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Given this question I'd have to parrot a bit of what @Iuniper mentioned. I've shot bows as well (Don't remember the poundage) and while it's tiring it isn't a feat reserved for Olympians.

To clarify, the chin-up metaphor should've been more closely compared to a feat of pulling yourself up whilst dangling off a cliff. The point is that Alaron is weak and would likely get beaten up if he tried to fight most people.

With regards to use of a bow and Alaron's accuracy it's basically what it says on the tin, a decent shot. While true even becoming decent requires hours of practice, hours seem insignificant when stretched over the course of years. Nothing rigorous of course, a few shots here or there once ever month or two I feel is enough to become competent at it. To speak on strength taking a few shots with a simple bow isn't too much to ask from even a weak person. I'd argue strength becomes a factor when holding a shot for extended periods of time, sustaining numerous shots in a battle situation, or pulling the draw on a massive warbow.
Alaron's feet ached and his throat was parched. The journey from the Imperial City had been taxing on his body. He had deliberately left early for Valenwood, only possessing enough money to afford a carriage as far as Skingrad. He was no adventurer, and this showed through in his preparedness for on foot travel. By the time he had reached the border to Valenwood he was already dehydrated, carrying with him only a meager amount of water. His affliction was only amplified by the foolish decision to continuously smoke his pipe throughout the journey.

The thought of passing a border checkpoint frightened him. He was given assurances that the documents he received would fool the guards but it did little to comfort him.

Miraculously he managed the crossing only receiving minimal questions despite a heavy aroma of tobacco and moon sugar. The guard had seemed almost hurried in his processing of Alaron, perhaps an indication that his shift was nearly over and had important plans for the evening.

Alaron progressed towards Arenthia, keeping a slight westwards heading as the notes instructed. He felt the heat was almost unbearable in his fur-lined coat, but sadly it was the only coat he owned. Steadying himself on tree trucks and wheezing through a throat with sandpaper texture by this point he felt he must be nearing on the meeting site. He propped himself up against a tree to catch his breath and listened to his surroundings. A few birds called in the distance and the vegetation sounded as though it was scraping and brushing against itself in a constant war for sunlight. He pulled at a few leaves, continuing to gasp for air till he heard voice in the distance. A loud call rang out from between the trees.

Alaron's body plummeted beneath the vegetation. The voice sounded comforting, like a greeting. Still, Alaron wasn't about to take any chances, certainly not in a place as foreign as Valenwood. His breathing slowed as he focused, edging his way towards the source of the voice. Foliage was not a terrain he was used to creeping through and every leaf that scraped along his coat rang out to him like a siren. As he grew closer he could hear murmurs. Short conversations grew louder and louder till his body reached a breaking point. The dehydration had wrapped its arms around his legs and pulled the man to his knees, partially toppling and snapping a small bush. Alaron could almost feel the campsite's gaze loom over his sweat glossed face.

By this point he couldn't take any more punishment and needed a break from his journey. Panting like he had run a marathon he emerged from the undergrowth and passed by a few trees, finally finding the campsite. His vision was blurred, and he made for the first upright tree once he was in view of the party. He attempted to make his descent to the clear ground graceful and scanned the group members who had arrived ahead of him.

His eyes were first drawn to the shimmer of steel armor worn by an Imperial. Alaron looked in disbelief and wondered how he wasn't as in poor condition as he was. Next was a Dark elf, who had the look of a college type about him. He noticed the containers strapped across his chest and it reminded him of the Imperial City's researchers he viewed taking samples from the surrounding water.

Alaron could make out another man, tall with long dark hair and he could make out a battle-worn face. He thought of the hired muscle and large doormen he encountered working for various crime syndicates. Next was a Khajiit, and Alaron's eyes lingered on the creature's black fur. It was like staring at a walking shadow, and Alaron felt envious seeing the advantage of such camouflage.

Lastly was what Alaron assumed to be a Wood Elf. Once he managed in a great show of willpower to pull his gaze from her attire he took note of the extensive tattoos covering the wood elf, particularly adorned upon her face. He would have gawked a moment longer but had to wipe the sweat from his eyes. It felt as though someone was pouring a jug of sticky mead atop his head, except at a boiling temperature.

He drew a few more gasps for air before uttering his first words to the group.

"Greetings." he winced, unable to sustain eye contact with any of them.
I'll have my post up tomorrow for certain.
Ok, made the quick change to Alaron's backstory.

As a quick side note to extrapolate on Hector's use of Alaron through the Penitus Oculatus, I thought it could go along the lines of the Penitus Oculatus mainly decide to use him for tasks because they can quickly disassociate with him should he ever be caught sneaking around on their behalf.

Not saying this necessarily has to come up in story but I thought it would be a more concrete reason for the Penitus Oculatus to employ a low life like him, that and I couldn't find a good way of shimmying it into his backstory properly.

Sorry for the delay, my work recently changed to 10 hour shifts as opposed to 8 hours so I'm still adjusting.


A few things as an aside.

After completing this CS I read in Hector's that one of his achievements was rooting out a Thalmor spy. What I wrote in my CS regarding spies was not intended to be a means of upstaging @Hank and I'll be happy to make adjustments if it does not seem believable.

Furthermore I do realize it's a bit campy to use what is in essence my profile picture as my character's appearance picture but I do genuinely feel it fits what I'm going for with this character in the sense of this teetering balance between an adept rogue and psychological mess I've written up.

Anyway let me know what you think


Ignore this for the time being. Ran a bit short of time tonight while writing this up. Hopefully will have it done in the next 2 days or so.

Will let you know when it is finished. This is an early work in progress, just don't have a good means of saving it externally at the moment.
Well now this looks interesting.

I'm especially drawn to the note on making characters be aware and affected by the horrors around them. Reminds me of the game Darkest Dungeon. I've always been a fan of making characters flawed in some sense. Whether it be through cowardice, greediness, selfishness, or any other combination of undesirable traits as it always helps make a character feel that much more real and makes them so much more interesting.

I'd be interested in submitting a character if you're still taking people on.

Something along the lines of a common Imperial thief as far as professions are concerned but from a character perspective an emphasis on cowardice and anxiety when put in certain uncomfortable situations that I could extrapolate on later. Oh and we'll throw in an addiction of some kind while we're at it for unpredictable mood swings and lapses in judgement brought on by withdrawal.

As a disclaimer while I have played Skyrim and Oblivion I've never delved too deeply into the lore so I may make the odd misstep.
Well I think I'm going to duck out of this. Been a bit too quite for my liking.
I see. Thank you for the clarification.

Now I just feel a bit silly for overreacting. :p
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