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12 mos ago
Current I'm about to enter my senior year. So close to that astro degreeeeee
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2 yrs ago
Act two of the original three is done. It is about 100 pages and 23k words. I'll be merging the first two acts into one and the book will end up being about twice as long as originally projected.
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2 yrs ago
Act 1 of 3 is done. It’s about 100 pages and 23k words and has a prelude, 8 chapters, and an interlude. I’m looking at 100k words as an approximate goal.
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2 yrs ago
Progress on draft 2: 8200 words and 32 pages.
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2 yrs ago
96000 words, 330 pages, 45 chapters, 8 viewpoints. First novel, done.
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Thrawn: "I have read about the nightswan. Have you?"

Nightswan: "You refer to the fact that it sings only as night is falling?"

Thrawn: "Yes. You do not expect your stand to succeed, do you?"

Nightswan: "I know that it won't succeed."

Thrawn: "That does not necessarily mean the end. I can give orders for you to be taken unharmed."

Nightswan: "They will be ignored. Half the troops here are Batonn Defense and Restos is determined to get rid of me."

Thrawn: "Then come with me now!"

Nightswan: "A man must do what he must, Admiral Thrawn. Even if his stand is against the fall of eternal night."

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I've updated everything that needed to be updated, I'm pretty sure. @KoL @TheWindel

@TheWindel So long as the GMs don't mind, I'm fine with saying that it was deemed inhospitable. Perhaps some fallout from the war keeping the area off limits. Also the Sherlock comment is gold lol
@TheWindel How's about this?

"Seventh Eye: When activated, Alistair's eyes process information at a greatly increased rate. This makes everything around him seem much slower, allowing for him to fight more effectively with seemingly inhuman reaction time."

EDIT: Also, I forgot to address your other points; I was making the assumption that some major cities were decimated during the Second Genesis - I just thought I'd say that London was one of them. Also, I figured that since Tokyo is, to my understanding, overrun - why not make London in a similar way. Also, yes, he grew up in Japan.
@TheWindel No problem on the psychic drive point. I'll think of something else. I suppose the blades can do that - but that sort of reaction time is beyond human capabilities.
@KoL: Here's my draft for review.

@KoL Ah, in that case I'll hold off until such time as you can accept another striker. Because I have zero interest in playing one of the other types.


• Name: Alistair Thorne

• Age: 15

• Gender: Male

• Class: Striker

• Nationality: British

• Height: 167 cm

• Bio:

Al grew up being told stories, passed down the Throne family line, of the time they lived in London. Before the great city was destroyed by them…

He grew up in what was left of Okinawa since his family had fled there a long time ago. His life was quite, but they were not on the mainland. This made the threat of attack all that much greater. The island was very sparsely populated and very out of the way so it was mostly spared during the Second Genesis. Though, it proved too little land for too many people at the time, at least that's what Al learned in his history classes at primary school.

At a young age his mother allowed him to start learning martial arts. She had feared that he would use what he learned against other children but she realized, by that time, that he was generally level headed. He took up Fencing and Aikido. They had been adapted to use a combination of traditional swords, vibroblades and beam swords. Al had grown proficient with all three.

His desire to help fight off anything which could endanger the life his family had made for themselves was ever present from his youth. So he excelled in his martial studies, sometimes training after hours to hone his skill. There were a few broken bones and many, many, bruises along the way. But he didn't care, he was determined. As his mother often said, “Tenacity!” The one word had stuck with him for years.

By the time Al was in his early teens he had earned a black belt in Aikido and had honors in Fencing. It was also around this time that he was contacted about potential attendance at the 2nd Tactical Arts Academy. He was excited to attend and finally be able to help the world maintain what they had worked so hard to rebuild. When his letter of acceptance finally arrived, he felt a renewed vigor to follow the path he had been following for years.

• Armament:

Alistair wields a vibrosword designed to be a rapier (A vibrorapier?) along with a beam sword. He prefers to get up close and personal. As addressed in his bio; he has plenty of hand-to-hand experience.

• Psychic Drive:

Minor/Sporadic Precognition. Every now and then, during a fight, Al will get a brief glimpse of all possible futures. This only extends to the next half second. He decides the most likely of the possible futures and uses that to inform his maneuvers.

• Sample Post:

“Al!” Alistair's mother's voice broke through the blockade of the headphones blasting American soft rock into his ears. She had also banged pretty hard on his door. “You're going to be late for school!” She was his coach, his alarm clock and his mother. She pushed him further than he would ever go and, as mundane as it seemed, she never let up on that. Not even when waking him up in the morning.

He had, of course, already been awake. “I'm up mum!” He called back, taking one earphone out, before she broke another barrier and barged into his small bedroom. The traditional katana he had been gifted, when he received his black belt, was mounted just above his door. It had noticeably shifted when Alistair's mother banged on the door.

“You've got fifteen minutes. Alright sweetie?” Her voice had calmed down.

“Yup, I'll be out in just a few.” He had just finished his fiftieth push up. As much as he didn't like it, he did have to train. Alistair had a very fast metabolism. He ate mountains of food and never gained weight. He had gotten into the habit of exercising for thirty minutes when he got up and before he went to bed, every day. He never seemed to hold onto much muscle. This was his life though, you could have all of the skill in the world but if you had no strength to back it up then it wasn't going to be terribly useful. Only the most practiced martial artists, who'd been training for more than forty years, didn't need any strength.

Fifteen minutes later he was in the people carrier on his way to school. He knew something was going to go well for him that day. And this had nothing to do with precognition.
@TheWindel Thanks, though, my plan was to make a striker...
If there's still room I'd like to make a character.
So I'm still interested xD this is just that time of year when I'm getting ready for the next semester to start so I'm working my ass off trying to save money so I don't have to work so much while having a lot of homework and such. I'll try to finish up my introduction soonish.
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