Haeo

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I'm not working yet but I drive a school bus so I'll be working from around 5 or so in the morning until about the same time in the PM... Mon-Fri. Of course, there's a break of several hours in the middle on most days. So, I can't really compete with 12 hour shifts.

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@Jangel13

Heh, thanks for that. Now I just have to work on the characters I'm developing for another roleplay. One kobold is done, another is in process, then I've got the fairy, the lightning elemental, and the drake to finish.

... I'm crazy...

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Skrik has quite a ways to go as well.

I'm just a compulsive world builder... heh.

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@Jangel13 ... ... Don't worry?

Don't worry!?

WHAT ELSE CAN I DO BUT WORRY!!! IT'S MY LIFE'S WORK!!!

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Joking by the way. *snicker*

I am somewhat encouraged that you haven't already pointed out any critical flaws in it. Although, I know that might just be because you haven't had the time to go through it in detail. Anyway... as you are, no doubt, well aware... I will welcome any thoughts on the subject at all, even if my idea is still too far off base.

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@Jangel13 Have you had a chance to read the proposal I sent you? It was ten days ago, if your inbox is that busy.

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First shipping then chipping.

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@Kuroyomihime. Thank you. I am going to sleep my headache away... or at least try to get it to stop being a migraine.

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@Kuroyomihime

You're right. I re-read it and re-wrote it. There were entire layers of meaning that hadn't made it from my head to my fingers. I hope the updated version is alright. Sorry for the trouble. This headache is killing me. I'm going home to take a nap...

Oh, carp... I still have to go to the store. Well, at least this headache isn't a migraine yet. That's the last thing I need.

That said... if there are any other suggestions or alterations that you have/want done just let me know. I have no problem using the edit button. ;)

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@Haeo

I'm sorry, but I'll have to ask you to rework your post a bit for two reasons:

- Your character wasn't even shaken by a stun grenade detonating close to him since your post doesn't have a mention to dizziness, disorientation, or sluggish reactions of any kind.

- And you basically auto-hit an attacker while I avoided to do so even thought the ambusher had the advantage in that situation. I can allow for auto-hits in situations where it makes sense, but in a fight like that, not.

@Kuroyomihime

Ah, sorry. I'm trying to post through a nasty headache and I knew I was forgetting something. I will make adjustments for the concussion wave.

As for the melee portion, I was trying to express the pattern of movements that he would use if the first strike landed as intended. Given the actual speed of melee combat I was trying to show the behavior that Grave Trench had already trained himself to follow. Again, sorry. No auto-hit was intended. I will... think of something else or try to fix it.

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@Kuroyomihime But, if a grenade is detected then an opponent in a crouching or prone position is far more likely to try to go forward and finishing Grave Trench off with a lethal blade strike would allow the potential for a surprise attack on Kiss Shot. At least, that's what I was thinking. With all the grenades going off and the confusion involved in this battle, one more grenade wouldn't draw much attention.

However, if you would like me to adjust this post... or any post for that matter, simply let me know and I will do so. Then again, this post might work with either version of events. It just ends up with them in the space where Kiss Shot was standing whether or not the SHOUSUKE starts there.