ADamnFiddle

A Certain Variegated Pseudepigraphum [Toaru IntCheck]

Maybe interested fam.

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

@Over Illusion That should do it, Chief. All of the issues you and Fiddle had found in my Servant CS have been dealt with. What do you think, is the Knight in Rusted Armor finally ready to reside in the Character Tab?

@Gummy1295

Yee go for it fam.

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

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3. The idea of "30 points of damage" has been rewritten to "Damage as if Lancer's Strength parameter were A+ instead of C (B after the transformation)."

Lemme know what you think, Chiefs.

@Gummy1295

That would be an effective value of 60, not 100. A+ implies a double modifier.

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

Remember that if anyone needs help with their application, I'll be around more often now.

@Over Illusion Just to be clear, Mental Pollution at A is fine by you? Also, I mentioned that the Gigantic Beast Hunting skill represents a vital part of Lancer's legend, so I was wondering if I could merge that effect with his Noble Phantasm.

Magic Resistance is definitely going down to D, and I apologize for misrepresenting the Type of his Noble Phantasm as Anti-Unit. This is due to the lack of info on the wiki, which for example, actually classifies Unlimited Blade Works as "Anti-???". Go figure.

As for Eye for Art... I'll re-read the skill list to see if I find something important enough to switch it off, otherwise, I'll be keeping the skill, knowing its original connotation.

EDIT: I don't know, man. I can pull a lot of things off this Heroic Spirit's barber basin--err, head, but nothing really seems to hit the mark. The revised sheet is in page 8, if I'm not mistaken.

EDIT 2: Revamped his Noble Phantasm to an Anti-Fortress Noble Phantasm, granting additional buffs when targeting structures.

Don Quixote

Name: Alonso Quixano (Don Quixote)

Class: Lancer

Alignment: Chaotic Good

Appearance: (I'll post this later when I have more time)

Weapon: La Mancha Spear ~ This is just a rusty spear. Under the effects of his Noble Phantasm, it can transform into an enchanted spear with enhanced durability, making it practically indestructible and increasing its damage by 30 points.

Personality:

Don Quixote is almost completely insane, but he is actually capable of backing up his strange manner of viewing the world with solid arguments. Even if anyone were to argue with him regarding his delusions, claiming that the knights in the stories that literally drove him crazy were all but non-existent legends, he would try to explain the concept as vehemently as possible to the point when the other person either gives up due to frustration or loses sight of reality trying to comprehend his line of argument. Below his madness, however, lies a sense of sentimentality and nobility that takes form when he's not busy crashing his reality against that of the rest of the world.

History:

Don Quixote, born Alonso Quijano, was once a bored noble from the La Mancha region of Spain with enough money to last him the rest of his life, and bookshelves full of knightly romances. He bore an unnatural attachment to books of this genre, and eventually he read so many of these stories that he went nigh-insane, believing firmly that he was a knight-errant in a world without chivalry.

Together with his faithful sidekick and "squire" Sancho Panza and his noble steed, an old barn nag named Rocinante, the three go out on misadventures all around the country of Spain searching for fame, glory, and the heart of the love of his life, a "princess" he calls "Dulcinea del Toboso."
Parameters:

STR: C
CON: D
AGI: D
MGI: D
LCK: B

Class Skills:

Magic Resistance (D) - Standard for the Lancer class.

Personal Skills:

Mental Pollution (A) - Due to Lancer having gone mad after reading too many knightly romances, his mental processes have been distorted significantly. At this rank, his chances of being affected by mental interference magecraft are very low. Also, Lancer's logic is impossible to comprehend to anyone not possessing equal or higher ranks of Mental Pollution (Unless a Command Spell is used, of course.)

Eye for Art (C) - Having spent so much time engrossed in reading knightly romances, Lancer has a chance of figuring out the true name of a given Noble Phantasm without witnessing it being used. This all applies only if said Noble Phantasm belongs to a knight (as in the case of Noble Phantasms like Excalibur, Durendal, Rhon... etc.), and hasn't been forged after the publication of the first edition of the literary piece he was summoned from, in 1605.

Unyielding Will (A) - Throughout his many misadventures, many people from all shapes and sizes had tried and failed to wake Lancer from his knightly delusions. Even when actual knights and nobles assaulted him or tried to take advantage of him, his resolve was firm. At Rank A, Lancer possesses resistance against physical and mental damage. However, said resistance will not hold against attacks that aim at beguiling others - such as illusions. For example, while there is resistance against damage from "falling into a pit trap", no resistance will be in place regarding "making a pit trap appear as solid ground with an illusion.

Noble Phantasm:

Spearheading the Renaissance** ~ La Mancha Spear

Rank: B+
Type: Anti-Fortress Noble Phantasm
Range: 1-20
Maximum Number of Targets: 30

Description: Lancer's spear glows a bright blue, granting him a temporary 1-rank boost to all of his parameters until his mana drops to 0 (Applying the upgrade to C-ranked MGI) While this Noble Phantasm is activated, Lancer's spear can be thrust to launch a beam of blue light from its tip that causes damage to Servants from a longer range with an extra 30 points of damage. Additionally, should this beam come into contact with a magical structure such as a Temple or a Workshop, the beam will explode, causing damage over a large area.

*I wanted to note that Don Quixote de La Mancha is considered to be the first novel of the European Renaissance, forged by the mind of Miguel de Cervantes as a satire/mockery of culture in the Middle Ages, with Quixote himself becoming a parody of the concepts of chivalry and nobility that defined previous literary pieces... essentially, Quixote's very existence is an assault on the knights' honor.

**This effect hails from the aforementioned windmill scene. I removed the idea of fighting giants because the skill is rather useless in this case, but I figured that if it's useless to slay giants, then he can destroy buildings instead.

@Gummy1295

I'll discuss it with the mod when he gets on.

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

I'll be backing off right now...

In other news, I still need permission before I can pass my Servant application to the Characters tab.

@Gummy1295

I'll be sure to look into it.

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

The related video thumbnail managed to do the trick. I know you didn't mean it, but I appreciate you for inadvertently killing me off swiftly.

Gotta Go Fast

@Gummy1295

The fire rises.

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

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B-But Fiddle-senpai! It's too soon! *blushies*

Ironic post but still KILL ME

@Gummy1295

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

Sorry for the slowness to get my second character done, the end of the year is a bit of a hard time.

I'm working on the CS but things aren't coming out as well as I'd like. Probably, I'll scrape my initial idea and do something else for a Master.

@Kuroyomihime

Aww I kinda liked that sheet. But yeah do you m8. I was kinda busy for the last few days, which is why I had my attack dog deal with a lot of the issues.

But yeah, dont worry about it. I'm sure the majority of people were busy.

That being said, I will likely want to try pairing when we get enough Masters.

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

@ADamnFiddle

But I didn't explicitly state that Sebastian is Quixote's Master tho

That's what I get for skimming the rules. I'm not altering anything from either sheets tho. God help whoever ends up summoning Quixote xD

EDIT: In that case, a Servant with a tolerable nature and a high-ranking Noble Phantasm would be very much appreciated :P

@Gummy1295

You all choose your partners, so others would have to agree with it.

Also sorry for any slowness with the application process recently. Holidays and overtime have been killing me recently.

Fate/Vacuous Radiance

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I look at the Banned list for a second there XD

@Seirei No Hai

Hey cmon

@Cojemo

I get you. While studying for my still unverified Character Sheet for Don Quixote, I realized that the batshit crazy old man was a foil (opposite) character to the Master that I submitted... Kind of like Quixote's bumbling sidekick Sancho.

Point is, I think you should look for a Servant with a contrasting personality to that of his/her Master. You know, you could make it a good cop-bad cop kind of team. That's just my opinion, though. No pressure; you do you. :)

@Gummy1295

No alliances with characters you control, nor may you have a Servant who you control be under a Master you control. In addition to this, a character cannot take an item from a character you control, even if they have died.