IcePezz

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@boomlover check your post :p there were links? In there, that's what they were commenting on. Otherwise, it was fine.

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We could use someone, but I'm gonna be really picky/critical why?

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Lol

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Thanks, and also the last post you sent to @boomlover is one of the most helpful posts I've seen on this site

@The Fated Fallen

Aw, thank you! I am here to help however I can :) that same advice was given to me by a friend and was the most helpful thing to refer to when developing a character. :)

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@The Fated Fallen haha its ok, I left it open because I knew something was going to happen. She started to walk towards, with hopes of catching up. And left it at that. She most likely didn't get very far

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@boomlover haha I'm glad I could help. Just always ask yourself - how would my character react? What would he say/do? Where would he go and how would we go about doing it? Would he react to Isabeau toning her bitchiness down? Does he realize he doesnt even know anyones name? The flicker off the gold in her eye, did he see it? How would he have reacted to when Jade attacked Edict? How would he have reacted to any of them? Does he have any injuries that he might ask Tirarrian to look at? And what about the dwarf? Did he get a look at him? It's hard to keep all of these in mind, especially when you can't actually see it right in front of you. But they're all crucial points in creative writing. :) I'll always be here to help everyone out. You are also leaving on Tuesday, perhaps there may be time for more than one post :)

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@boomlover it's great to ask yourself these questions. It always helps me when I have a bit of writers block. It gets you to critically think about things in a way you might not have before.

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@IcePezz in his mind mind you. well im just gonna go to my place to crash and tell her if she ever needs some help just go to his place.

@boomlover

And of course :p but in his conversation with his sword, he called her a bitch. Granted, she is, and he has every right to feel that way. But my point is, don't just throw something together because you're leaving on Tuesday. Consider the relationships you've observed and what Robert has with the other characters. Consider him as a character, he already asked to join them. Is he the type to just abandon that and go off on his own? Would he invite the rest of the group back? Imo, this is an awesome way of evaluating your character and developing him :)

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That was Arena'so last post until he gets back from his own vacation. The fated fallen had said a bit ago that it would be cool to use this as down time, for some character development, etc. Nothing much else is going to happen until both you and Arena get back. If you want to invite everyone back to your home for safety reasons, that's cool. This is a great opportunity to think about what your character would do, especially now that the battle is over.

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Robert doesn't even know her name :p has no reason to trust her, and had called her a bitch before :p