LovelyAnastasia

The Five Demon Princes

@UnlosingRanger You're... Rather rude to the two people who own the Rp thread. Their authority and respect have no Reston to be challenged when they haven't abused their position or disrespected anyone else under their authority. Even in forum RPing there are social etiquettes we all go by so we call all have a successful Rp.

Not that it proves anything, but I've been RPing for eight years, on this site and two others. I'm a senior is college who has taking classes in short story writing, script writing and basic fiction writing. Not to mention a few poetry classes on the side.

Tone is represented through certain sentences and how we use them, since you cannot here the voice of the author, it is implied.

And the tone of just a few of your sentences are not only rude, but condescending and arrogant. Just like in real life you need to think about what you say before you say it, or someone like me might take you for being a condescending, arrogant and rude child.

Summer Camp for Supernaural Teens

Tomohina

The girl continued to stare with and endless gaze at the burning girl. Did no one notice this? They all had sight and they couldn't see?! But the burning girl just put her arms behind her back and talked as if nothing were out of place.

"You don't hurt when your on fire..." The stunned petite girl repeated, "You just... get set on fire... Power? You're power? So it's completely normal? Is... everyone like this here?"

Sitting stunned on the ground, she gripped both of her hands tight. Nothing. Oh no. Her white cane. She must of dropped it. Turning her face down, she let her hands explore across the ground. Now just where- ah! She found it. Standing up, she brushed off her skirt and set the white cane in front of her. Her head tilted to the side slightly at the sound of someone else walking up to them.

"Your brother...drips, then?" she nervously gripped her white cane with both hands, sightless eyes gazing straight in between and endlessly past the two of them, "This... must be him then. I-I apologize for, well, panicking. It's just that I've never heard someone on fire and then..." She trailed off. And then what? 'Seen' their entire focused form just from the sound waves their body and flames had given off? She sounded crazy. She couldn't see! She was completely blind. She had been since she was seven. Her 'seeing'... Impossible! That'd be ridiculous!

@KatherinWinter

Orphanage for Supernatural Kids

Anna

Turning a bit pink, the pale tall girl cleared her throat to hide her embarrassment. She hadn't seen the little sprite of girl till she had come running noisily up to her. This girl would probably think she was just some hulking, bumbling barbarian...

But instead the girl flittered around her and even tried to shake her hand...hands. Which one to shake? No one had every tried shaking any of them before, much less stuck around to try and talk to her. Putting out one of her three right hands, Anna stifled a laugh. It was when the girl struck a funny pose just to try and be polite that Anna could no longer hold it back.

A left arm on her hip, another left arm on her stomach, and the last one behind her head, Anna's head fell back and she let out an amazing laugh. It was a deep and blunt laugh, one of uncontained humor. A laugh she hadn't had in a very long time. Finally it subsided and she let her furthest back left hand wipe a tear from her pupiless eyes.

"Sorry, sorry. Didn't mean to go laughing in yer face there," she said with a wild grin, "One hand is just fine, I think. It's just the people usually avoid me all together, rather than run right up to me." She grinned and leaned down a bit. "I hope I didn't piss ya off. The name's Anna. Nice to meet ya."

She stood up straight and looked around. In a relaxed stance she looked every bit as powerful as a girl with six arms might look at six feet tall. Easy power. Tightly coiled strength. A warrior. Funny how only when she wasn't worried about the extra arms that she looked in control of them.

"Yer right though," she looked back down at the short girl and grinned, "This place is the creeps, being all quiet and junk." Her two right arms picked her bags up once more, balancing the weight by trading one bag off to a left arm. There was no effort or even strain on Anna's face. Like it was perfectly natural to just use her extra arms for her bags.

"Sure, findin' others sounds like a good idea," she nodded once, "And I hope they're eatin'... Yer right about this place being like a horror movie er something. Total creepz."

@Teknonick

Summer Camp for Supernaural Teens

I'll be doing most of my replies from my IPad since my computer's cord broke or misfired or whatever the darn thing did. Sorry if I misspell thing >.< and if my replies come a bit slowly!

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Tomohina

The panic slowly started to fade, but the anxiety stayed like a hard ball of lead pressing down inside of her. The small girl released the bus. Her hand hurt. Hot metal probably was the best thing to go touching, but it had helped her out of that gloomy dense black fog of negativity.

Letting out a small sigh, she lifted her head. Turning it about, her eyes wide, she turned her head about like a satellite. Someone would probably just think she was a regular teen in the crowed, looking for something, but she was doing the closest thing she had to looking.

Sound waves were slightly different for every person that produced them, and it would be useful to try and remember just which sounds waves belong to who. The Unision Leaders spoke together, so they were a bit easier to locate, but all the others had their own oddities.

There was a girl who was producing her own sound waves, but also those of a crackling fire. Almost like she was on fire! Well parts of her anyway. But no one else seemed to be alarmed. What was wrong with them all?! The girl was on fire! But when that girl got close to her, she stumbled backwards.

Fire! I can smell it! I can hear it! Fire! No! No! Stay back! I don't want to catch on fire!

Silently the doll-like girl stumbled back before losing her footing and ending up right on her backside. Bewildered, she finally put her hand out, her sightless eye wide and trained on the burning girl, almost as if she could see her.

"F-Fire-!"

@KatherinWinter

Summer Camp for Supernaural Teens

@YamiCuoreLaroux
Ah you can do it! If a dummy like me can even do it a little, I know smart peoplez like you can do it!



Heh... I couldn't resist... I posted again... I am ashamed...

Summer Camp for Supernaural Teens

Tomohina

With a tilt of her head, she felt a few strands of dark hair brush past her cheek. The Japanese doll of a girl was short and petite, easily lost in crowds of her taller camp companions. In fact many of them simply didn't notice her at all. With her white cane hidden, she just looked like a daydreaming girl, completely normal in the crowd of teens. But she stood with her back straight, poised like a porcelain doll on a stand, her cast down, the faintest ghost of a smile on cherry pink lips.

I can hear it... The forest... I've never been so close before. Every bird, every leaf, it's all singing... I want to get closer. I want to hear all of it. The wind. The trees. The grass. It's so close. I wonder what it looks like...

Looking so calm on the surface, it was her thoughts that betrayed her. She was hardly paying attention to the other kids now. All she heard, all she felt, was something she had never been allowed to even get close to. A real forest, with in her reach. Her parents had alway forbidden her from getting to close to crowds, much less a forest. They had always been so certain that she would get lost or trip and fall to her death somehow.

But it was really there. And she could almost feel it calling to her. The sun slipping its fingers over her skin and the wind pushing through her clothes, she never felt more suffocated. It was dark. There was darkness everywhere. She couldn't see. She couldn't see! There was nothingness! A wave of panic washed over her and she gripped her cane tightly. The bus was still there, so she put her free hand on it. Hot metal. It almost burned. But it was there. There were things around her. She could hear the forest and everything it hid. People. There people all around her too.

Calm down. Calm down. Don't let it reach you. Don't let it take over. You can't see. That's all it is. Listen. Listen. There are people everywhere around you. You aren't alone. Calm down.

Letting out a shaky breath, she lifted her head up, dark cloudy eyes looking endlessly into the distance. It happened sometimes, the irrational panic. It was sound that always reached her though. Sound waves the rippled through the air causing chaotic images to come crashing around her. If she paid too much attention she couldn't handle everything she was 'seeing'. If she didn't pay enough attention her childhood nightmare would come to life and she would become disorient, alone in darkness. She hoped, at the very least, this camp would steady the roller-coaster of senses she waded through.

They will help. Listen. Listen to the voices around you and find the Unison Leaders.

Summer Camp for Supernaural Teens

@YamiCuoreLaroux
Sequ course really depend on what teacher you get. A lot are guys who just wanted to teacher Western comics (American comics) but you do get few than appreciate Easter style (managa, manhwa, and Chinese comics). It really does depend on your professor.

Oh exactly! I want to get better at meld a good story with beautiful detail~ I agree with you entirely! I really want to get better at not only telling a story to my readers, but transporting them into the world of the character as well! That would be the most amazing thing... I hope as I age I gain experience so I can achieve that goal~

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@YamiCuoreLaroux
I'm in Sequential Art (comics)~ I've taken a few fictions classes though. Words can weave beautiful images when the pen and brush are not enough~

Prose to my liking more than short story fiction. They always say I get too poetic XD To the point where people don't know what I'm say XD XD XD

@KatherinWinter Not at all. Sometimes I feel as though I am too young XD

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*quietly refrains from posting again because she is too excited*

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@YamiCuoreLaroux

I got art school where they drill you in how to be descriptive XD Plus I'm a senior is college *shrug* Lots of art people to get instructions from. And I have a fashion major roommate XD