@Kouki Thanks. I was really worried when reading your example because of how the fight in my head was similar to yours. Also where were the errors. I want to fix them now that I know they exist.
Uhh.. I feel like this is going to go bad, but here is my sample.
Ollie was working even longer hours today then usual. Did they actually suspect him to be one of the rangers? No, they couldn't. He made himself out to be just like all the other slaves. Cold dead eyes, no emotion, and working hard. He had to keep his identity in tact. He didn't want to abandon these people even if they didn't care.
One more hour and then he was done for the day, *Come on Ollie. You can do this*. Then a few feet in front of him an older man collapsed, *Oh crap. What happened*? While everyone else just passed the man by, Ollie looked at him and noticed that he was suffering intense pain by how he was contorting his face. "Crap," Ollie knelt down beside the man while making sure no Githkin were watching, "Hey, are you alright?"
"What are you doing boy? Get back to work. I don't need them to flog you for trying to help me."
"Sorry sir. I just can't do that." Ollie reaches for the man to pull him on his feet despite the man trying to shove him away. Putting his arm around him, "Come on. Let's find a place for you to hide." However, before they could get anywhere Githkin started to show up, "Run BOY. I don't need your pain on my conscience."
Reluctantly, Ollie set the man down against the rock and ran. The Githkin arrived to where Ollie left the man and told him to get back to work. When it was obvious he wasn't able to, one raised their hand to strike the man. Before he hit him though a blast of light energy hit it square in the face, and the Githkin all turned to see
"I am Strike Force Green Ranger." When he showed up many of the slaves started running in chaos. Most Githkin covered exits to make sure the slaves didn't run away and told them to keep working. Four however stayed to confront the power ranger. They ran towards Ollie ready to pound him into the dirt, *Remember what mentor said. I'm faster than they are and should dodge not block.* With that advice in mind Ollie bob and weaved around the Githkin working like a boxer against a tougher opponent. *Crap. There are too many of them. Gotta distract 'em.* Suddenly four other green rangers appeared to distract the Githkin. The Githkin didn't know which one to attack so they swung wildly at all of them making it even easier for Ollie to avoid the hits.
"Haha, you guys are so slow. Come on. Fight like ya wanna hit me." Ollie kept the few Githkin distracted with his holograms and ran back over to the man, "Hey, are you alright? They didn't hurt you did they?" The man looked scared. He seemed to have fear in his eyes looking at the one who was trying to 'save' him. "Get away from me. Your're a monster."
"What! I'm not a monster. I'm trying to save you from getting hurt."
"NO! We're safe here. Galatec has saved us from ourselves. Don't ruin our lives you terrorist."
"Saved you! They took away your free will. You no longer have any choice in this world. It's work until you die and that's it! Get punished for not being able to do something or even killed. How can humanity live like this?"
"Humanity was killing itself. Galatec has protected us from extinction. GUARDS HELP! THE RANGER IS OVER HERE!" The Githkin then turned to see the actual ranger had been no where near them the whole time. They bolted in Ollie's direction, and he looked at the man with sadness then turned to run.
Where could he run though? He was trapped. Then he remembered he could just use his power. He made as many holograms as he could and ran. He used them to keep the Githkin distracted while he found a tunnel no one was in and powered down causing his ranger suit to disperse into light, and all his holograms to vanish.
"I am Strike Force Blue Ranger." When he showed up many of the slaves started running in chaos. Most Githkin covered exits to make sure the slaves didn't run away and told them to keep working. Four however stayed to confront the power ranger. They ran towards Ollie ready to pound him into the dirt, *Remember what mentor said. I'm faster than they are and should dodge not block.* With that advice in mind Ollie bob and weaved around the Githkin working like a boxer against a tougher opponent. *This is bad. There are too many of them.* He should have had the helmet scan the area all ready, but he couldn't let the Githkin hurt the guy. He quickly did a sweep kick to knock the attackers to the ground, and backed away producing his MMA gloves, "Come on boys. Let's battle." He knocked his gloves together making a slight electric pulse. He knew it wasn't enough to take a Githkin down in one hit, but if he delivered enough quickly it could stun them a bit. The first two Githkin to stand charged at him and swung wide he ducked under the two and unloaded into one of them a flurry of punches before having to back out away from the third which threw a hook.
His little shocking gloves had almost no affect on the Githkin except for a slowed down pace. This would take to long and he didn't have all day. *Think Ollie think. Wait a minute.* Ollie produced his shield and blaster and charged at the fighters. He shoved his shield into the three on his left and quickly raised his blaster into the face of the other who was about to hammer his hands down on Ollie's skull. He blasted the Githkin right in the eyes launching it back. He threw his shield straight up and did a roundhouse kick to one of the remaining Githkin. He quickly backed away and shot one of his pursuers in the leg causing it to fall right in the path of his descending shield which lodged right into its back.
"So, your the last one. You sure about this?" Ollie got into a boxing pose and easily avoided the attacks from the single Githkin. Each time he dodged he delivered a few quick light punches shocking the Githkin in its center. The electricity coursing through its body made it harder to move by restricting its muscles. Ollie jumped back and charged his gloves. When the Githkin got to him and tried to deliver a haymaker Ollie avoided it and gave the Githkin an uppercut which unloaded all the electricity from the gloves into the jaw of the monster and launched it into the air. Breathing heavily Ollie said, "Piece of cake."
Ollie ran back over to the man, "Hey, are you alright? They didn't hurt you did they?" The man looked scared. He seemed to have fear in his eyes looking at the one who was trying to 'save' him. "Get away from me. Your're a monster."
"What! I'm not a monster. I'm trying to save you from getting hurt."
"NO! We're safe here. Galatec has saved us from ourselves. Don't ruin our lives you terrorist."
"Saved you! They took away your free will. You no longer have any choice in this world. It's work until you die and that's it! Get punished for not being able to do something or even killed. How can humanity live like this?"
"Humanity was killing itself. Galatec has protected us from extinction." The Githkin Ollie had taken down started to get back up and the man yelled, "GUARDS HELP ME!" Ollie turned with grief in his heart and ran. Where could he go though? He'd have to fight many more Githkin to try and escape. He quickly turned and blasted the Githkin then reproduced his shield and knocked them all to the ground making it ricochet off of one another. He ran into a tunnel where no one was currently at and powered down.
"Man. That was to close." I need to tell the others about this.
Oliver Johnson
Name: Oliver Johnson Nickname/Alias: Ollie Race: Human Age: 16 Ethnicity: Mostly English, but also a lot of Irish. Gender: Male Appearance: Ollie is 5'10" with black hair, bluish-green eyes, and a very perky smile. His jaw is very rugged and his face always seems to look happy no matter what. He is somewhat thin but has more muscle in his arms then the average person his age. Clothing: Typically wears a white undershirt, a dark-green hoodie, blue jeans, and black tennis shoes.
In The Mind
Personality: Ollie cares deeply for all those around him. Despite hating Galatec he actually feels as though some don't believe in the way they do things. He wants to help any who is need of help believing it is the best way to change things. He has low self-confidence and feels as though he isn't making much of a difference. When left alone to long he gets in his own head and constantly doubt himself.
He doesn't just help people because they need it. He helps people because it also makes him happier. He is very outgoing but is very oblivious to many things and extremely gullible. He is very loyal to those who gain his trust and will never betray them even if they have hurt him. Likes: He really enjoys staring at the horizon hoping that one day the world will change back to normal. He loves to make others laugh and if he thinks others are feeling down will try to come up with a way to make them feel better. He just likes times when life seems to slow down and he can just stare into the sky and imagine flying through the air. Dislikes: He hates it when people tries to hurt others. Whenever he sees anyone in pain or upset he just can't bare it. Of course he despises Galatec like the other good guys. Fears: Not making a difference. Being completely alone. Quirks: Is constantly zoning out.
Where They’ve Been
History: Ollie grew up pretty much in the slums. His mother had no job and his father fought as a MMA fighter for small promotions. His parents were scared that because of them his life wouldn't account for much. However, he showed great skill with practically every instrument he picked up The only one he had trouble with was the harmonica which his dad was fairly decent at playing. His parents started to think he might be able to pull himself out of the garbage that he was born in. It was unfortunate though that Galatec chose the day that Ollie was to play in front of a brilliant pianist to take full control of New Earth.
During the time that Galatec had initially arrived Ollie's father just didn't trust them. He had been use to being cheated and scammed that he felt something was off. Due to this none of the three partook in any of the products given by Galatec, barely making it. When Galatec initiated the takeover it proved just how horribly right Ollie's father had been. The only things Ollie cared about were his parents and instruments. Galatec deemed instruments to be to fulfilling and filled with the ability to increase free will, so they took them all. To a six year old it made no sense, but he kept quiet because his parents asked him to. His father and mother made sure to protect him and his father gave him his own harmonica, which he had kept hidden and told him to practice in secret.
Over the next few years, the small family barely squeaked by without drawing suspicion. Ollie's father secretly training him at night to fight via boxing and kickboxing hoping that the day would come that they could do something. However, an unfortunate thing occurred. Ollie's mother had died whilst working in the mines. This caused Ollie's father to become enraged. He foolishly went to the mines and tried to attack the Githkin, but to no avail.He was brutally beaten and then killed. The Githkin were sent to hunt down Ollie and do the same, but when they got a hold of him they almost instantly received new orders to move him to the Red Rocks mining colony where he has been worked harshly ever since. Talents: Before Galatec arrived he was considered a musical prodigy, yet hasn't had the ability to practice in years. He is also quite skilled in boxing and kickboxing due to secret training from his father. He is also extremely optimistic and will almost always be seen with a smile on his face. Hindrances: He is not very good socially. He often sticks his foot in his mouth due to never really thinking about what he says before it comes out of his mouth. He is also pretty clumsy when he isn't focused. Pretty much the only time he is focused is when it is a very serious situation or he is playing an instrument of some sort. When he messes things up it tends to heavily derail him and his issues tend to get much worse often making more clumsy mistakes and makes a mess of everything. Equipment: His morpher. A harmonica his father gave him that he has kept hidden.
Bonus Round
Quotes: "Sorry, sorry, sorry"/"It's time for some Ollie magic." Theme Song: I am honestly very bad at figuring out theme songs. Aspiration: To just simply be acknowledged and have the feeling of worth.
It’s Morphin’ Time!
Color Designation: Green Primary Weapon: MMA gloves that when touched together can create an electric shock. Can be used either for electrifying an enemy or possibly as a defibrillator. Energy Shield: Ollie's shield is kite formatted and runs along his arm. At the front end the shield is very sharp. Ollie however will rarely use his shield unless he is using his blaster. Blaster Design: Ollie's blaster is sleek but thick. At the end of the barrel two energy shafts oscillate around the center barrel. The handle has an extension that runs along his arm to make his aim more stable an does not have a sight. Powers: As the Green Ranger Ollie has the power to bend light in a way to create mirages of himself and potentially others. Using this ability he can easily trick the bad guys getting them to follow nothing but light. Zords: None at the moment.
It’s Morphin’ Time!
Color Designation: Blue Primary Weapon: MMA gloves that when touched together can create an electric shock. Can be used either for electrifying an enemy or possibly as a defibrillator. Energy Shield: Ollie's shield is kite formatted and runs along his arm. At the front end the shield is very sharp. Ollie however will rarely use his shield unless he is using his blaster. Blaster Design: Ollie's blaster is sleek but thick. At the end of the barrel two energy shafts oscillate around the center barrel. The handle has an extension that runs along his arm to make his aim more stable an does not have a sight. Powers: Blue has the unique ability to detach their shield without it fizzling out of existence without the emitter to support it. They also have a greater manipulation of their shield, being able to expand its size (maximum size of a riot shield) or change its shape. Blue’s helmet also comes equipped with an advanced targeting system, allowing for impossible angles and throws! Zords: None at the moment.
Went ahead and put them together to make it easier.
Member
Ollie is 5'10" with black hair, bluish-green eyes, and a very perky smile. His jaw is very rugged and his face always seems to look happy no matter what. He is somewhat thin but has more muscle in his arms then the average person his age.