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Grammar: It's the difference between knowing your shit, and knowing you're shit.
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You just needed to stop there :)

Anyway, welcome to the Guild!
In the top floor of the beautifully crafted three-story wood and brick home, which sat deep in the forest away from most of civilization that she knew of, Brynn stood in front of the tall mirror which was situated in the corner of her large bed chamber. Her head tilted slightly, the woman stared blankly at a naked body whose reflection showed prominent facial features, bright emerald eyes, shoulder-length dark hair, a petite frame, and smooth olive skin which she’d quite ignored in her otherwise day-to-day busy life of doing nothing all that important. Outward, she had the visage and physical appearance of one who could be no more older than in her late-twenties, and yet the reality was far from that as even an aging spell can’t fix everything. The years seemed to fly by, even for one who has lived an infinite number of lives, and yet a lot hasn’t changed. However, what became more noticeable as time went on, was the fact that her mind was feeling the affects like slowly fading color pigment from a painted canvas exposed to the light. It saddened her at that moment of realization, that at some point in her long life, she could very well become a hollow representation of the person she knew.

If they only knew me for who I am, rather than what they think I am.

The woman mused, as she stepped away from the mirror and headed to the other side of the room, rummaging through her clothes in the cluttered walk-in closet, the many dresses, corsets, leggings, shoes, and myriad of miscellaneous things hung and stored away in its proper place as she does each and every evening. Brynn pulled a long, elegant, flowy plumb-colored nightgown from the hanger, and slipped it over her body, allowing the lacey material to caress her features as the hem landed at her toes. Her attention turned to the window which looked out into the night, the vast garden, and the clear lake beyond that, her eyes eventually fixating on the fountain in the center of the body of water. She most enjoyed her morning swims, and the opportunity to watch as the sun itself rose above the horizon line, casting it’s warm glow onto her face, reminding her that there is always another day to live for.

She was suddenly pulled from her reverie by an usual feeling, as though something was quite off about her surroundings, by beyond that, further below her. Perhaps the second floor? No, the first? Brynn narrowed her eyes as she thought for a moment, wondering if she was already going mad, but in that moment, she headed out of her room and down the staircase, carrying with her a three-pointed candelabra, which illuminated the way with a magical blue flame.

@DawnsLight
@Tyler

See below for my completed CS, as well as the edited bits in the History section based on your comments.

Essentially, my initial IC post will start shortly after her departure from Rotsanger...


The only thing I would comment on is that there were perhaps some liberties taken with the Nosferytes outside of what we discussed (each House rules itself, for example; there is no council of elders).


Yeah, the "council of elders" was more of a gathering of the House leaders, which is probably how I imagined it.

Either way, these are minor and its no problem making those changes, and then I'll present you with my full CS.

Thanks for your feedback :)
I also have interest from a couple additional people via PM who inform me they are working on characters, so I keep feeling obliged to wait for them.


I did send you my characters bio about a week ago so hopefully you'll have a chance to comment in the event anything should be amended.
In Hullo 6 yrs ago Forum: Introduce Yourself
hiya @Briiar, welcome to the Guild. There are plenty of fantasy genres floating around so no doubt you'll find a home :)
Welcome to the Guild @angry kitty!
Welcome @traarjo! Glad to see Google came in handy :)
FYI @Tyler, still finishing up my CS. It's been a slow process with RL getting in the way as usual :/

I should have something for you by Monday.
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