I definitely well. For the moment though, it seems that the musical battle between Garie and Hibiki+Chris+Whomever else joins in, will begin shortly.
@Flamelord As long as it isn't silly OP Apocalypse stuff it should be OK. You did say she's level 3, approx, so you could climb up to level 4 power levels if you want.
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Okay. *cracks knuckles*
First off, you're missing something from the rules. Please read them to see what it is. I think I see it but maybe put it somewhere else as well
Next, I would prefer you to have one Noble Phantasm. The knife is good, and you don't have to have it decline in effectiveness, but the curse is a problem as you could be virtually immortal, which presents a problem. Also it could be loosely interpreted and it'd just be a huge issue and hassle later on. ex. 'But my character was born by c-section' or 'but mine was born magically' and so on and they don't need evidence.
Then please explain your abilities, the names give us a vague idea of what they could be, but I'd like to know what they do.
History, you say that the legend was reinterpreted, but pretty much this was a real person so he shouldn't have been affected by that. How does what Willy Shakes did change him as a person?
Noble Phantasm: Gate of Babylon.
If Ruiko tones down the temper I sense an awesome duo, master-apprentice. O: