Well before I talk about your rebuttals I have to apologize about how I regarded your CS. It was less of an assessment and more like unreasonable chiding. That is unfair for you because I can see that you mean well and because most of the reasons why I have trouble with the CS is because of the idea of this RP. It is an idea that grants you freedom as it takes it away. The latter being shown in that you say you are having difficulty working with a character you know nothing about. I have to say that this is certainly a much different way to look at an RP and perhaps I'm not leading you all in the way I should to make your difficulties less difficult. Because of that, I believe we should work together so the RP doesn't take a severely wrong turn. My behavior today hasn't really allowed you to do much teamwork though, and for that I am sorry. And I certainly didn't mean to give the impression that I wanted you to leave.
To the rest of you as well, I've gotten busier since I started this RP. At about the same time as the OOC opened, actually. Because of that the idea of tying in all of your current and future characters with the MC is really stressing me out. If you could lend me some assistance on that matter I would be very grateful. I know that's pretty much my only job right now but I've lost so much inspiration and I don't know why.
Well then, back to the subject matter.
-Expanding on her would be nice considering that we would have to work alongside her but I guess you have already provided enough information to that end. To be honest, that wasn't a very important critique.
-Thank you for that one.
-I can appreciate that logic, actually, but perhaps trickster wouldn't be the best way to describe it. I feel like trickster is a different mentality then what you might be going for here. If you were to think through the kind of mentality of someone who is jealous of another, perhaps you may come to the conclusion that they feel like the other is a thief of sorts. In this case, MC thinking Nora is stealing her success. You probably have a different take on that but I still feel like trickster has a more destructive mentality behind it.
HOWEVER, it would be very easy to make the trickster idea more believable if you added a specific of some sort. Perhaps say, Nora partakes in mischief to relieve stress so she can perform better in whatever task she wishes to optimize. Even if the mischief has no harm to anyone a sibling rivalry would make her representation a bit more malevolent. That way her goal of becoming a Pediatrician isn't made any less believable AND it gives her a little quirk that makes her seem less perfect to me. Any tie-in between the Nora and Kelnorah whatsoever, no matter how flimsy would be just fine. Especially since the jealousy involved would make a flimsy tie much stronger.
-I should probably hurry up on my end for that, seeing as how I can easily change the MC on the fly before the IC happens and putting her out there would probably help you all out immensely with character drawing.
-Yes, and you should continue to think that way. Now that I am not acting like a dirtbag (Or tired in the case of your PM previously) I can say it's fine to tinker with the MC a bit. I don't have too much to work with personality wise so that would be fine, I could have a little sliver of a foundation to build on later ^^
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I just realized I haven't talked about MC much. I was considering the idea of MC sympathizing with the various homosexual and bisexual characters without being either herself. Would it be believable for her to be so because she is a huge tomboy? She has trouble conforming a societal representation of a woman, or just with society in itself (The second could explain her engrossment in fantasy). And I'm already running out of words... But yeah, if you have ideas that change that, replace it or update it, please tell me.
