EldarionI

Relatively Generic Medieval Fantasy

Thanks for helping guys :) @NewShoesForever@Avali@twannyman

Relatively Generic Medieval Fantasy

@AvaliAnything else I can do to improve? :)

Relatively Generic Medieval Fantasy

@NewShoesForever Thanks :D Anything else you think I can improve on? :)

Relatively Generic Medieval Fantasy

@NewShoesForever@twannyman Thanks guys :) Have you seen the post I did yesterday, I've edited the format a bit :) Do you think it looks better? :)

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The view indeed was impressive. But Hanjaro wasn't looking for a good view.

"Are you from around here, miss," he asked the young girl. He was looking for someone and wondered if this girl could help.

"I would pay handsomely for a guide."

Relatively Generic Medieval Fantasy

@NewShoesForever@twannyman What do you guys think of my writing so far? :) PM me if you want :)

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I'll have more again next year though but that's ages away!! :o

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Finished my exam now so I can do more than one RP at a time ;)

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I raise this topic from the death!! :D

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Hanjaro was slightly caught off guard by the presence of someone else on the roof. He wasn't used to 'behaving' in a city and was aware that the best place to get a feel for where you were was by climbing a rooftop and getting a better view of your surroundings. Not very often did he come across company whilst on a roof.
"Hello, I'm Han. I'm just looking for a good view spot," he said in his usual gruff tone.
"Why are you on the roof?" he asked blunty.