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GOSSK, feeling mildly amused by Lynn's comment over Licks, was content to let the merlady speak uninterrupted. He remained in a kneeling position, his cowl drooping slightly as the wind rustled it. The Dracodile took a moment to process his words--a reoccurring lapse in conversing in which Lynn might notice a pattern whenever Gossk engaged in communicating. He was almost more excited to take in her Common than to actually reply; It was an overload that showered his draconic brain with grammar and tenses, not to mention tones and enunciation. Language was a beautiful thing, Gossk knew, and it would be something, much like the terrain, flora, and fauna, that he would have to master in time.

He finally stood, rising slowly to his full height as he watched Lynn's reaction, not wishing to inadvertently intimidate her. Such was the contrast in their size that Lynn's line-of-sight was now level with his loincloth, which, though it flapped with the occasional breeze, revealed nothing risque; Rather, its red markings depicted a curious scene of a small reptile surrounded by larger ones.

As her cohort conversed peacefully with the fish lady, LICKS found it prudent to explore the scents and peculiarities belonging to the thing called Lynn. The reed cat meandered over to her confidently, stopping to sniff her little webbed toes, and then her ankles and thighs. She smelled good. Rubbing up against Lynn's legs, Licks almost wished that they could eat her--the taste of fish was a treat the feline could hardly ignore. Licks would have to make do with sharing her cohort's company. She kept moving and rubbing, her tail slightly elevated to show friendliness.

The Dracodile turned to the northeast with half a pace, his large spiky tail brushing the sand as it balanced him and flicked harmlessly towards the merlady. Lynn could actually now see that some kind of wooden shield and crude blunt weapon were hooked into the spikes on his side, as though he was using the spikes to holster his weapons. With an outstretched hand, Gossk murmured and croaked, "Not a sea, Lynn. The, ah... narshland, it is close to the large dark thorest... and on the, uh, east shore on this sea here..."

He turned towards Lynn, lowering his arm as he gestured with the other. "Ny quest is to ex'lore an', ah... conquer the thears--to acquaint nu teotle an' gain disscern'nent on the, uh... 'oorld," he added, then glancing at the Crystal Sea from which they had both emerged. "Ny journey led to a thork here, on this sea an' the desert o'er there." Gossk's eyes then turned to the Killamin Desert, its distant dunes dancing with a dastardly wind and dizzying heat.

"I chose the sea," Gossk continued, a hint of regret in his growling voice, "an' it is too dangerous, as a... ah, shark, yes, it tried to eat nee, an' thanks to you, I suther only a little soreness."

He took two steps then, his large stride bringing him completely past Lynn as he assumed a stooped posture behind her. Gossk was careful to not brush up against the merlady, nor prick her with his tail. Facing the desert region, he knelt once again, looking down at the ground as Licks sauntered into his view, looking up at him curiously.

"As to ny, uh... dett, you had said your heart's intentions--to do right. So nou ny reason is stronger, so it is that ny heart shall get the sane thing--to do right dy you," Gossk insisted, hoping Lynn would relent her modesty and take what was rightfully hers.

Gossk would then inquire where she's from, and where she was going. He'd let her speak, waiting patiently and nodding on occasion. He'd make comments here and there, hinting that he would like to join her on her quest, if only because he would learn so much--in fact, at one point, he would compliment her intelligence. Gossk would also explain that his cat's name is Licks, and if Lynn were to ask why, Gossk and Licks would look at each other, and then he'd say, because she licks.

And Licks would, on que, lick her lips.
Okay thank you. I'll redesign the Marauder then later tonight and set it up according to your wishes. No worries either way. :) Thank you for the help guys.
@Cleverbird

I definitely want Julian to have to rely on his teammates, and his Marauder having glaring weaknesses will force him to accept that fact. The Marauder's role as Forward Assault, I'm imagining, will mean he's part of the tip of the spear that breaks into an enemy's formation/base, and paving the way for the rest of his group to come up behind him and lay down the law. Base Breaker just means the Marauder should be able to break down walls and armored fortresses. Then, Zone Control, he should be able to help prevent enemies from getting through an area (say a choke point).

So if you guys have ideas on how to tweak the Marauder, let me know. I'm probably the least experienced one here in mech lore and mechanics.

EDIT: @Senhara Hey lol. Okay so I can make him a siege unit with long range capabilities, but he can go closer if needed? I want to keep the pistons and grapple hooks if possible. Hmm, and yeah I'll remove the waist rotation.
So I thought about the Marauder, and what I was thinking last night as I chose each armament. I had intended for it to be able to counter smaller faster Frames with its Advanced Rotation System and Shield Focus Array. It can focus all of its shield power into one direction and lock it onto an enemy, say that it is circling the Marauder. Its rotation system helps it keep track of a target moving around him. This keeps its Grappling Claws, Autocannon, and pistons lined up with the target, in theory? Coming in close to bash on his enhanced Shield opens them up for a flurry of attacks from his Claws, Cannons, and Pistons, I would think.

I could rewrite his Flash Skates to allow him to make evasive maneuvers for situations like that as well. So he can still be fast, just not as fast as a Frame with less mass.

Also, melee-orientated Frames might have to deal with the back spikes if they're not careful--they're not small 'bumps' that you brush up against and shear metal. We're talking multiple impalements in different parts of the body if Julian times it just right. And then they get electrocuted....

Granted, if he's ever in a situation where he's dealing multiple smaller faster Frames at one time, he's just as screwed as anyone else might be. And that's a matter resolved by proper tactics and team strategies, right?
@Senhara@Cleverbird
I understand. I knew that in making the Marauder. I'll see if I can't tweak it a little bit. Cleverbird is actually thinking what I'm thinking regarding teammates and covering each other. But I'll tweak it a little bit so that the Marauder can have something against medium builds, even if it doesn't let him win every time.

Just so I understand, what is an 'extremely fast CBQ build?'
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This CS has been revised, making the initial comments on it below obsolete.

THE INCREDIBLY PRIVILEGED reed cat, Licks, had just returned to her cohort's approximate location, a pair of large hares dangling from her mouth and dragging along the ground. She knew her cohort would be hungry after a nap, so she had spent some extra time hunting for a suitable portion. Licks immediately crouched behind some tall grass, dropping her prey as her eyes spied the strange water creature emerging from the ocean and wading to the beach towards the satchel. Glancing at her catch one last time, Licks crawled a little closer towards Gossk, her superb stealth keeping her hidden. Her paws flexed slightly, her claws kissing the soft ground. She wanted to be within leaping distance if the creature decided to attack her utterly defenseless cohort.

Gossk heard Lynn's surfacing long before he opened an eye to observe her approach. In fact, he knew that Licks had returned from her hunt, due to how she liked to chase down really large prey and drag it along like some joyful little child. However, the reed cat's exact location remained unknown to him, which did prompt him to open his eyes and scan the grass--he didn't see her. 'Good,' he thought, feeling proud of his pet's training and obedience. The Dracodile turned his massive head ever so slightly towards Lynn, his discerning eyes eating up the full image of her body, particular features, gait, and even the small micro-expressions betraying her nervousness and fear. 'What... is this? What thing have you sent to test me now, Illorassk?' Gossk pondered, not even sure if he should think that the shark had been some kind of aquatic beastman and this thing was his minion sneaking up to finish the job. In fact, it had already stolen his satchel, so it was obviously seeking to rob whatever leftovers it believed him to possess.

Gossk remained perfectly still as Lynn watched her step and, with each closer step, peered down at him with growing intensity. The behavior confused the Dracodile a little bit, making him rethink her aquatic-beastman-minion status. Maybe it was just a curious thing? He had encountered many of those, ate most of them. Except his pet. His labored breathing suddenly interrupted his thoughts and shook him violently. He blinked a few times, openly staring at her now and letting her know that he was aware of her encroaching presence. Her sudden haste made him squirm even more, but the debilitating pain stopped him and ushered from him a small, pained growl. He couldn't even shift his legs into a coiled position, and it frustrated him. 'Fear, I see, but what is that look?' he questioned, his eyes squinting as she dared to kneel next to him, even with his satchel placed next to him, instead of her.

That action alone shifted Gossk's perspective of Lynn immediately.

'What...?' he thought, using his arms to lift his upper body a little as he eyed his satchel, and then at her as she spoke to him in Common; 'twas an odd, but useful language that he was still mastering. Moreover, he was always eager to hear people speak it whenever he could afford the opportunity. The mere fact that Lynn was using the power of word to relate to him, instead of claw, tooth, or even a big stick, calmed the Dracodile immensely, almost to the point of shock. No creature of the Wilds would do such a thing. And so, Gossk submitted to Lynn, grunting in affirmation as he looked away, which was one of a few signs of trust in the Wilds. You don't just casually turn your back on a predator, nor do you keep your eyes trained on an ally.

Lynn's process of removing water surprised Gossk and as he coughed and hacked, he took note of her gentleness. It was not something that he was used to, albeit Licks was the closest thing that provided him a semblance of infrequent, but genuine intimacy. His eye followed the water, fascinated by the thing's skill in magic--in this case, a kind that he had never seen before. Her incantation amused him as well, and he even found it inspiring. Again, another feeling that he hadn't felt in such a long time. In the back of his mind, Gossk wondered if this thing was a divine creature, spawned by Illorassk himself. His pain relief was wonderfully quick and as he assumed a better position to stand up, which was sort of a half crouch, the watery creature proved skittish and moved away. That was fine. 'This thing is... respectful,' he concluded.

Her glances at him and his satchel were effective in getting him to check himself and get his bearings. Gossk noticed the seaweed and peeled it off. He also realized that his various skull trophies have disappeared, probably due to that damned shark; in fact, he noted the absence of each one and recalled the fond memories. 'This saddens me, but it cannot be changed. I will simply make more some day,' he told himself, seeing that his savior had decided to brandish a large, metal beam that contained water. The Dracodile couldn't tell if it was a weapon of war or a tool for discipline. Perhaps it was both, only Illorassk knew.

At her inquiry to his well-being, Gossk resumed rising slowly, but didn't stand completely. As he knelt before her, he still had to look down at her, given her 5' 4" height. He simply said, with a deep, half-growling voice, "Yess, thanks to yoou."

Each word that he spoke in Common contained an odd twist attached to each syllable, as though the Dracodile was substituting different sounds for others that he wouldn't pronounce. The reason why he might do this would probably not be apparent to Lynn, but Gossk was used to quizzical leers when he spoke Common. At least his fluency in it wasn't anything like his native tongue, which he seldom spoke and for good reason. The posture-dependent, gesture-laden, and complex language of Rasskarr was more like watching a pair of reptiles hiss and growl at each other, with taunts and feints, than an actual civil conversation between two life-long friends. In other words, Gossk didn't speak much.

Licks, sensing that everything was alright, returned to retrieve her catch. She carefully trotted towards Gossk and Lynn, giving the latter a wide berth and a sustained side glance. Just as her cohort picked up her sleeping bag and assumed a kneeling position, as he is wont to do when showing respect to non-prey, the reed cat placed the two hares a few feet away from Gossk, then sat promptly next to him to receive her reward. Petting her head and then scratching her chin with a claw, Gossk spoke once again, looking down at the notorious hunter, "Good, Licks, good..."

After storing the hares into his satchel, Gossk returned his attention to Lynn, adjusting his cowl so it wasn't covering his brilliant purple eyes that much. Though he looked at her, she might notice that he avoided direct eye-contact with her. He chose his words carefully before speaking. "Strange one, you restored ny, ah, lisse, err, ny tine here... yes, so... I shaall serde you until it is, uh... 'aid too tines o'er. Do not norry, Illorassk secures it so nine... integrity grants nee strength to do this to you."

His oath was not as eloquently stated as Gossk thought it was, but his determination was evident in his eyes, if Lynn could see. But even Licks had to stop staring at Lynn and glance up at her cohort because he sounded like he was gargling vomit and hairballs. She wondered if she should be concerned. She decided to wait anyway.

Regardless, a life debt was not something that Gossk would shy from, for he had saved his own kind before and had it repaid. He knew now that the shark attack was a means to an end, to bring him here so that Illorassk might bless him with an ally--a gentle one at that. 'Illorassk is good,' Gossk thought, with a nod before suddenly remembering that he'd forgotten something.

"Ny nane iss <Gossk Quor-dek>," he stated to Lynn, placing his hand on his chest and speaking his own name in Rasskarr. He didn't feel it prudent to spend time translating his own name's meaning.

He gestured towards her then, asking erroneously, "Hoo are you, uh, called?"

As though to emphasize his question, Licks meowed inquisitively at Lynn, but remained at Gossk's side as she cease sitting and flexed her paws again.

Elsewhere... NORTHEAST of Portea, along the windy shore of the Crystal Sea.

A frantic FELINE with reddish brown fur paced back and forth, her little paws leaving tiny tracks in the wet sand. Under the overcast weather, the reed cat's sharp greenish eyes tracked something adrift in the water and no matter how violently the waves ebbed and flowed, she dared not turn her gaze away, at least not for too long. The raw threat of predators captivated her attention, especially given what had just happened to her and her cohort. Regardless, she occasionally yowled out to him in hopes of rousing his ire. It had always worked before, but she couldn't understand why he wasn't responding. A few times she bravely attempted to traverse the salty water, but it was far too cold for her liking, and being out of her element went against every survival instinct in her bones.

Snap. The reed cat froze in mid stride, her black-tipped ears arching up as she stared a few yards to her right at the source of the unnerving noise, some dark foliage further inland. A minute passed before she felt free to glance around, but then she turned once again towards the Crystal Sea. Fortunately, her cohort continued bobbing up and down in her sight, drifting ever closer to the shore. The reed cat followed along as the wind ushered him gently, the sand and dust also rising up and around her long legs. He gradually reached the entrance of a shallow pond that connected the mainland to the sea. As he came to a stop upon the sand, she knew that this was her chance.

With a running leap that was all too natural for her kind, the reed cat landed upon her cohort's hulking mass, being careful not to touch the multitude of spikes on his backside. He was covered in seaweed, which she sniffed curiously as she made her way towards the back of his large, bulging neck. Her moist nose poked his eye gently as she let out a soft mew, as though pleading. She had succeeded in her mission: She had reconnected with her Dracodile and booped him to let him know that she was there and that everything would be alright.

Black and white images flashed through Gossk Quor-dek's mind: He'd captured a large fish. He groaned as something rubbed up against his left eyelid. He tore into it hungrily as he floated in the Crystal Sea. Softly growling with a wince, he opened his eyes, the world of color raking over his irises. Blood surrounded him in the water, and a shadow grew towards him. He blinked, feeling an odd weight on his neck. Jaws... that was all he saw before something took hold of him, shaking him like a rag doll. A pair of green eyes loomed into view, causing him to focus on it.

'Licks...?' Gossk thought, realizing that he and his pet were alive. He fought for his life, clawing, biting, cursing Illorask.... Suddenly, everything that had happened replayed in his mind in a rapid, accurate sequence. He had heard tales of monsters that his Rasskarr elders called 'razor mouth', but humans called them sharks. At the very thought of it, fear startled Gossk and he mustered every bit of strength he had left and looked behind him, at the Crystal Sea. He croaked a defiant growl, though it was more like a shudder, as he crawled away as fast as he could. The pond was only a yard away, yet it seemed like miles to the Dracodile.

Upon touching the pond's surface with an outstretched claw, Licks immediately found it necessary to leap off of him and sniff his hand. He watched her, somewhat annoyed. He didn't have food for her, not yet. The mission had been a failure and he made a mental note to never enter the Crystal Sea again, at least not without learning how to utterly destroy any and all sharks.

As he tried to relax, the adrenaline began to wear off and the pain that he wasn't feeling before overwhelmed his senses, causing him to squirm and choke in between panted breaths. He wasn't sure where he was hurting, but it felt like everything was intact. His large satchel, unbeknownst to him, had washed up about 10 yards away, and it had been the first clue that Licks found to know that her cohort was nearby.

Licks watched him expectantly. "Go...hunt," Gossk rasped to her, his weakened voice sounding watery. The reed cat folded her ears, feeling somewhat disappointed. If she knew that she was going to have to hunt for her dinner that day, she would have already done so before saving him. But she butted her head on her cohort's jaw anyway. She then jumped over a bush, leaving him to the safety of the shallow pond.

Relieved that she had obeyed, Gossk knew that he just wanted to rest. He was certainly hurting, but his belly was full. As long as Licks got her fill, he knew everything would turn out alright. He wasn't about to give up just because a shark almost ate him. Who does that?

Name: Gossk Quor-dek. Close friends address him as 'Godek' at their own peril.
Age: 47
Race: Full-blooded Beastman (Dracodile)

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