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    1. Master Crim 12 yrs ago

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2 yrs ago
Current The proof of a healthy mind is not its ability to solve the problems that are before it, but the subconscious understanding not to for the sake of health itself.
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7 yrs ago
Ever look back on your old PM and think "Man that was the shit! Why did we stop?"
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8 yrs ago
As the bowl of patunias would say, as it falls through the air to meet the planet's hard rocky surface: "Not again."
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8 yrs ago
Is a man not entitled to the sweat of his brow? No says the man in Washington it belongs to the poor. No says the man in the Vatican it belongs to God. No says the man in Moscow it belongs to everyone
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11 yrs ago
Talking in riddles is fun. Putting them to poem is better. Presentation is the key.

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Why does anyone care
No one really looks at this part
Its all just pointless.

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Okey, finished it~
Contrast the evil and the good side of her, this is the first time when I wrote a purely "good" character, don't know how it turned out... >_>





You characters look pretty good, but there are a few things I would like to say.
1) As Neutral Good or Chaotic Neutral it seems odd for you to use Dementors and Succubus as servitor because they have always been evil creatures in everything I have read and seen.
2)I would like to see more of a Bio if possible such as what you did, who you helped the most, how you felt about the war, what your feeling where about the Grand Creator punishing everyone. Stuff like can be easy to write, and flush out your character more.
Okay, post is up. sorry it took so long. I tried to keep up with the current posts to make sure I didn't leave anything out, but I if I did miss something please let me know and I will address it ASAP.
Hal was on his way back down the mountain where Darko and himself had discussed and agreed that, whatever this new force is the, gods of both light and dark will need to address it together. Even with a greater evil against them Hal wasn’t sure that a plan such as this could work. There are some deeply rooted quarrels between all of them, and Darko especially. There was something down inside Hal that made him distrust Darko even with the changes he has shown. It is almost like Hal can feel that there is a darker side to his brother’s plans and drive. Just before Hal reached the edge of the travel barrier he felt his griffin call him, and share it’s sight with him. Hal watched through its eyes and heard through its ears as the unknown figure brutally attacked. Hal began sprinting as the figure addressed him of the death of his guardians, made threats of releasing the Forsaken Army and killed his griffin.

Once he was able Hal produced his horn and sounded it. It was not the same tone as last time, but instead a lower and fuller noise that would feel as though it could shake mountains, topple fortresses and carry to the ends of the world. There was a moment of echo after Hal finished blowing the horn and a rift opened to an area that had not seen the gods for some time, this was the war room that Hal and his servitors created during the Clash of Gods. He turned and looked to the sky before speaking to all gods of light “Friends, this is Hal, the one that X addressed in his prophecy of the fall has come forth. I have seen him, and he moves to release the Forsaken Army that Darko and I sealed in Anima Portas. By now he has entered the tomb, and none of us can get to him. We should gather in the Hall of War to plan for his next move.” After this Hal then connected with Darko. “Brother, I was too late to warn the guards, and as a result my griffin has fallen to the one we sought to stop, who calls himself Calcifer. We are meeting to plan a defense, and I will send a messenger to you with the report when we are finished.”

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As Calcifer began to enter the tomb he could feel a dark presence, but before he could look around to confront it he found himself in an infinite realm between the physical and the spiritual, X’s place of residents. Turning once more he came to face X as he stood from his chair and made a speech that was something of a congratulating for his deeds as well as a condemnation and threat. “You saw these events were going to happen yet you stood by and did nothing to stop or delay them? What a friend you are to the others.” Calcifer said adding a spiteful emphasis into it. “You think be to be that slow, That I would turn back simply because ‘forces beyond my mortal self’ scare you? Bah!” He spat at X before continuing. “My aim is not just to restore myself, and you the god of secrets should know this. My vengeance is exactly that, to kill and destroy everything and everyone that has forgotten me by your hand, but that is not it, I would have you sit in your… unwavering neutrality and watch as it all comes crashing to an end.” Calcifer was clenching his fists as he spoke and they began to turn back to what he was before, letting off small flicks of flame.

As X made his departure and made his statement of Calcifer being nothing more than a pawn the realm faded Calcifer looked on into the gaping blackness of the tomb as his hands returned to normal wondering if he would really enter the tomb or into another of X’s realms. He again felt the presence from before and turned this time to see several small trails of blood trickling towards him, and he slowly smiled, knelt down and watched the blood inch closer and closer. “Sekaulla, still up to you usual games I see.” He reached out and scooped some of the blood in his hand. “What may I give the pleasure of your visit?” Calcifer had made almost a one-eighty turn in attitude and tone from when he was talking with X.
Anyway, I changed my post. I think its ok now.


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That's because X is the one who wiped Calcifer in the first place. That and he has a Ledger of records.


It is like Grey Dust said; X is not only the one who struck Calcifer from history, but he also is the keeper of the secrets and as such prophecies. He has active knowledge of the things to come and is the one who keeps the records of the past and future. He is one of the plot devices that is needed for driving the story, and as such was created to be able to know who and what Calcifer is. Everyone else memory, on the other hand, is under the influence of both X and The Grand Creator as they jointly took the knowledge of Calcifer from time itself.

No you can't know who Calcifer is at all because his name, actions and role in history was erased.
@Vec I am sorry but your post needs to be changed. None of the gods can remember Calcifer as part of his/their punish. There is no way you character can have memories of Calcifer or anything that he did in the past.
I am almost done with my post. I will for sure have it up tonight.
Oh boy, oh boy! I can't wait to get home and start on my post!
Boy, for being the fallen and forgotten god Calcifer has got quite the bad rap.

;)

Once I get home I will begin working on the second half of my post, and then tweak and add details. Cross your fingers and hope for the best!
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Should I play a god of Light then instead? X is Lawful Neutral.


I won't tell you what to play, that would take the fun out of making characters. I will just have to see if I can get a couple more people here to play some gods of light.
What should X do next.

Also New God Poll:

Which of these Gods should I roleplay as?

1) Atrophos (Synn) God of Hunger, The Swallowing Void, Empty One, Bringer of Nothing, Lord of Desires. A Neutral Evil God who brings about ruination into the world through the means of desires. He is the hunger which consumes everything, a force which attempts to return the world into nothingness once more as he consumes it all and once having nothing left to feast upon, will devour himself to bring an end to all creation. Where the God of Death Reaps souls into his domain, Atrophos devours them, extinguishing its existence to feed his eternal hunger. So to claim souls of his own from Death, he lures mortals into their own budding desires, carnal urges to taint them such that in Hell he can devour their blackened souls to the chorus of screams. He's actually quite a charming God however, quite the cosmopolite so I'd imagine a Hannibal Lecter feel regarding high-society living.

2) Oshingen (Wa) God of Order, The Emperor, The Ruler Amongst the Clouds, The King amongst the Kings of Kings. A Lawful evil God who was corrupted in the wars by Calcifer and became an evil god. Once a benevolent patron god of structured society, Oshingen is now a patron of tyrants and oppressors. He imposes rigid order by the sword, commanding legions to support his puppet mortal rulers, retainers who enforce his will to bring all under the heavens and above hell into his domain of order absolute. He would direct the chaotic society into a utopia to surpass the Heavens, but first it must be destroyed. First the rocks and foundations must be broken and the raw iron exposed. Then The ore thrown into the fires to be purged of its impurities, then tempered by the hammer, Finally quenched by water to harden to lock the blade forged into rigid order. Then sharpened against the stone to be aimed at the gods. This would be of course an eastern-inspired god...

3) The Trickster. God of Change. A Chaotic Neutral shape-shifter god who tricked X and assisted the Evil Gods in their rebellion. His Name and True Name is unknown. He exists to upset the balance and tip the scales. That being said, he did manage to escape the ordinance of the Creator through some means and play in the mortal world, slipping in and out of both Heaven and Hell as he pleases...


I think that 2 and 3 sound good, but I also need to point out that Hal is the only god of light right now. This will make it very hard to play since there are two gods of darkness, two neutral evil gods, but only one god of light...
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