Hello mifune. You may need to add more quality to your CS, attempt to make it more detailed, use a spell-checker, ETC. Also, explain his garrote wire in more detail? How does it form into weaponry? Why would a garrote wire even cut? How does a random gangster re-wire a soldier- actually, why was a fifteen year old, or a guy younger than that, even a soldier?
Sorry if I'm rambling. Just look over it some more?
Alias: Havoc Real name: Jason Lynche Age: 'Default' form appears 20. Actual age is legitimately unknown. Gender: Male
Appearance: Jason's powers stems off of shifting his form into incredibly sharp and lethal weaponry of destruction, and shifting into different people and faces to disguise and easily blend into any sort of crowd. However, he has a 'default' form;; the form he appeared as before all of this went down. This is the form he is generally in when not disguising or shifting into a completely different person. Jason's default form is that of a young man, around 20 or so, with a rather pale complexion, although not to a completely pasty degree. His eyes are a deep, vivid crimson color - obviously a side-effect from his entire body being rearranged on a molecular level. His hair is a deep brownish-black, rather feathery and soft, and generally shaggy. It is usually hidden underneath a cap or a hood, or a combination of both. His physique could be seen as lean/athletic, but he is obviously not a muscle-bound brute or anything of the sort. It's usually hid behind layers of clothing, anyways. Speaking of clothing, Jason's clothing is generally a collared, heavy-duty black hoodie, lightly ripped at the knees jeans, and worn, black and white converse. The hoodie has crimson-red accents, and is generally unzipped/unbuttoned, revealing a dark-colored t-shirt underneath it. On the back of the heavy-duty hoodie, as a personal touch by Jason himself, there's the words 'Born Again', in Mandarin Chinese [Don't ask why], written in dark red lettering, going down the jacket.
Personality: Before being literally killed and sucked into Hell, Jason wasn't really a stand-up citizen. Rather lazy and sleazy, he was a backstabbing messenger that worked for different gangs, and learned how to cover his tracks. Sure, he was relatively clever, but that really was it. He was afraid of getting hurt, and had a 'run if someone tougher attacks' strategy that worked for the coward. However, after witnessing the death of the gang he had been working for - which didn't affect him much, if at all, honestly - and then being viciously executed and dragged into Hell, Jason began to...wisen up. He became more clever, learned how to be tough, hold his ground, etc.
He was further changed when the evil, mad Demon scientist, Skalios, got him and began putting him through torturous pain and experimentations, shifting his body and mind, forcibly making him absorb poor souls of the damned..the demon wanted a monster, he got one. Now, his own man, after killing Skalios and taking a trip straight outta Hell - via the Angel, Skeorksy, Jason is back on the streets, and much more of a man than he ever was - give or take a humanity or two. Cold, dangerous, and with his own personal goals in mind, Jason keeps a cool head and a focused gaze, but his impatience can sometimes shine through - he's actually pretty patient, all things considering. He is very vengeful, and although he isn't petty, at all, recognizing accident and fuck-ups for what they are, if you try to kill him, he's gonna kill you back.
Borderline sociopathic, Jason is separated from this term by one thing, and one thing only;; his quest for redemption, by basically wiping out whatever sort of low-life scum he comes across, as given to him by the angel guy in Limbo. Vulgar, and with a cynical, dark, and dry attitude, a razor-sharp brain, and a lethal imagery, Jason isn't really a guy you wanna cross paths with, if you're scum. He can actually seem relatively lazy at times, when he's just relaxing back, but he doesn't have much time for that since he came back. He's a rebellious kind of guy, and can disrupt and make authority figures' lives harder just to peeve them off. He isn't affected much by insults, and has a lot of ice in his veins. Don't get him wrong;; he's on the path to redemption...sorta. He won't put innocents' lives in danger, but a few extra casualities won't really turn his head. However, since he doesn't wanna be banished to Hell forever, he makes sure to focus his ire on the scum. As described by a corrupt cop, Jason is a..."Bastard! God damn cold-hearted punk broke my arm, threatened to eat me, and then fucking kicks my car into an alleyway! When I called for backup, he broke my phone, broke my one useful arm, and then threw me into my crashed car! Through the windshield! And then-!"
"Now now, Officer Espinoza, easy there. Take deep breaths. Now, tell me exactly why you were found, half-dead, outside of a burning, highly-known gang hideout...with cocaine in your pockets...and a note saying 'Arrest me. Fuck Tha Police!'?"
"W-well..."
History: To put it simply, Jason used to be a low-beat traitor. A backstabbing piece of shit that ran between two gangs, doing different dirty work and selling information to their enemies, he was a slimy guy, and deserved everything he got. When the cops raided the base whilst he was getting his pay from one of the gang members, he had his innards sprayed against the walls from automatic high-caliber rounds, and then bullets pierced his skull...yes...he died. His soul went down to heaven, and he was stuck in the demon-infested wasteland of fire and brimstone. As he ran through Hell, he was found by a mad scientist-like demon, named Skalios. Skalios saw him as a human plaything - something he could run some prototype tests on, and test out different theories involving demon skin, blood, power, and a few Hellish ores and elbow grease. Days...weeks...was it years? It all passed as Jason screamed his heart out. As Skalios was finishing up, deeming Jason a failure, Jason activated his powers unknowingly, and carved out the demon's heart. As he escaped the demon's lair, he was being watched over by an Angel, whom had sensed the unholy experimentations happening within Skalios' lair - he was in Hell for unknown reasons, and saw fit to help the confused and tortured human soul. After seeing the sins Jason committed in his past life, the Angel, Skeorsky, sent Jason back into Earth - Back into Grimmarch, if he did one thing for the Angel...rid the world of scum. Of crime. Of criminals. If he used his demon-given powers to take out the sinful, he would be able to live. Jason accepted. Obviously, there was a reason this 'Angel' was taking a vacation to Hell. Sent back to Earth, Jason began his quest.
Powers:
-Genetically Demonic Form: Whilst within Hell, when Skalios was fucking with his genes and turning him into some twisted monster, Jason's body was permanently changed. His muscles are superhumanly modified to degrees high above that of a human's. He is exponentially stronger, faster, more agile, more durable, and generally sharper than that of a human. Similarly, he regenerates at a speed deemed impossible to that of an average human, and his muscles do not release toxins, allowing him to expend stamina at an indefinite amount of time. This makes him an extremely dangerous opponent, to both humans, and superhumans.
-Shapeshifting: The main 'thing' Skalios added to Jason's genes was the ability to shapeshift - copy the DNA of any humanoid by absorbing them into his form, via chopping or smashing their bodies into smaller and softer pieces, so that his body's own DNA can shoot out of his body and gobble the other DNA up. It's not a very...pretty sight to witness. Regardless, by copying the DNA, he has the ability to shift into the form of the humanoid he has absorbed, including any clothing he has absorbed, as well. Clothing is much easier to absorb, as it is much less durable than a body. Absorbing also gifts him the ability to assimilate and organize the information within the other target's brains, which will be explained further within the Weakness section. He can seamlessly shift into different forms at will, and often uses it to infiltrate places where stealth is key, or if he needs information he can't get anywhere else. Similarly, and this is Jason's main form of combat, he can shift his body into weaponry of mass-destruction. This doesn't require absorption to complete - only, it is limited by his imagination, and however much DNA his body is willing to give out to form the weaponry. Due to using blood-cells and unknown materials that were put into his bloodstream during Skalios' fuckery, Jason's weaponry constructs he creates from his body, is a deep black color, and very spiky/sharp in appearance, with red veins moving through the weaponry, representing the veins within his body.
Weakness(es):
-Voices, man!: Jason...Jason has absorbed a lot of people since he escaped Skalios, okay? While their souls are not floating around in his body, he has their memories, their experiences, their hate...their anger...their love. You get what I'm putting out? While, due to his advanced, demon-enhanced brain, he can store away the different memories and emotions for when they're needed to look over, over time, things can get warped. He can get a bit...cracked. He starts hearing voices, only for it to be the lifetimes of memories he has stored away. Usually, he has this under strict lock and key...but if it were ever to be unleashed - all of it, he'd have a hard time dealing with it. He'd be in a flat-out comatose state. Telepathy and any mind-related powers is a double-edged sword for the user. While they can get in and really mess with stuff, they would also be hit with lifetimes of memories and pain. Not fun.
-Fire: Fire and Jason does not get along all that well. He can handle extreme heat due to his durability, but once flames get hot enough and manage to begin roasting his skin, that's where it gets bad. It eats through his regeneration like a mouse through cheese, and directly attacks his DNA - and he has a lot of absorbed DNA, so it's practically eating all of his energy and fervor.
Fun Facts: -Jason enjoys old-school Rock and Roll, jazz, and rap.
-His favorite drink is Sprite - he can drink it all day.
-He actually felt like becoming a criminal again, but only once, and he discarded it immediately.
-He has nightmares every night. It's pretty entertaining to him, sometimes.
-Jason has come to terms with his...freakishness, and embraces it.
My new character;; will overwrite Crisis, unless he's ruthlessly declined and thrown away.
Half Pint