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So again, what the fuck is happening?
Maximilian would not could not dodge but he will avoid that knife for it would not be good, in fact it takes his life. He does not like this dark skinned man, he does not like them here nor there, he does not like them anywhere. Max crouched and let the knife strike, tearing through cloth but not through steel. His armor kept him in the fight, so fight he will and fight for real. He jumped back and out of harm's way, this dark skinned man won't get him today. But pound against was Max against the man in garish armor, and Max's sword he pulled upon her. Fall back he did and far away, but fight again he would today. Max staggered about and regained his step. Defeated this man, he was not yet.

Maximilian will decide to take the charge but block the knife. He will fall back and let his weight carry him but regain composure in time to strike back.

Should his opponent attempt a charge, Maximilian would backflip onto his sword, wrap his legs around the opponent's body, and do a modified frankensteiner. His back, which cloth and armor covers in its entirety, is well protected. An attack on the front side of Maximilian's body, would only be used as leverage as Maximilian carries his opponent into the air to drop them on the ground below.

If his opponent were to attempt a ranged attack, he would use his zweihander as a paddle, getting on his knees to do a powerslide on the sand toward his opponent, head tilted back, leading with his codpiece. Should his opponent attempt a melee strike while he were down, Maximilian would push himself up on his feet to meet the strike with his codpiece, continuing to joust with it. Should his opponent try another spray attack i Maximilian's face, he would simply use his longsword to strike back.
@Doc Doctor

Again. Please clarify what your character is doing. Also, what position is he in?

I should have added this stipulation at the beginning, but could you stick to third person past tense? It'd make the thread feel more consistent.
As the spray of blood came for him, Maximilian hadn't actually had to move much but his elbow, which was already in front of his opponent's face. It splattered over his sleeves, soaking them red. Maximilian leaned back on his sword, stabbing it into the sand and fully extended his right arm for a backhand slap aimed at Zande's cheek.
Where'd the spray of blood come from? The dude bit himself? What artery in the mouth did he bite? Why do you think cutting yourself anywhere in the head would be a good idea in a fight? Like, have you ever cut yourself in the face shaving? That shit doesn't stop bleeding. How much blood is he losing? IIRC, you can lose 30% of your blood before fainting. An adult male has like 3 liters and most of it is in the spleen.
I think I want to make it a rule that my RP partners can only use past and imperfect tense. Like, the first person to use more than 10 sentences with future tense loses.
Maximilian swung his sword in full arc, allowing the blade to fall to the ground, kicking up dust and sand as it dug itself into the beach. Zande seemed to have dodged- quicker than Maximilian had first anticipated- but nothing faster than what he had already dealt with. His visor allowed fairly limited vision, though he could tell that his assailant had dodged to the right. His neurons were firing quickly, instinct and muscle memory worked in tandem as Maximilian let go of the handle of his sword with his right hand. His right arm kicked out into a chicken wing shape. As Zande was coming close, Maximilian swung his elbow at Zande's chin in attempt to halt his animal biting motions.

Maximilian's left pulled the sword from the sand as he was moving his right arm to hit Zande. Maximilian shifted slightly both compensating for the weight on his left side and bracing for what he was certain would be Zande's lower jaw meeting Maximilian's elbow. In spite of being covered in two layers of clothing, there was still thick armor covering his arm which Maximilian was intent on using to bash his opponent, hopefully ending the fight.
@Doc Doctor

But also yeah. What the hell is your dude trying to do? Where is he cutting or trying to do otherwise? Is he even attacking, or just closing the distance?
Just kinda nitpicky here. If it's supposed to be a stabby weapon and not a cutty weapon, how come it's got a serrated edge?
@Doc Doctor

How's the knife work? What's it made of? How long exactly is it? How good is it at cutting through cloth? How good is it at cutting through armor?
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