You are so much better than me at this. All the skills look tons better.
However, linking Yamazuki to Kuchiki Daoshi won't work, since Yamazuki only grants Unstable if chained off Kai Lao. And, anyway, Nena isn't stupid. She would obviously, while fighting winged demons on the top of a skyscraper, kick off the demon after leaping up, so she flipped backwards and landed on solid ground again, if she was to close to the edge.
On your CS, it says 'He/She'. But, Space Marines are only ever male, due to their Geneseed crap...does that mean you are (Gasp, horror) allowing female Space Marines? Or just, because it looked nice?
Also, can I forgo Melee weapon for an additional ranged? Thinking Assault Cannon/Cyclone Missile Launcher.