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Bleach: A New Dawn

Kurisa said
As Kaizo looked down at the table he had failed to notice Ritsuna death staring him then suddenly a frying pan smacked into his head causing his hands to shoot up and hold his head "Ahhh!! What the hell?! I learned my lesson no need to hit me!!" As Ritsuna hit Kaizo Juki's eyes widened slightly before closing, a small smirk forming on his face as he thought for a second...the scene reminded him of something but that was something left for another time "" Juki smiled to Ritsuna then opened his eyes as he looked to Kaizo. By now Kaizo knew the drill...if he did wrong he'd go without...it was harsh but it worked most of the time...

Ritsuna

Ritsuna rested the wrists of her mitted hands on her hips as she looked down at Kaizo with a glare. "You better have or else another one is coming your way!! That's how it works here!I Upset my Master, you get whacked over the nogen' with my frying pan!! Unless you want a serious concussion you better do as Master says, when Master says it!! Got it!!" Her usually high-ish voice deepened and roughened as Ritsuna yelled at Kaizo. She was completely serious when it came to her Master and would not take any crap from anyone who shows even slight disrespect towards Juki. She was completely devoted to Juki and would easily die for him if the need arose, but she believed that it would never get to that stage as to her, Juki was the most powerful, greatest, cutest and most wondrous being out of the whole and all multiple universes.

The moment Juki opened his mouth, Ritsuna looked at him with a happy expression, changing her stance so that she stood with both her hands on her lap, listening closely to him. "Yes Master" She gave him a bow out of respect before raising as he continued to talk, her eyes slightly widening in surprise. "R-really Master? You'd like for me to join y-you? Yes! I-I mean... Certainly Master, it'd be an honour to have dinner with you~" She grinned in delight before quickly leaving the room to place her oven mitts back in their rightful place, returning to the dining room shortly after. "Thank you for the invitation~" She took a seat in the middle of the long dining table as Juki and Kaizo sat at each end opposite each other. Turning her towards Kaizo, Ritsuna's delightful smile immediately dropped as she glared at him again. "You heard Master." She spoke in a warning tone before turning to Juki with the delightful grin instantly returning.

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Kurisa said
As Shiro chugged down more bottles he heard a familiar voice then looked over in the direction it came from seeing it was Nishiki "Yeah sure...but I don't know why, most if not all people are scared to drink around me...then again...you are drunk as shit, so whatever I guess" Shiro then turned to the barkeeper and spoke "OI! GET ME MORE DRINK!" The barkeeper stopped and slammed his hands down on the counter and looked him right in the eyes "" Shiro looked at the guy then grabbed his collar and pulled him just over the bar and slammed his head into the barkeepers "You speak to me like that again and I'll fucking gut you and get the drink myself! you are nothing but an ant to me and I'm having to try my hardest to not crush you so unless you want your guts on the floor and your head mangled under my foot I suggest you serve me my damn drinks! And for that little act of stupidness the drinks for me and my drunken 3rd seat will be free have you got that?!" Shiro then threw the man back then spoke "NOW GET ME MY FUCKING DRINK!"

Nishiki Kalemoru

Nishiki smiled as she sat down next to Shiro. "Pffft, I know what you're like drunk! You destroyed my favourite bar last time! But the others are puff-balls, we know what you're like by now, enough to be able to dodge your bad moods and all of 'dat stufffff" She laughed at little while talking, taking another swig of her bottle before watching Shiro's little scuffle with the bar tender. "Yayyy! Free Drinks!" She cheered, clearly not effected at all by the hostility hovering in the air. "I want the most alcoholic alcohol you've got right now!" Nishiki demanded before looking at Shiro with a large grin, her cheeks tinted with a faint pinky colour due to her steeping further into the land of the drunks. "Haaaave I ever told you that you are the bestest Captain in the whole world!! You'd never think that I'd work under a Kenpachi!! I sure as heelll would never think that would ever be possible but I've done it! Hehehehe~ I'm soOoOoOo Freeeee!!" Nishiki giggled as she threw both arms up in the air in a joyful mood, accidentally pouring the rest of her alcohol onto the floor behind her stool as she still held the bottle. Putting her hands back down, she tried to take another swig of her drink. "Huh?" She stuck her tongue inside the opening of the bottle, wiggling it around inside the glass to try and find the liquid that was meant to be inside. After a few minutes, she pulled her tongue out with a quiet popping sound. "Naawww! My drink's is finished already?! Bar dude! Can you give me what I asked for pleeeeease!" She continued to grin as she waited.

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Fumio Hari Kouineji

Fumio continued his journey back, taking his time. Looking down, he chuckled darkly at the blood smeared on the right arm of his uniform. "Hehehehe~" 'Oh my~ It's been so long~ And it feels... So Good~....' He mused in his thoughts as he walked through the forest, making sure he was out of anyone's path or sight.

Fumio shunpo'ed once he was close enough to the outer walls of the Seireitei, appearing inside his room. Slowly locking the door, he walked to the closest mirror and took a good look at himself, grinning. "My my ~ Look at how messy you are Prince~" Chuckling to himself, he walking into his bathroom and cleaned himself up, taking a shower while he was at it. As he changed into a fresh uniform, Fumio smiled his usual charming smile, as if nothing bad had transpired within the previous hour. That was when he unlocked and opened his door, on his way to find Chie to see how she was doing. Of course he knew that Aya would tell Chie as soon as she returned what happened, but that would be when Fumio would use the same excuse he had been using the whole time, which was indeed the true, but excluded some key elements... Such as the fact that he enjoyed killing who he had to kill and he wasn't doing it purely because it was his Clan's tradition.

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Axel said
*Scratches head* Well you're apart of that lot, meaning you deserve it as well but my art skills are a bit ummm....terrible so yeah XD In all honesty, I never would've joined on day three(Yes I still remember) if I didn't notice loyal people like Expllo and yourself so thank you and him and also Kurisaaaaaaaaaa!!!!! ^_^ Of course it is XD I tend to implement multiple writing styles so that things will feel fresh from time to time. That's good and I'm pretty sure any sane person would start to act differently after witnessing something like that XD Surprisingly, Rinkei was something like that in his younger days but he had someone strong enough to calm him down XDAlso, I have a new char and his two subordinates located on pg. 782. So whenever anyone has the time, do they mind looking over them? I've got sleep so I'll reapear at a later time. *Vanishes*

Oh don't worry, it's the thought that counts ^_^ Thank you :) And hey, no problemo xD I'm glad you stuck around with us ^_^ Well damn, I don't even know how to implement different styles xD Then again, you're more talented at this so I'm not surprised xP And yeah, I'm pretty sure they would XD But Oooo~ something for Captain and Lieutenant to bond over ^_^ Fumio's stronger than everyone that used to be around him, but it was his devoted loyalty to certain people that calmed him down, or more only suppressed him xD And done ^_^

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Axel said
Three Characters Here

Okay, so the last two are accepted since they have no moves yet xD But when you do add moves, let us know.

Hiezogawa Perstruda

Shikai Skills

1) Acceptable
2) Right soooo if a bit of the stain got onto skin, that part of the skin disappears? xD So like, limbs could be erased? Can Zanpakuto's be erased too? o.o
3) Acceptable
8) Acceptable

Non-lethal Zanpakuto Skills

Rebirth - Welllll, if you want this skill, I think there should be a limit of how many times it can be used o.O Like, it can only be used 3 times and that's it since this skill means the guy wouldn't be able to die xD Which is OP since, no matter how strong a character is, there must be atleast one way for them to die. I know that looking at some of the characters in the RP *cough* may give the impression that some of them are invincible but that's never the case xD They all can die too :P

Way of Travel - This should have a post cooldown o.O Since this could be spammed badly xD Like have it so that he can use it up to 4 times in 1 post or back-to-back posts but then once he has, the cooldown is 3 posts. This is my take on this move.

Rewind with the hourglass - Is there a certain amount of time that he can stay in the past for? So if he exceeds that time (Post wise) then he'd be trapped in the past? o.O Maybe the hourglass would take 5 - 6 posts before it runs out.

Light at the end of the tunnel - I'm cool with this ^_^

Soooo here's my opinion, we can work something out though if there's a skill that you need to stay as it is for story purposes only ^_^

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Kurisa said
As Rio agreed to be Shou's mentor he grinned then threw his hands in the air and began running around her, almost entirely ignoring the fact she would be serious at times. He didn't care for that though right now, the first step of his dream started today and this women would help him get there which would hopefully do her some good. As Shou ran around Rio he then stopped behind her and leaped up onto her back grinning "Yeah! Number one Mentor and Student! we are going to beat some baddies! then we going to have fun!!" Shou then began laughing a little, un aware of the fact that what he was doing may annoy Rio

Rio Okotaru Darishimo

Rio smirked as Shou grinned, but then he began running circles around her which made her shake her head. [i]'I've got to keep in mind that he's still a child... So, I guess there's nothing wrong with letting him play around a little before reality gets tough on him...'[/b] She let out a sigh before speaking. "Shou, time to stO-AGH!" Shou had jumped onto her back unexpectedly which surprised her more than annoyed her. "SHOU! I Get It Now Get The Hell Off Of Me!" Rio yelled, growing a little frustrated with Shou's actions. She instantly felt a little bad for yelling at the kid.. but if he couldn't handle her yelling, he wouldn't be able to handle her training.

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Axelicious, just to let you know, if your new characters haven't been looked at by the time I get back home (I'm currently shopping xP) Then I'll look at them and sort them out for you ^_^ I have a feeling that Fumio and Aya may have to fight these people xD Souta may join in too~

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Axel said
Well no problem commissioner Abigail XD *Bows* Thank you milady(And thank you so much for the badge you have already graced us with. Not to mention the new badge along with the new title so thank you very much as always Abigail ^_^). From what I see, it doesn't look like anything Rinkei wasn't expecting from the jump XD All those that attempt to shroud their emotions almost always seem to have something frightening underneath.You know you like the hate XD

No problemo Batman :3 And I do it because you lot deserve it ^_^ No need to thank me, if anything, I thank you for being such a huge part of this RP and making it so Awesome to be in ^_^ It's a joy to read your posts! :P And well, good ^_^ Fumio will shortly return to normal again xD But I don't know how Aya is going to act with him from now on xD

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Zane620 said
Aya pouted at the fact Rocky hit Fumio. "Hey now. You two should talk it out like adults, everyone's done something bad in the past, hence why i said leave it in the past." Aya said yet Fumio didnt seem to be listening, as quickly as he came back up, he had quickly killed rocky, leaving Aya speechless as she stood there watching what Fumio had done. "Femme...." Aya muttered as she lowered down to Souta, who seemed to be mad himself and he had a good reason to be. So when Fumio left Souta yelled out in anger, which made her look at him, giving him a tight hug. "So was that what your childhood was like? Makes me feel bad thinking mine was shit." Aya said to him. "You know, when Chie was young and she was upset I always told her that to feel better she should just let it all out. If it was anger, or she was sad. Simply letting it out would make her feel better. So go ahead, I promise I wont tell."

Souta Fushimaru Hari

Souta gripped his own hair harshly as he quietened his voice, however he began to shake a little.... Aya had then began speaking but Souta was too paralysed to move, but was still listening...

'Don't cry Souta.... J-just d-don't... It shows... j-just how w-weak you are...' Souta's bottom lip quivered as he took in a shaky breath before attempting to talk with a quivering voice. "U-unf-fortunaly.... b-but, this is not even h-half of what we g-go through..." Souta kept his eyes squeezed tightly before Aya gave him a tight hug. This surprised him greatly.... it was nice and unbelievably comforting... he couldn't recall ever feeling like this before... "T-Tatsuki"

"Oi, Fruity, come help me with this" Tatsuki was sat on a bench in the middle of a community park located inside the inner walls of the Hari Clan. "And if I don't want to?" Souta raised an eyebrow at the guy, stopping in his tracks as he was walking past Tatsuki before being called. "Just quite and help me, I've got to give this poem to someone, f-for someone else obviously, tomorrow... And anyway, I was wondering if it was... erm... 'lovey'... enough.... It's for Furoshi-kun to give to his crush, a-and I'm writing it cause, ya know, I'm all smooth and stuff" Tatsuki gave a little chuckle at the end of his sentence. Souta, however, narrowed his eyes suspiciously at him. "It's for Aidona, isn't it?" A faint blush began to show on Tatsuki's face, but instead of denying it, he just gulped and nodded. "I-it is..." "Well then, I'll help you out. No need to lie to me Tatsuki, I already know who she fe-I mean... you make it obvious that you do like her alot eheh.." Souta rubbed the back of his head sheepishly before sitting down next to Tatsuki. The latter looked at Souta with hopeful eyes. "You know? Good or bad? I won't ask anything else!" Souta rolled his eyes with a slight smirk. "Number one, now let me look at this" As soon as Souta grabbed the poem out of Tatsuki's hands, the guy began punching the air joyfully with a wide grin. "HELL YEAH! I'm so happy Fruity!!-" "I know, I thought you would now stop! You're attracting attenti-" Souta was interrupted by Tatsuki ruffling his hair. "Eheheheh! Thanks bud!" The guy continued to laugh as Souta pushed him away and fixed his hair. "For the poem or information?" Tatsuki continued to grin, his spirits officially heightened. "Both"

"H-He's gone..." A tear slipped from Souta's eyes, followed by another and another. "I c-can't take this much longer... T-to think that me and K-Kazuhiko were close wi-with him... All of them..." He moved his arms around Aya, hugging her back as he silently cried on her shoulder. "... My sister... I miss her so much..." After a while of silence, Souta finally spoke, his voice was quiet but audible. "Sh-she was the first to die because of this... the murderer... he haunts me everyday... everywhere I go... I know he's following me.... watching me.... I can feel his presence.... forcing me to remember that d-day..." Souta took a moment to inhale and exhale another shaky breath. "I-It's not about how bad our past's were.... It's about how we handle them.... you're much more stronger at that than I am.... I envy that..." Releasing Aya, Souta looked away, wiping his eyes. "I-I'm sorry about this... hmm..." His eyes dropped in defeat. "... Let's head back... I need-..." His eyes had wondered to Tatsuki's body before he closed his mouth. Walking over, he looked down at it for a moment before speaking again. "... In fact... you go on without me Aya... I'll catch up later..."