Even with all his doubts, he still will do everything in his power to protect his friends and anyone who asks or doesn't

History: Rex was born in a small part of the Old Bastion with his mother and little sister. His father was killed in a robbery when he was only seven and his sister was six. He has always tried to provide for his family. Doing odd jobs to help them get by and to take care of his little sister and mother. One night he wished that he could take all the sorrow away, all the pain and bring back the happiness he once had. He also wished for a way to get back at the robbers that took his father away from him. That night when he fell asleep he had a strange dream. A light calling out to him and telling him it could help him achieve his wish. When he awoke he was standing near the broken fountain that was a few blocks away from his home. He saw four bodies lying on the ground. When he walked over to them he saw that two of them where the robbers that killed his father. Large wounds in the middle of their chests and the other two made him drop the weapon to the ground. His mother and little sister laying there, their eyes showed no life. It felt like staring into an empty abyss. The same voice that he heard in his dream echoed in his head: I promised to make your dream come true. You got your revenge and your family now knows happiness. They are with their loved ones as we speak. All Rex could think was: this wasn’t what he wanted. He wanted them to be alive and well, to have the happiness back before his father died. The voice echoed again, I can’t bring back the dead so this is the only way I could help. That weapon helped you and it can help others as well. Rex turned to where he had dropped the weapon he held onto. A strange key like blade. The Keyblade, the source of all power and devastation. Pick it up and become a warrior of the Keyblade, but you must choose your path. Light or darkness? The voice echoed. The Keyblade disappeared then reappeared in his right hand. Rex knew he must choose the path of light, even if his Keyblade was twisted and dark looking. Maybe he could protect the world and atone for all his sins.

Other Notes: because of everything that has happened to him, he has recurring night terrors of a dark figure standing over his mother and little sister with glowing blood red eyes and a sadistic crooked smile

Battle Information:
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Abilities:
Thunder
Fire
Cure

Other Notes: in battle Rex tries to use his Sword of moonlight, unless he must use his Keyblade.
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Hello Rex,

Thanks for joining us. I've spoken a bit with Kurai about your sheet. The only thing I'd like to see from it is some more fleshing out of your character's personality. Also, you don't need to list Dodge Roll as an ability; maneuvers as mundane as that are a given, at least in my book.
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I've got to step up my game, you guys are unleashing more then three paragraphs already.
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I'll just say I agree with Wayward, everything seems fine for the most part, Rex. I'm on the fence about you having Aero so early on, but since you're a light apprentice and Wayward doesn't have a problem with it, that's fine. I will ask you to please spoiler your pictures though, because they are very large and obtrusive. If you're unsure how to do that, look at the coding guide underneath your post when you go to edit it. Thanks!
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Basic Information

Name: Nimbus Weatherly
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Homeworld: Old Bastion [Eden]
Affiliation: Old Bastion/Light

Physical Information

Appearance: Link

Casual Attire: Same as Image

Battle Attire: Same as Image

Personal Information

Personality: Nimbus is a smart, good hearted, whole full guy that has big dreams and a big heart. He values life and is a large lover of animals. He has a curious heart and loves to learn and ask questions. He has lived most of his life under his parents guidance so he can be a little naive when dealing with others. He’s completely honest and often times think others are mostly completely honest as well. He’s careless and trusting of others, especially if those individuals are aiming to be his friends. He doesn’t hold grudges and is mostly incapable of hate. He has a completely optimistic, positive and understanding sort of personality and always knows there is some reasonable way to do something or some rational explanation for everything. Despite being fairly scholarly, he’s still gullible and ignorant of the world and that is mostly due to his low experience with dealing with people.



Other Notes: None

Battle Information

Weapons: None

Abilities:


  • Fireproof - Cannot be burned or singed by fire magic. He is completely immune to being negatively harmed by flame based spells, attacks or naturally occurring fire. Is burn proof and maintains an equal temperature while under the effect of fire.


  • Fire - Able to conjure flames and launch them at a target.


  • ~Fireball: Supplementary application of fire. Able to create fire in both hands to create a moderately sized fireball. This fireball holds great destructive capability, able to burn and hit with some impact together. The fireball is a superheated flame, thus it is somewhat hotter than regular fire and greatly resists cold magic. The Fireball’s trajectory can be manipulated and altered.

  • Fire Assimilation - Power to, willfully, absorb nearby fire into the body to bolster the power of spells. The increase of magical spells depends on how much actual fire is absorbed into the body. Absorbing fire also increases the magical capacity of the user, rejuvenating their lost reserves, and it replenishes health too, providing very minor healing even with large amounts of consumption. Fire Assimilation allows the user to draw power from fire and add that power to their own bodies. Unfortunately, this only applies to naturally occurring fire, and not magically created or supported fire, and it must be drawn from the source.


  • Iceproof - Cannot be frozen, suffer from frostbite or suffer cold weather injuries. He is completely immune to being negatively harmed by blizzard spells, attacks, or naturally occurring cold. He maintains his regular body temperature even when in extreme cold and doesn't suffer from being cold himself.


  • Blizzard - Able to summon magically frozen water and launch it at a target with some force.


  • ~Icespike: Supplementary application of ice. By focusing ice magic in both hands he can create a large, longer ice spike that is made from condensed, focused cold magic. This spike can be fired out at a target. It consist of such a heightened cold that it is highly resistant to fire magic. It shoots swiftly and holds a great deal of penetrating power.

  • Ice Assimilation- Power to, willfully, absorb nearby ice or snow into the body to bolster the power of spells. The increase of a spell’s magic depends on how much actual ice is absorbed into the body. Absorbing ice also increases the magical capacity of the user, rejuvenating their lost reserves, and it replenishes health as well. Snow, and snow specifically, provides better healing and can heal minor and some moderate injuries should the user be laying or surrounded by snow. Ice Assimilation essentially is a power that draws naturally occurring ice into the body of the user to draw power from and add that power to their self. Unfortunately, this only applies to naturally occurring ice and snow, and not magically created or supported ice or snow, and it must be drawn directly from the source.




Other Information: Possesses what is known as Overlimit. This is the power to bolster magical power by some means. Due to his magic type, his Overlimit is by absorbing natural elements, such as Fire and Ice, in their natural, unedited states. He can absorb the nearby fire and ice to bolster his own magic, however there is a limit to how much he can do this for. Without endangering himself, he could absorb fire and ice to double the effectiveness of his spells and, should he desire to triple or quadruple their effectiveness he will critically harm himself. That is the greatest limitations of his assimilation techniques. *A longer definition of Overlimit can also be found in the bio for additional clarification.

He cannot use his Ice Assimilation and Fire Assimilation on enemy spells yet.
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Wayward said
Hello Rex, Thanks for joining us. I've spoken a bit with Kurai about your sheet. The only thing I'd like to see from it is some more fleshing out of your character's personality. Also, you don't need to list Dodge Roll as an ability; maneuvers as mundane as that are a given, at least in my book.


Ok, I changed the Personality trait, is there anything else you guys needed?
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Hey guys, sorry I haven't posted. I got a nasty virus on my laptop that I can't fix and the fan broke as well, so my computer just went to shit level. I'll try to post today if I can. What'd I miss while I was gone?
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Durn,

Kurai and myself have been deliberating and feel that some of you're abilities are a bit strong for starting off. In particular that he's starting with immunity to fire and ice magic.
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Just going to echo Wayward here. Starting out with complete immunity to two of the most common magical elements is simply too powerful. However, having them start out as small resistances and develop from there would be fine. I'm also a bit wary of Fireball and Ice Spike. These are obviously meant to be more devastating versions of Fire and Blizzard... which would be fine if we didn't state explicitly in the OP that spells should stay to the tier one level at the start of the RP. Again, those are things that your character is more than welcome to learn over time, but starting out with them is excessive.

Lastly, overlimit is a little strong. At a base level doubling your power (ala D-Mode and L-Mode of Kengo and Kotaro respectively) is fine, though even doubling the power has a backlash in Kotaro's case (for Kengo I assume it's more along the lines of a 1.5x power boost, though I could be incorrect). However, right off the bat being able to triple or quadruple your character's power, even "at risk" of his own life (which I've seen many RPers use and not take even a bit seriously, not saying you would, but I'm just wary), seems a bit strong. Again, maybe this level of overlimit could be developed over time?

The main idea is we want you to be around the same level of power as the other apprentices, especially the ones on your side, and we want you to have room to grow. Look at Matilda and Kengo. Both have very moderate ability lists. By comparison, your character dwarfs them in terms of power. Please consider rectifying our concerns in order to be accepted into this RP.
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Haha, my character is actually quite weak compared to almost everyone elses characters, but that's what I wanted him to start out as. Kinda like a Ventus, ya' know? Still needs to learn how everything works and such, the only advantage he has is speed, but even then it's not that helpful.
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Haha sorry CorruptedShadow, I meant to mention Iris as well. But yes, you get the idea, the bulk of character (and power) development should be done in-character. The characters on "my" (the dark keybearers) side are all pretty weak as well, but that's the point.
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Heh, it's all good, you didn't have to mention Iris. It's pretty obvious that he lacks any real power at the moment. As for the dark apprentices, I thought they would have been stronger, but ah well.
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I wanted everyone, Dark Apprentices included, to start out around the same power level. Being on an even playing field will make certain events throughout the RP much more interesting, I assure you.
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I'll bet. I just wonder how everything will end.
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You know, it's only just dawned on me, but does anyone else think my character seems just a little bit like Ven? He's the youngest of the Light apprentices his advantage is speed.
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Kurai said
I'll just say I agree with Wayward, everything seems fine for the most part, Rex. I'm on the fence about you having Aero so early on, but since you're a light apprentice and Wayward doesn't have a problem with it, that's fine. I will ask you to please spoiler your pictures though, because they are very large and obtrusive. If you're unsure how to do that, look at the coding guide underneath your post when you go to edit it. Thanks!


ok, I spoilered my pictures and took out the Aero from the abilities.
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