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I was gonna deny it because blood manipulation sounds like some Avatar shit, but then I read it.

I'm very impressed. This has to be the most creative application of an otherwise standard KG 'idea' (I've seen blood manipulation more often than I have seen my own hands) and I am actually.. jealous of your creative abilities when it comes to creating a KG.


Aww thank you, I am almost blushing :P

Was going to review but I realized you're missing the history.

I only review complete CS'.


Fair enough, I have added my history now. So please take a look.

I will try to get up a IC post today, otherwise it will be tomorrow.


First of I am sorry for the delay, but I have some trouble with writing this. It's not completely done yet, I will add the history and improve some other bits later. I am just posting this so you can have a look if it's balanced enough and that we could sorta start :D.
@Krot@Renny@Buddha I don't mind helping :D. Besides if science is involved, I like it even more :P.

But making the cs is taking longer then expected, but I should have it done tomorrow night. I really should go to sleep now.
Showing my interest here, I will try to get up a cs tonight.

@Renny. If you want I might have a solution for your jutsu. Note that I am just throwing a idea out, up to you what your do with it.

What you can do have 2 versions of mercury. First of is the gaseous form (normally it would take heat of around 220 degrees Celsius for this, but woot for chakra to convert it to that :D), the vapor itself is highly toxic if breathed in. A small dose could lead to nausea, loss of balance/equilibrium, memory loss, etc. Large doses can effect the nerve system and lead to organ failure. In game terms I would think 1 round of exposure small impairment to fighting ability, second round major impairment, third severe impairment/almost unable to act due to pain and other effects, fourth round is death. Although after the second d and third round you will need medical attention within a reasonable time.

Second is the solid form, mercury has a melting point of -39 degrees Celsius, meaning only really cold temperatures can freeze it. What you could do instead is have it bind with a different metal (zinc, silver and gold are common variants). This would form a amalgam, which isn't toxic. Atleast not for combat purposes, but it could easily be formed and used without dangers for your character. For example you could use earth chakra to add iron and carbon to the mercury compound, which could make a weapon as strong as iron (roughly).

Like Unsaid before it's just a idea. And if you want I could expand my explanation, when I am not at work and on my phone :D.
A time skip sounds good to me, but in the end it's up to Jangel to decide what happens. Maybe he has other things planned. Also, looking forward to learning how to communicate with the bijuu, could be a fun thing to describe. How the mindscape looks like for each person and how it was affected by the bijuu sharing that place :D.
Leiko let Mario-sensei take back the painting, before turned towards the wall, which Mario-sensei wanted her to climb. Now she was actually rather glad that her parents insisted her on learning this exercise, regardless of how boring and annoying she found the exercise back then. Even though she has used this technique before, she never really tried to see how long she could last in one position, she didn't really have the patience for such things, so that would be a new for her to experience aswell. Leiko slowly put one foot against the wall, before channeling chakra towards it in order to stick to the wall. She did it slowly, so she could concentrate more on presurving as much chakra as she could. Even though she was a jinchuuriki, she didn't nearly have a endless supply of chakra. Far from it actually, hers reservers were pretty small, compared to some of the other jinchuuriki. When Leiko was certain her first foot was attached to the wall, she also planted her second foot on the wall. Before she slowly, but surely started making her way up the wall. When she reached halfway up the wall, she closed her eyes and tried to shut the world around her away for a few moments. So she could concentrate better on the task at hand. After about a hour of standing still, Leiko had almost reached her breaking point in her concentration. As she started to get really really bored, doing nothing. But it was here reserves that failed her first, once they were depleted far enough, her technique started to fail. As she lost her grip on the wall and started to fall. During her fall she just a small amount of force to push off from the wall, and start a singel backwards flip, which allowed her to land on hands and feet. "So.. what's.. next.. Mario-sensei?.. Leiko asked as she panted after each word. She was allready pretty tired from this exercise, but she wouldn't leave from this room until she learned somthing new.
Leiko smiled slightly as Mario-sensei praised her explanation about chakra control and fuinjutsu. Even though she often heard words of praise at home, she know most ig not all of them were faked. It felt good to hear some, even minor ones, that were really meant and not faked. Her smile sligthly grew as she heard them, but it quickl faltered as the next sentence was uttered. "Nani?" Leiko muttered, she didn't expect she would have to start at the begning. "Ano, Mario-sensei, what will I be doing to start out with then?" She asked after she composed herself a bit. Maybe it wouldn't be as bad as she feared. Leiko looked at the painting with a slightly odd look, she liked the fact that she wasn't in it, as she had feared in the bgenning. "I like it, especially how minimalistic it is." She said we a slight smile as she observed the painting.
Leiko was stunned for a moment with a questioning look on her face as she listened to Mario-sensei's strange story about a trip to the hotspring. "Uhhh..." She started muttering as she didn't know how to respond to that, even her training as for becoming a clan head couldn't help her here. It almost made her doubt if she wanted to use the hotspring here, with those type of people around. Leiko hesitated for a moment as she looked at the fruit bowl, before looking around the room at the other paintings. Which were really good, which didn't really suprise her since you need alot of the same delicacy and control in fuinjutsu as in painting. "You are a great artist, your other works are amazing." Leiko commented as she pickup the bowl with a slight hesitation. She didn't like paintings of people that much, she prefered to make them of still scene or nature. Leiko did her best to stand absoluty still as she started to explain everything she knew about chakra and fuinjutsu, in a very textbook style manner. "Chakra is formed by combining physical energy and spiritual energy. Physical energy comes from every cell in your body, and can be increased by physical training. Spiritual energy comes from the mind, and can be increased by studying and through experience. Through out the body is a chakra pathway, which allow the transportation of chakra to a certain point in the body. This system also contains 361 tenketsu, which control the flow of chakra in the system. The combining of energies happens while you prepare to use a jutsu, for this control over the amount of energie used is very important. If you use too little the jutsu won't work correctly or at all, if you use too much you will waste energie which can lead to you running out of energie before you opponent does. Normally handseals are used in order to help control and regulate the chakra flow. Experienced shinobi can use fewer or even no handseals to use some jutsu they are very familiar with." She explained, barely stopping to catch her breath, before she goes in to her second rant. "Fuinjutsu, also known as the art of sealing. It's one of the most diverse area's of the shinobi arts, and also one of the hardest ones to truelly master. During the creation of seals it's very important that every line, kanji and mark you make is spot on. Even a single drop of ink in the wrong place can mess you seal up. Generaly seals are used for storage. Anyting you can think of can be stored, it's all just a matter of designing the correct seal. Besides sealing things, seals can also be used to alter thing. For example the gravity seal alters the weight of a object or person. Conversion seals can change the element of chakra to a different one. There are many more options than that, your imagination is literlly the only limiting factor." Leiko explained in a rushed manner, clearly happy to be talking about a subject she loved. She just hoped that it was enough information for her sensei. She was barely able to keep standing still with the fruit bowl, she really wanted to show him the two seals she had created herself. For some reason she really wanted Mario-sensei's approval of her ability's.
Post is finally up, sorry it's not that great. But I wanted to get one up just before I went to bed.
Leike nodded as the man came to the conclusion that Hombei-sensei had send her. Her heart skipped a beat as Kombei-sensei started to talk about what he was planning to teach her. She didn't want to wait, nor learn something else first. So she was happey when Mario-sensei invited her inside. "I allready know that, does he think I am some sort of bumbeling idiot?" Leiko thought to herself, after Mario-sensei talked about his lesson plan, which slightly insulted the girl. "It's not like I am novice." Leiko mumbled softly to herself, the annoyance of Mario-sensei's comments was clearly to hear in her tone of voice. "Hai, Mario-sensei. You will be suprised by how quickly I will master whatever you decide to teach me." Leiko stated with determination in her voice, she really wanted to show the man how good she really was. So far the sensei hadden't made a too great of a impression on her yet, but that might change once she started learning some fuinjutsu.
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