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Whispers in the dark (WH40K Chaos space marine RP)

I am making the next ic post right now

@SillyGoywhile a complete character sheet is not needed, a short blurb about each member of your squad would be perfect, just a bit if general info since, yes, everyone within the flock knows eachother (Arabar can personally pick out each individual marine in full armor or out, yes he is that good of a preacher)

The Lamentaion of Corillia (Warhammer 40k space marine RP)

I will be changing Vergil's bio. Also @MattmanGanon remember, he is a captain and will not react lime he did when he was not. Everyone, all before the next post has been retconned

The Lamentaion of Corillia (Warhammer 40k space marine RP)

WE ARE NOR DEAD, I REPEAT

@Caliban22I hate to do it but we gotta move on and you are clearly to busy, you are cut, I apologize

We are reconning several things.
1.Vergil is now the captain, yes as a Dreadnought
... that's really it actually.

WE ARE NOR DEAD

Whispers in the dark (WH40K Chaos space marine RP)

Either the army goes, or you go

Whispers in the dark (WH40K Chaos space marine RP)

It's not just the power @SimplyJohn. We lose any tension. Your character is placed on par with Arabar and even with subtle manipulation what's to stop you from murdering a night lord who looks at you funny? Plus, where's the danger? What's the point of Arabar manipulating any of the other Night lords? Why not JUST control Crixus? It gives Arabar an army so why bother with the other night lords at all? No army John, end of discussion, no if's ands or buts. I'm sorry but if you want to control a warband from the get go you should make your own RP, but this one? This RP is of my design, and Crixus's army has no place in it

Whispers in the dark (WH40K Chaos space marine RP)

My idea for Crixus is that he'll be accompanying the party either by himself or with a small retinue, rather than bringing his full force with him.

I was going to be covering that in the next post, where he'd be giving orders to his shipmaster, and had hinted at the reasons for following Arabar in my first post when he referred to a debt needing to be paid.

The two have some sort of history which may not necessarily be entirely friendly, and Arabar will have to be careful as to exactly what he orders Crixus to do for him so as not to anger the champion.

@SimplyJohn

Wait... your plan was to basically threaten Arabar with your forces? No, simply no. It takes away any power Arabar has, and the entire RP is based around power. If Arabar can't actually control Crixus what's to stop you from razing important cities or killing marines in the black hand you don't like? Nothing because you could simply crush Arabar and the blossoming black hand

Whispers in the dark (WH40K Chaos space marine RP)

Ignore

Whispers in the dark (WH40K Chaos space marine RP)

@SimplyJohnNo I'm not asking you to give a reason why, I'm saying your a warlord, you have a warband. That is not allowed, that is not a part of this story. At the start no one can be more powerful than Arabar, and by that I mean if you are in charge of anything more than a couple of marines or a dozen or so cultists you aren't really in a position to follow anyone are you? I'm sorry John but no armies, no warbands, I specifically stated no Warlords. And while you may look and act the part of a raptor but you have 46,000 troops, your chaos marines alone double the size of Arabar's flock.

This isn't me trying to make my character a godmode one, the story REVOLVES around the journey of initially no more than 100 former Night lords chaos space marines and their fall to service of the gods (or ability to resist temptation) and when one of those 100 marines is not with the rest AND controls a huge warband? I'm sorry but that's a no go

This is not the story of a black crusade or other holy war, this is a story of struggle, of a select few traitors surviving and fighting against impossible odds, of the tension between traitors and their reluctance to trust.

So, I have to bring down the hammer. You have two choices john, and I'm sorry if you hate me for thus, one:No cultists, no army, no 200 marines no 42 raptors. You cut them out, and edit your posts to put you on the ship with us, on the same level as every other player in the RP, rather than above and away from them
or two:If you refuse option 1 I have to boot you from the RP. The others understand the story I'm weaving and they embrace it, they each become their own thread in my story, but keeping their own personal stories flowing with and through it. You are currently going against the threads, trying to weave your own story against mine. And you can either correct the thread, or I can cut it.

Badically, my big weaving comparison boils down to this
Take the place you are meant to alongside the others, and have some fun

Or I will be forced to cut you from the story

Whispers in the dark (WH40K Chaos space marine RP)

Looks great, move him to the characters page and make your first post once your ready

Whispers in the dark (WH40K Chaos space marine RP)

@Warbozz sure, we always have room.

BTW @SillyGoyno insults here, you can criticize but don't be a dick about it. And Mary sue is a pretty serious insult. The pet is fine, lots of Slaanesh marines have em