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Alright, I know I'm waiting for a few other parties to make their CSes (POOHEAD in particular) but I don't believe we'll get so far in the IC they can't easily jump in. I'll be writing the IC Opener. Hopefully we shall commence on our peaceful home of Dantooine rather soon in the next few days.

If anyone knows anything about HK-47, I'm kind of excited to see Markus interact with him. When we get to that point, and I so hope we do... Oh it'd be so good.

Alright, boomlover. You did well for an organic meatbag :P

Accepting your CS! I might edit slight grammatical things here and there when I have the time, but that's really it. I don't have many qualms. Allow me to throw Markus into the binnnn
Hmmm. Not quite! Lol, sorry if it feels like I'm picking on you. I'm not, I swear.

Some answers needed here. How long has he been in isolation? He's 39, so that suggests it might have been some amount of time. He's old enough to have somewhat of a knowledge of the Exar Kun War (would have been a teen then, perhaps).

Anyway, it's still unlikely he'd master four forms. He has age, experience, combat experience, so I'd say a certain level of expertise in two forms is definitely feasible. A crude knowledge of the other two forms you included is fine with me, after all; he's exiled and without a master to learn from. I'd say I recommend you have him be a master at one, and an expert at another. Intermediate or less at others. That many forms is just a lot, that's a lot of power especially because he's also expert at force push and pull. The combination of those and the numerous saber styles he has puts him on the level with high masters in the order!
Think I'm about ready to accept it. Had me concerned for a moment until you said he isolated himself, lol. Historically, Revan was a great pilot... so it's kind of hilarious that Markus is horrible. We have a pretty diverse cast in terms of personality, I'd say!

Small note: Looking up and reading a lot about the Sith could definitely be a secret, but I feel like his greatest secret would be killing in rage. Killing quite a few, in truth.

Ah, there it is. Did a quick scan before I found what would be something to edit. Being an exiled jedi knight, he wouldn't have access to the masters anymore. He'd have few holocrons or masters to learn these forms from in that kind of abundance. I'd suggest you cut down the number of forms he knows, and the number he has mastered.
I think you did pretty well here, we get the understanding she is a padawan so she wouldn't have the abilities a knight or master would. We also get the sense that she is a bit implosive -- hint hint this could be a foreshadowing of a path down to the dark. DUN DUN DUNNN. Lol. Anyway. We get a sense of character flaws too, which is good; and I'm sure they may show up more organically in play. So. Tossing Xeviiy up in dat bin right now.
Love it! Accepted and I have placed Ken into the character bin.
*flaps cape and does an epic hairflip*

I'm dark side fabulous!
@boomlover The quick and easy path leads you to the dark side!
@The Elvenqueen Lurk away to your hearts content! Any fan of Revan, is a friend of mine.

nice to see you guys are chatting like crazy !


And you. Stop procrastinating on your character!

I might have some interest, but I can't say I have a lot of time. Being a grown up sucks hard :p

That being said, I am a newly ascended Jedi Knight in a group I participate in irl, currently studying for my master exams. So ... I guess the purpose behind that statement would just be to show how much of a fan I am.

I'm not typically into fandoms, and I have two rp's taking up a lot of room on my plate. But if I can hang around and see how this goes, I might be obliged to make a character :)


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