[OOC] The Scrolls of Aerusya - The Throne of Evil

[Fallenreaper]

Tzarima said
Captain, sorry put I feel I should point this out. It seems like De is responding to Erahja, and Erahja is a Rakasha (kind of like elder scrolls Kahjit) and they can't really be mistaken for elves. She is also older that De so I'm not sure the 'girl' part is right either. You might have had her confused for her (adoptive) brother, who is the elf^^

For future reference, is it visibly notable she's older-or some cases older looking- when compared to some of the other PCs? I'm not aiming to be disrespectful, really, but it's not easy to tell an anthro's (Which is what I see Rakasha in a visual aspect) age by appearance alone. Old age is easiest because they are near end of their life and rather old in which they would slightly be bent from age and their gait slower, not to forget sometimes their fur is dull in appearance or whitening. Unless it's different with Rakashas then none of my logic applies and pretend I never said anything while I melt back into the shadows, completely embarrassed! XD

It's possible De, ICly, mistaken her for being younger then she actually is so he thinks girl rather then woman? I've had PCs do that before to me and while I know better, I tend to write from their perspective so most things written like labels and such, tend to be how they see things. For example, Angel doesn't see Mathias as just an owl, it's her brother. Sid isn't a dog, but a puppy and though they are the same, one is a younger/immature reference of the other. :p It could that he also got the PCs mixed which I've had it happen a few times to me.

Also, Neat picture here by an Artist called Chichapie!

[Tzarima]

Yeah, I probably should have put that in parenthesis or something, as a side note since yes, age can dafinately be mistaken and I tend to write with perspective too. I mainly wanted to clarify the race, which can't be mistaken, as soon as possible to avoid further confusion. And I assumed that in this case, it was just a misunderstanding of who the 'young elf' in my post referred to, so I brought up both points. I did not intend to blame De for not guessing right^^

And to answer your actual question: I wouldn't actually think Erahja would give the impression of being a young girl myself, but that might not have been clear from my CS. Hard for others to know if I haven't written it. For reference I would say that there is absolutely nothing in her appearance (or behaviour or expression and so on) that suggest that she is younger than she is. But as you said, it would probably be hard for a non-Rakasha to pick up on either way.

[Fallenreaper]

Tzarima said
Yeah, I probably should have put that in parenthesis or something, as a side note since yes, age can dafinately be mistaken and I tend to write with perspective too. I mainly wanted to clarify the race, which can't be mistaken, as soon as possible to avoid further confusion. And I assumed that in this case, it was just a misunderstanding of who the 'young elf' in my post referred to, so I brought up both points. I did not intend to blame De for not guessing right^^And to answer your actual question: I wouldn't actually think Erahja would give the impression of being a young girl myself, but that might not have been clear from my CS. Hard for others to know if I haven't written it. For reference I would say that there is absolutely nothing in her appearance (or behaviour or expression and so on) that suggest that she is younger than she is. But as you said, it would probably be hard for a non-Rakasha to pick up on either way.

No problem, I know I've had case where key PCs of mine had label others as say girl or boy due to the fact that's how my PC sees them because of age difference or choices/ behavior compared to theirs. Some players tend to mistake that as my PC referring to their PC as actually being that young when it's really more deeper then that. It usually ends up tying into PC development that will end up their label girl or boy will some day shift into young lady or man depending on what happens and story development.

Angel though is one if those fun PCs that she can make herself a total fool or do something random which would be OC for most yet for some reason, it fits her rather well. I can't explain why or how but it does.

[MacabreFox]

Oh my god. I have to change the old man's name! When I was busy searching for a name for him, I totally forgot about Angel's brother, Matthias. Haha, that was a really bad error on my part.

[TheCaptainQ]

Ohh crap sorry lol..maybe I should review the cs's again

[Fallenreaper]

MacabreFox said
Oh my god. I have to change the old man's name! When I was busy searching for a name for him, I totally forgot about Angel's brother, Matthias. Haha, that was a really bad error on my part.

He's Mathias, I think and well it's spelt similarly, it's pronounced a bit differently. However, lol, since the old man is already in and Mathias is yet to have his name mention, Macrabre, it might be easier for me to change his name. Maybe to one that's more elven sounding? If you've not changed it ICly then I can change Angel's brother's to erase confusion and save you (as well as few others) some editing. Though, I would enjoy any name suggestions or ideas if anyone has any?

And not Dog food, Rtron. :p

[Tzarima]

You wouldn't really have to change it much to get it more elven sounding (though there may be different opinions on what that means), if you want something similar but that wouldn't be confused with the old man. Like Merthias or Matthalan or some other combination. I think elf names are fun like that.

[Fallenreaper]

Tzarima said
You wouldn't really have to change it much to get it more elven sounding (though there may be different opinions on what that means), if you want something similar but that wouldn't be confused with the old man. Like Merthias or Matthalan or some other combination. I think elf names are fun like that.

That might work out then, Merthias seems a rather good fit.

-Add on-

On a side note... could someone interrupt Zal from being ready to cook Angel? Or he's going to be getting a face full of owl in my next post, lol, and likely Angel will be shouting at him not to hurt her brother. Which might end in someone possibly getting hurt. XD

[MacabreFox]

Fallenreaper said
He's Mathias, I think and well it's spelt similarly, it's pronounced a bit differently. However, lol, since the old man is already in and Mathias is yet to have his name mention, Macrabre, it might be easier for me to change his name. Maybe to one that's more elven sounding? If you've not changed it ICly then I can change Angel's brother's to erase confusion and save you (as well as few others) some editing. Though, I would enjoy any name suggestions or ideas if anyone has any?And not Dog food, Rtron. :p

Whatever you're comfortable with, also, Matthias won't appear in the RP after this.

[Fallenreaper]

MacabreFox said
Whatever you're comfortable with, also, Matthias won't appear in the RP after this.

You never know...lol, even as a GM, I thought the same about a NPC until that character had played a bigger role later on. Either way, I'll change it just to be safe and it does sound slightly more Elven then Mathias.

[MacabreFox]

Hey guys! sorry about the delay! I've been very busy this week because of school and work. I thought I would have time last night to get a post up, but I don't think I'll get one up until tomorrow. But definitely tomorrow.

[MacabreFox]

Post up! Once again I apologize for the extreme delay, I had a lot of RL problems arise.

[Fallenreaper]

MacabreFox said
Post up! Once again I apologize for the extreme delay, I had a lot of RL problems arise.

It's alright, RL>RP, mainly with in cases of problems, sickeness and other important matters. XD

[MacabreFox]

There was just so much school work @.@' and I had to go to my job on top of this. But thanks for being patient (:

[Fallenreaper]

MacabreFox said
There was just so much school work @.@' and I had to go to my job on top of this. But thanks for being patient (:

No problem, I know what it's like to be a GM and still balance RL. It's not easy and any patience from Players help a lot.

[MacabreFox]

All right, what's the word guys? How are we doing?

[Fallenreaper]

MacabreFox said
All right, what's the word guys? How are we doing?

I didn't know if I'm allowed to go or just wait for Nightwing or someone else who hasn't post to do so. I also edited Angel's brother's name and made some grammar corrections in the CS to read better.

[MacabreFox]

Well, the scene is focused on Angel now, so yes, now it would be your turn to go, seeing as how Rhaedin and Sevine were the last to join. Zal asked Angel a question, so it's time to answer it. Nightwing's post would come after yours, as would mine and everyone else included, but it doesn't have to be in a strict posting order.

And I also re-read your post (:

[Fallenreaper]

MacabreFox said
Well, the scene is focused on Angel now, so yes, now it would be your turn to go, seeing as how Rhaedin and Sevine were the last to join. Zal asked Angel a question, so it's time to answer it. Nightwing's post would come after yours, as would mine and everyone else included, but it doesn't have to be in a strict posting order.

And I also re-read your post (:

Alright then! *cracks knuckles* I'll get to work! ^-^

[Fallenreaper]

I'll post it tomorrow after I read it thought and make it flow more smoothly. XD