Mary Ciercelt
It more or less glorifying things like greatswords and stuff. Nothing like lifting a car, or a school for that matter. She'd be using greatswords and other larger weapons.
I can remove the tankiness then.
Realistically body mastery acts as a reiteration of the fact that god-modding is against the rules. I'd be more cautious of allowing a blood-bender or mind-controller in than analyzing body mastery. Think of it as the abiltiy to direct your body to do anything you can think of, and anything your body can feasibly do. Her strength is no more than was described beforehand, and body mastery does not increase it.
Tracking opponents, identifying them, and being able to fight them is a big step away from "seeing through an opponent".
Others put in little tid-bits into their Weaknesses section as well. Weaknesses that have nothing to do with combat.
Avelynn Ciercelt
Mana was simply just not mentioned. She needs it. It's an energy source. Mana is essentially just the same as stamina is for physical activity; the more you exercise magic, the more mana you use. She doesn't have an infinite well of it.
In any case, I've decided to rework her anyways. The other concerns have become moot now.