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    1. Akashi Mayhiro 11 yrs ago

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@Lost in my Mind

Hey there, we're always accepting new victim role players, Daisuke is pretty solid. I used to have a 20 year chunnin as well, but that was before the time-skip, he would fit in with the others.

His history checks out just fine, there is nothing wrong about it from what i can see. Though it is a bit of a shame that his folks died the year prior, but that's how is history when. Does he have another relatives that that be introduced later down the track as a NPC?

Tanker is his main forte when it comes to fighting, but getting into close quarter combat and your pretty much done for? You just might be a handful for a certain young master. Come to think of it, your and the GM are the only ones that take attacks head on, in order to get your own jutsu in. This will be interesting to see how you fight with others.

But looking at his Jutsu, he pretty much balances himself out. Even though you did say that he does train a lot, how long can he keep up these justsu before he is unable to? We just need you to elaborate a little bit on your fighting style and stamina. Partisan and Savato need to take this into account when doing plot post.

Hammer of the Mountain is what i would consider your A-rank Jutsu, the description that you type down means business, it's goo that your chucked in it's disadvantages, but a good custom Jutsu i will say :)

I give my OK to this, but bear in mind: i am new to reviewing. The other GM's might have other things to say about this and will ask you to change a few things here and there. But from my view: you have created a good character.



Momoi and Yang continued watching the events that were unfolding before them. Once Ayame had used 'Rain Tiger at Will' Jutsu, the heavens opened at will and rain poured down on everything in the area. Momoi sighed as Chihiro didn't answer her text "Figures, mission must be have forced her to get serious then." chewing her inner cheek, she allowed the rain to soak her hair and clothes as she put on her goggles again, staring up to the now gray skies. "Adapt or perish...but is this the right way?"

"Huh, what do you mean?" Yang answered back to her. Momoi continued to stare up to the sky.

"She spoke of the will of Fire, Even that kid spoke of it. “The Will of Fire is looking after your own, protecting your people, protecting your village from anyone that wishes to do it harm, it's making deals with other villages to further your own goals." Momoi turned around and roof jumped back to the CBD area of the hidden leaf, there was no point of stay there. "Yang, Let's go." The blonde brawler followed the gypsy back to Takeshi's apartment. "Just what is the will of fire?"

It seemed the Ayame's jutsu had spread to the whole village, the rain danced on them as the posted haste and arrived back the now Rogue-nin's apartment.


Takeshi's Apartment- 2 years later



The gypsy quickly plugged her phone to an power outlet to let it charge while she grabbed herself and Yang a towel to dry themselves. "Momoi-san, what did you mean when you said "What is the will of fire?"

"It's exactly as i said: what is it? Ayame and the blonde kid had different views about it." Momoi muffled though the towel covering her face. Her eye were much more focused "All this time, i just went with the flow when i became a Ninja, i really never carried a valid reason of becoming a Shinobi." finishing with the towel, she threw it on a nearby chair and flung her body onto the couch. "Yang....who would know about this will of fire?"

"Why are you asking me? I'm not a ninja girl." Yang passed of her question and sat next to her "Shouldn't you go to the library or something?" Momoi shook her head.

"I want someone who can give me the real answer, not something in a book." Looking outside again, the two just stared at the rain falling down "I guess or going to start, might as well make baby steps first." Standing up she headed towards Takeshi's bedroom and closed the door. Ignoring Yang's call. the gypsy started stripping of her wet clothes and chucked them to a corner before opening the closet. Fishing through numerous clothes. Momi smiled as she pulled out what she wanted. Ever since Takeshi had left, most of her stuff moved to his apartment, a convenience for both her and yang. Putting on her new attire she stepped out to the main room once more.



"Alright then, I'm ready." she smiled as she placed one of Takeshi's coats on and other various outdoor gear. Yang raised a brow before "That blonde Kid, he said he was an Uzumaki right? Naruto Uzumaki was a previous Hokage, his ideals would have passed down each generation's." making sure that she had everything she exited the apartment again "Don't worry, i'll be back before dinner: it's my turn to cook dinner tonight."

Yang shrugged before leaning back into the comfy couch as Momoi left the building and back into the pouring rain, her freshly charged phone lit her face as he tapped on it, revealing a map of the hidden leaf Momi frowned "Damn, it's on the other side of the village." shaking her head she started walking towards her destination, instead of roof jumping. She needed time to think about this. The questions she would need to ask.

Hopefully: The Uzumaki would be able to clear her thoughts and make her decision clear, once and for all. "It's time to visit them." wrapping the coat around her tighter. Momoi continued walking.

@Renny

The Gypsy

Stalemate


"Che! The Gypsy should'a known!" The blonde haired chunin cursed her lack to comprehend the situation better, the 11th corps waved her furious fire jutsu like it was nothing before moving of the the sage knows where. Soon the other where moving towards the current location the the Hokage and his attacker. Wasting no time the girl rushed off towards the meeting point. What she saw there would no doubt question her loyalty to the village she grew in. Once she arrived, the Hokage was dead and the hooded figure was none other than Ayame Choko.

"Koko de nani ga okkotte irun desuka?!" taking on her goggles she looked in complete shock as Ayame gave her speech about how the village is not what it once was. She couldn't care less about send a snappy shot back at the killer. Nothing made sense anymore, why would Ayame kill the Hokage, the village was alright the way it was....right?

While she was not with the main crowd, she had a bird's eye view of everyone. Yamoto, the person she would least expect to comply with this utter madness, bowed down..and so did Daiki. It wasn't her call to name them traitors, but one by one the civilians of the hidden leaf started bowing to Ayame. Momoi bit her lower lip, but not enough to draw blood as her mind conflicted with itself. Submit to the woman for a better village..or defend the will of fire?

"Chi-chan...Yabê." she whispered "Yabê...this is revolt and a new age...what should the gypsy do?!" a scream from in front made her look once more. Giichi was running at Ayame with a blue spinning orb in hand "Dumbass, do you want to be killed?!" Forming the hand seals need Momoi was about use her jutsu when a hand pressed on her shoulder.

"Don't do anything rash, Gypsy." turning around, Momoi turned to see Yang behind her. "Whatever the hell is going on, you aren't in the position to do anything for anyone." her purple eye stared back into amber's."I'm not a ninja, nor do i plan to be one. But....i don't like this revelution."

"Yang....The gypsy doesn't like it as well." she rose up once more and looked at her older friend. Soon the Honeybader was going to attack Ayame as well, but her commander from the looks of things had stopped her and took her place. Saying that they were under arrest. "Can i borrow your phone, there is someone that needs to know this now." Yang nodded and fished out her phone from her cleavage and handed to her. Thanking the lighter blonde. Momoi quickly punched in two number.

Chihiro Hyuuga and 'That guy'

>Village has gone to shit, Ayame has killed the late hokage Zeno and declared herself the new hokage. I...don't know what to do...what should i do?!@AgentFallenSoul


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In a darkened room, a phone vibrated, waken the man up. grunting with dissatisfaction and stared at the message "........." tsking after reading the message, he placed the phone down and went to sleep once more.

'That village doesn't concern me, anymore.' His yellow eyes gleamed before shutting his lids once more. 'Figure it out on your own, Gypsy.'
The Gypsy




Momoi listen as the Hokage gave his speech about unity amongst the nations and addressed who would be participating in this program. She zoned out for a small amount of time before she heard cried and eventually screams which brought her back to reality. The hokage was coughing up blood- and a large amount at that. The blonde haired girl felt her battle instincts kick in after seeing the citizens of the hidden leaf fleeing for their lives while Zeno headed towards wherever he was going to go- perhaps a safehouse of some sort, he was damaged majorly as well was not in any condition to fight. The ANBU had intervened to ensure that Zeno was safe, but unfortunately: they died. Amongst the screams. She could hear several people barking out orders.

“Hey you! Medical nin, come over here and come with us!”

“Aoi, you heard the prick, let’s get moving.”

"Understood!"

The Gypsy still stayed in her place as chaos ran amok, she could see a hooded figure roof running away from everything. Her amber eye gleamed with hostility towards the one that turned everything to shit. Taking a step in the direction of the suspect, she was about to pursue whoever it was underneath the cloak. But her 'logical' side surfaced. "The civies need directions to safety, the Gypsy believes that that is right course of action." she nodded to herself with a 'calm' and 'meaningful' expression "But then again, the Gypsy didn't get to chunin by being a 'textbook' kunoichi!" Kicking up dirt, she went to take care of the assailant that ruined her day. "The Gypsy can deal with speeches, but the Gypsy can't bear someone fucking up her morning!" She roared as jumped onto the rooftop and gave chase.

It seemed like she wasn't the only one having the same idea, one side was the Honeybadger, The clown and her girlfriend while not far behind was a white haired girl and a blonde. Of course they weren't running together, but putting two and two together meant that they were all going after the hooded figure. In front of her were all the ninjas that decided to take action earlier while she was daydreaming. The group (sort of) continued running towards the monument of the past Hokages were they saw the Hokage getting his ass handed to him by the hoodlum. "Wow." she could only say while watching the fight take place. Soon the ninja around her took of and attacked the hooded figure. But that would all be useless as a second figure seemingly took stage, whatever it was, Momoi was getting more concern about the events that were taking place.

"Just what the hell is going on." she cursed under her breath, once again her trained eye saw the Hokage pull a fast one and the clutches of the one that was trying to harm him. But the hooded figure would have none of it as he or she when after the Hokage. Meanwhile everyone was attacking the second mysterious person.

Just when things could get more fucked up, it did. The 11th corps of the hidden leaf had arrived and protected...."Wait, why are you guys defending it? Aren't you guys suppose to be our allies?!" she screamed in her mind while ruffling her own hair in frustration "The fuck is going on?!" She knew that that assistance was required now, however who wanted to go help the Hokage had their reasons as well. Scanning the Area once more she saw the fights that were taking place.

Daicho vs Saburo Uchiha, or what Momoi liked to call him "Subaru", They've have met a couple of time at very awkward moments..at least she thought it was awkward?

The Honeybader vs the coated man or girl...from this distance it was hard to tell, not to mention that it was moving fast;

Meanwhile Katsu had regrouped with Aoi, Akio and the other "Even Kat came as well?" sighing she closed her eyes and emptied all the unwanted feeling.

Fear.

Death.

Cockness.

Anxiety.

Placing her goggles over her eyes, she opened them once more "The Gypsy is ready to rock." Digging to the weapon cache behind her, her pulled out multiple kunais with tags on them, however instead of explosive tags, Momoi and wired up the paper differently, glued to the paper was multiple stripes of magnesium. "Steel Release: Molecular Recomposition!" flowing her chakra through the kunai, she felt them become ultra light as she threw them high into the air, knowing that using her Jutsu the steel wouldn't fall down to the earth fast, she changed their destiny to that was a piece of paper. Once they were high enough into the air, she performed the tiger seal, setting of the little flame in order to light the stipes. Soon the clear day time was soon filled with bright white light absorbing the natural light for a few second.

"Don't be dazzled by it. It's just basic Misdirection." using the time to get behind to members of the 11th corps. Momoi performed her hand seals.

Rat → Ox → Dog → Horse → Monkey → Boar → Tiger

Inhaling a huge amount of air, she blew out a massive amount of fire "Katon: Gōka Messhitsu!"

It was time to turn on the heat.
@FallenTrinity

Honestly i cannot find anything major wrong with your new OC, unfortunately i have to go to work, so i will get back to you soon man with a proper review.
A look at the personality of Katsu Hyuuga and I can already tell he is going to be playing a vital role for Chi-chans growth later down the track. A glance once again shows that the dude had his fair share of growing up and wants to help the younger generation anyways he can. But what I do not like about him is the ‘make a friend out of anyone’, sure he is a nice guy and what not. But there is simply no what he can do that. You might want to reword the section so that it’s a little more believable for the others to read. The second section of his personality just needs a few touch up here and there in general. I don’t practically mind the history of Katsu. In fact I like him. Just make his personality a bit more ‘fleshed out’.

The canon jutsu that Katsu has, i have no quarrels, how i am a little concern about your custom Jutsu though.

Could you come up with a better name than "Brutal Gentle Fist Style"? That really irks me just saying it. I'm sorry Vi, it's like saying Hot cold rain, how does that work?

Chakra Control: Impact Sponge, kinda like Steel Release, Impervious armour. Though the concepts of of boht of them are totally different. But that is not the point here, i would like to know how many physical contacts he and endure before he finally let's up, it can't be forever, but not that it matters to the Chunin. But it will matter to other Jounins, Enlightenment and missing nins.

Chakra Control: Sonar Checks out alright, remind me to call him dolphin XD

Nothing wrong with his history as well, aside from what i pointed out in general. THe other Gm's will have the opinion on Katsu later on.

The Gypsy




>Yoyoyoyoyoyo, every1!!! letz meat @ EAST SCWARE 4 hukag meetin! 0k?! =^3^= -Aoi

>Aoi-Taicho, The gypsy is already on her way. But the Gypsy would like pass on your invite. Sorry. - Momoi

Pocketing her phone again. The Blonde hair girl made her way to the front of the Hokages building. Traveling from the CBD of the Hidden leaf was very tiring, especially when your friend drinks you under the table in a place that she is looking after. Cringing slightly while holding her head. Momoii changed her slowly pace to a much more faster one, the loud noises where splitting her head apart. "Why of all time does the Shitty Hokage make us come to the shitty village center for some shitty speech?!" she cursed the current hokage. Her anger lessened as she managed to escape the noises and found a more quiet path the her destination. "The gypsy needs sleep...." looking around the blonde haired girl quickly once a bench near the small pond before taking her seat and falling asleep quickly. During her slumber, her phone as died. the nearby pigeons stand on her but surprisingly didn't poop on her and passersby placed money at her feet, thinking she was homeless and needed new clothes, seeing what she wore would make anyone think that.

Sadly to say, this was a usual routine for the Gypsy. On a Rare morning she wouldn't have an hangover and she would be training or going to her best friend's place.

It would be 2 hours before she would wake up again, but this time with not much of a hangover.



The Gypsy was now in front of the Hokage's building, half awake was more like it. She had been standing on her feet for awhile, and she hated that, unless she was a on mission. But even so she would need to be on the run or something. "Gahh...the Gypsy thinks this is the biggest waiting of her time!" crossing her arms with a huff, she exuded a intent of pure boredom and impatience, making everyone around her to move away from here. She resorted to tapping her foot on the ground while grinding her teeth "GAHHH!!....OI HOKAGE! GOT THE DAMN MOVE ON, THE GYPSY HAS PLACES TO BE!" this sudden outburst made everyone turn around her before she gave the same evil eye back to him "Got a problem, step up bitches!" she seethed at them before clutching her head "ow ow...too loud...."

Some moved away once again while others shook their head, Momoi payed no mind to them as she closed her eye and tried to think of ways to misdirect her boredom away. Nothing came to mind. Even her best friend Chihiro wouldn't answer since she was on a mission. "I guess the Gypsy will have to bite her tongue for awhile. Why at of all times: does my phone die on me!" she cried dramatically as she pulled out her phone and yelled at it. "Damn you to hell!"


Detailed new Character approaches!








NPC just to be sure





The Gypsy




"Hmmm...Fair call then, Taicho." The blonde haired girl stood back as Yamato answer her questions, she didn't really care if he hadn't answered her, both ways she was satisfied with the outcome. "So the rumours were true, you act like the calm and collected type, far from the younger self." she mused before grinned again and bowed to him "The Gypsy looks forward to working with you on this mission!" true to his word Daiki had exited out of the building with a younger white haired girl "Ah, speaking of the devil." her eye gleamed with amusement at her REAL leader. "Oi! Shirou-taicho!" totally regarding his real name and his ranking. The Gypsy had called him back the name of the main character of a manga she was currently reading. She was willing to put everything on the like that Shirou and Daiki were twins- however that was 2 years ago. Now he looked more manly.

"Ah, sorry Sorry, i didn't mean to call you that, Daicho!" she placed her hand on her hip as looked at him with a grin. "Pleasure to be working with you, name's Momoi Hiromoto Yasei! Or just call me Gypsy!" she wagged a finger at him "No Suffix please, The gypsy hates that." Her attention turned to the white haired girl next to him. "Hey there, the Gypsy hasn't seen you before." walking towards her she held her gloved fist towards her, hoping to get a fistbump back "Just call me Gypsy, Snow white. Pleasure to be working with you as well."

It was Yuna's turn to speak...but she was mumbling a lot, so she tuned her out and stared at the clouds, still waiting for the fistbump. As the girl finshed her introduction. The blonde haired girl looked at her with dead eyes.

"The Gypsy doesn't like you, If you're going to impress me and actually believe that you can be a valuable teammate, show me." she answered back "I'm going to pass on you little Aviary, sorry."

Her Phone Vibrated inside her jacket, using her free hand she pulled out her phone.

>Ahhhhhhh, sry I'm doin a briefing with my teammates going over plans - Chi-Chan
>It fucking sucks I didn't get you on my team T.T, but it's alright babe - Chi-Chan
>We'll just have to make up for some lost time...a lot of lost time lmao - Chi-Chan

>It's fine Chi-chan, i'm doing the same here. It does suck that the old farts haven't realised that we are the best tag-team in the hidden leaf! :( I'm going to hold you to that...after all. You won the bet, remember ;3

Chuckling to herself she received another message

>Hope you aren't mad me babe... - Chi-Chan

>Not in this lifetime, i love you to death! ʅʕ•ᴥ•ʔʃ
> Urgh, this yuna girl reminds me to that lady that was really a dude...this chick is giving me the creeps...at least i think it's a chick..every heard of the girl called Yuna Hōjō? @AgentFallenSoul

Pocketing her phones once more, Yamoto overviewed the mission they were going to undertake. The blonde hair girl nodded as she cleared out all perverted and unnecessary thoughts. Hell, without anyone known, her pulled out a small notebook and scribbled down main pointers of the mission "It's bad to underestimate anything in the mission. Guess i'll have to think ahead while thinking with the squad...." humming to herself while keeping an ear out for any important info.

As The Young master finished his briefing. The girl pocketed her stuff once more and slammed her fist into her open palm. "Let's get this train rolling!"
Sage and Samir: Aftermath of a good fight

A collab with Lmpkio




The battle time exceeded its limit and it will be rule breaking if it continues and dragged, abrupt indeed and no flow will be any different if this continues like a loophole. What defines fights are its ingenuity of whichever side and what the contenders have to offer; indeed, both sides have offered a lot and dragging this match is going to be abrupt and convoluted, no longer must it continue. Kyou announced; "Time out. There are no winners of this battle, all of you almost exceeded the time limit. This is match is officially over and it is a tie.

Sage halted his attack on the blonde woman. 'Good grief, here i thought i would be able to let loose here...' As he was speaking to himself, the darkness all over the area traveled back into his shadow while he sheathed his sword. Looking at Samir he quickly wrote a note to her.

-It was good fighting with you, Samir-san, shame it wasn't long enough.-

At the same time, Samir's heavenly arrows grind to a halt as they stopped firing altogether. She looks up to see the darkness fade away from the entire arena, leaving it the way it was before, and transforms back into her regular clothing.

"You were good Sage-kun," Samir replies back as she puts away her bow onto her back, "For a second I thought we'd all be in hot water by then. Too bad the time ran out just before things got heated."

-I guess you are right, Samir-san.- Sage wrote back to her with a warm smile, inside his mind, we could help to see how fair and beautiful Samir was. -Hopefully we can cut loose in a one on one fight, with nothing holding us back.- He took a step back and looked at Hana -I should get back to Hana-Nee, she would want to train later on.- looking back at the blonde arch he wrote once more -What are you plans, Samir-san?-

Samir sighs, "Yeah, maybe we can finish this another time. I'll be in my quarters resting up and having a break, maybe even talk with Master Kat." she nods at Sage, "If you want to see me for anything else, I'll be there." She slowly heads back to her quarters with her hair and clothes moving with the light breeze. This had been a long day.

-Goodafternoon, Samir-san.- Sage bowed to her before walking of in the other directions, moving closer to stacy. Maybe Samir and him would run into each other...maybe the demon would work the courage to ask her for an outing...anything was possible.
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