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@Seirei No Hai I think Hildr would like your servant very much haha
That's right people! Aliira is a candy store bear mascot! Y'all should've seen that coming! lol
Aliira Van Drauga





"Welcome one and all to the magnificent Wonderland of Delights!" A beautiful voice called out to the entering family into the large toy and candy store. The sweet sing song voice came from a rather small polar bear wearing a red and white striped apron. Despite her incredible performance it wasn't actually a polar bear that was able to talk, but little Aliira wearing a costume. Aliira was only around five feet and five inches tall with a petite frame so she was the only one small enough to wear the costume, which she absolutely loved. It was truly a match made in heaven for Aliira.

Aliira practically danced up to the family who had entered the shop, moving effortlessly in the fuzzy costume. "Welcome, welcome!" She sang as she approached, crouching a little to get in eye line of the children. (Which if she is being honest wasn't much of a crouch...) The two children's, one boy and one girl, eyes lit up with excitement as they saw the signature figure of the establishment approach. "Why I hope you kept your appetite. As you explore this wonderful world you may taste many amazing sugary treats!"

The children frowned a little, "Our parent's told us we had to eat all our vegetables before we could come...." They practically whined.

Aliira gasped, fuzzy paws covering the mouth of the costume. "Did you not know!?" She spoke as if it were some secret knowledge these kids hadn't learned. As the children shook their heads confused Aliira continued. "Well let me share a little secret..." Her voice trailed off, looking either way as if to check if devious ears might hear the secret. She then leaned in closer

"Vegetables actually make candy taste better." She whispered the most secret of secrets. The kids seemed a bit in disbelief. "Oh, you don't believe me? Here, try this." She stated before stuffing her pawed hands into the pocket of her apron and produced two salt water taffies, holding them out to the two.

The eagerly took the candy, eager to find out the validity of the bears words. Quickly unwrapping the taffies they threw them in their mouths and began to chew. Their eyes lit up as they sweet candy coated their taste. They whispered back and forth in disbelief it was actually true. Aliira stood up tall (figuratively) and put her fists to her hips triumphantly. "See? Now then, remember to always eat your vegetables so your desserts taste even better!" She then looked behind the kids to their parents, they both giving her a smile in thanks.

"Come now kids, let's see the rest of the store." The parents cooed sweetly down to their children and ushered them deeper into the store. The children waved goodbye and thanked the Candy Bear, Aliira waving good bye with delightful enthusiasm.

----------Time Skip; End of shift, 6:58pm.

Aliira began to pull herself out of the costume as she stood alone in the employee changing room. She sighed in relief as the cool air hit her hot skin. Even though she absolutely loved being the store mascot she had to admit; she was not a fan of how hot the costume got throughout the day. She was only grateful that the store cleaned the costume after every shift so she didn't need to get into a gross and sweaty suit every day.

Once she was free of the costume in full she took a seat on one of the benches, taking a hand towel she had with her and padding off some of the sweat. She was wearing a casual grey tank top and some snug fitted gym shorts; her shoulder length brown hair a mess with sweat and constant tussling under the helmet of the mascot costume. She pushed her messy hair back and pinned it there with a couple of simple bobby pins. Grabbing her phone out of her bag she unlocked the screen to see she had a messaged. Opening it she gave it a quick read; 'A meeting tonight? Something must've happened...' She thought to herself as she quickly went back to her home screen and opened her news app. There, the first story on the screen. She quickly opened it and read through the details.

Her heart sank into her stomach. There's no natural reason a train would derail in such a way. Those poor souls that were lost. Why did the world have to be so ugly at times...
Completed my relationship section for everyone. Please let me know if anyone wants something changed :)
@Reflection what is "EX" rank?


@Grape

For Hildr, keep in mind she can still be killed in a Holy Grail War. Since it'd be incredibly unfair to others if she can just shrug off anything that gets tossed at her. Accepted with that condition in place.
Loralie is fine. She's accepted.


Oh, 100% Hildr can die in the holy grail :P I had no intention of making her unkillable. Valkyries can fall in battle but they would simply return, though that's in Asgard. In Midgard if she dies she would leave this plane and rejoin her sisters in Asgard. On Midgard she has a pseudo mortality where she can very much be damaged and killed. And she even welcomes the possibility. Dying in such a grand battle as the Holy Grail War would, she believes, bring honor to her and if she were to be bested she hopes that would be enough to allow her access to the Great Halls of Valhalla to Drink, Eat, and Fight.

Edit: All in all the Holy Grail War is a Win-Win for Hildr. :P


@Reflection Believe I finished up Hildr. I still need to complete Loralie. Please let me know if anything needs adjusting on Hildr. I will probably do the finishing touches on Loralie in the morning along with any changes needed for Hildr.
@Grape Not bad. Something like wind would probably require a catalyst. (Most magic now a days does in Fate. The ones usually exempt from the catalyst rule tend to be Casters, but they're from a long period ago where magic was more powerful.) I want to see what you come up with for a history and personality.
As for your Servant, I recommend fluffing the backstory a bit. Like of the particular stories about this particular Valkyrie. Lancer's tend to have Magic Resistance (Usually the higher the rank the more they resist.) and as a Valkyrie she'd probably have divinity as a skill. (Which just means she's divine and certain people might be weaker to that.) Also consider your Noble Phantasm a bit. (Some servants have more than one, so you can mess around a bit with ideas. I recommend using Name: /Rank: /Type: /Description: to help you flesh it out more. (Type is usually anti-person/anti-army/Bounded Field, etc. (Bounded Fields are usually some kind of area buff or territory that the servant is stronger in. Anti-person is single target, and Anti-Army is your super move that could wipe out an army.) Also, as a Valykrie consider a skill based around judging others, like seeing lies.


Thank you so much for clearing up some stuff! I have seen a bit here and there of the show so I have a general, baseline idea of the concept so the help is truly appreciated.

For Loralie I will give her some sort of catalyst to use her magecraft. Also, finish up her personality and bio.

For Hildr I'll adjust accordingly! :D I will flesh out more of a backstory though most of it will be made up, as what I have written down was all that was available on the wiki haha. I will try my best to keep it all in the vein of what is already established with Hildr.
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