Arthanus

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DiamondBlizzard: I don't like to be mean, but I have a lot of problems with this character. The first and easiest to fix is the Black Guard, we already have an organization with that name so just to keep things easier I would say to change the name. Second part of the blackguard I don't like is why would you make an assassin group to fight Bandits. (despite what Assassin's Creed shows) Assassins are stealth killers and when drawn into a real fight, especially against numbers, they would be at a disadvantage. So why would you use Assassins to fight bandits who swarm and overpower with numbers and always have someone looking to fill the open spot of the leader you kill.

Now on to the character. It seems a bit way to overpowered, how can a person at the age of 24 use 4 different martial arts effectively, fight skillfully with a blade, be a master assassin, retire from anything, and learn any magic to its expert level. Plus having a blood enhancement (which I will get to later) What I see in this character is someone who has already reached it's peek and has no room to really grow throughout the rp.

Now as for the Blood power it seems a bit to convenient if you take the three other characters who have powers like that. For Silus it was an experimental procedure preformed by a powerful mage seeing if something like that was even possible, and even then it has plenty of bad points to it. Hikisaka had to let a demon posses his body, enough said. And Adrian was attacked by a werewolf to get his powers. Now even though each character gains something from the ordeal each of them have their own drawbacks. As I see of this hawk's blood I don't see such a thing could just be done so easily that it is just casually passed out upon recruitment and have virtually no drawbacks.

And my final part is the equipment, Although I know it is basically a copy of Ezio's gear, you have to loose the gun. The Theocracy of Hieledran is the only nation that has the technology to produce guns, and even with that they don't have the ability to produce miniature guns that could be hidden like that. And even if they did the Theocacy's technology is so well guarded most people have never even seen a gun before so it would be impossible to recreate them outside of Hieledran.

Esayo: I like the character and I don't see any problems that jump out at me so I'll accept her.

Razqua: No worries, I plan to end my open enrollment soon I just wanted to get a big number to start with as I have had the rp die many times before when the first round of drop outs come as people loose interest and it comes down to like me and two people trying to take on things meant for a whole team.

The Order of Hunters: Tales of Fort Raven's peek

Ya I'll accepta few more, but I need Ranged desperately we got 1 ranged fighter so far. I'll be OK with bow, crossbow, magic, or flintlock weaponry.

The Order of Hunters: Tales of Fort Raven's peek

Actually I'll wait to tomorrow to get back to it. Want to get a little bit more talking between our people before moving on.

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lol no you will choose your opponent I'm not that mean.

The Order of Hunters: Tales of Fort Raven's peek

So i'll start to wright up the post and get to the tests of strength and all that so anyone want to volunteer to go first? Well anyone except drallinix i have a special plan for your character so you get to go last.

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Looks like majority are going for option 2 just a warning, that means everyone's tests will take a bit as they were going to be 1v1 fights with monsters but if everyone is cool with it we can go for that route.

The Order of Hunters: Tales of Fort Raven's peek

So along with the test I am going to have a little trial by fire. Now the question here is do you want me to let you play out the fights yourself (kinda like a show off mode) or do you want to have it play out like the real fights will play out (action/reaction posts where I will control the monster). The fist option lets everyone show off and make themselves look good, where the second gives everyone a taste of what real combat will be like in the rp.

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Raz I didn't randomly ignore your character before did I? I feel like I might have on accident.

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Well depends on the kind of monster. We have a few hidden monsters already but you can't really be open about it

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Silus had just started eating when Atticus came up to the table, He didn't say anything at first continuing to stand there until Silus looked up from his meal. "Well Atticus, I have never really dealt with the whole recruitment process myself, nor have I heard of someone riding out to the proverbial front lines just to ask to join. But you must have some balls to come out this far, so for now take a seat, eat and I'll throw you into the test to see what you can do." He said to the man motioning to sit at the table. Silus continued his meal listening to Jagrid recalling the events from the past. "Well you know it is the best way to settle the dispute of who got the body. Luckily enough Old Heidrek crushed the fools skull so there wasn't anything to put on a pike." he stated remembering the squabbles that proceeded the battle of which army would claim the Orc "As for being appointed captain, I'm as surprised as you are. Apparently the Old man requested that I come and take over his Assault team. But I can't really complain being out here really beats my old posting. I never liked the Tachikawa coast. Sure the view is great, but you can only kill so many crabs before you get sick of seafood." Silus added while continuing his meal

Chistoth sat to eat as Jack went on about the Enchantments some more, "Now that my be interesting, but how exactly does hiding your weaponry help against beasts and monsters?" he asked in between bites. "And what do you mean my Idea? I am all up for creating a set of armor, but that extra stuff is all up to you." He added while he continued to eat.

As Mosh bust in Heidrek gave a grin "Aye lad, there is still some left for you, but you might have to deal with scraps!" the old Barbarian joked before motioning a few of his men over. After talking to them for a bit the men went outside to prepare for the "entertainment" that would commence after the meal.