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Aaaaaaand it's done. Editing sure does take a lot. ._.'
You can read my itsy-bitsy 4koma in the hider, or in the URL.

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HylianRose said
@EbilBecause I don't want my voice changing the way the characters act toward my character. If I say I'm pulling for one, the other might back off and that ruins the fun. ^-^

In other words, Hylian sustains off of your agony. Even mine.

I am ABOUT to upload the 4koma here, now. Just some tweaking to make it look prettier. Pretty sparkly sparkle sparkle <3

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Kenshi Brett said
Should I repost or edit the existing character sheet post?

Edit it. Do not worry, we will check the CS sheet again. ;D

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FaithsRose said
Okey dokes, bye for now ^^Edit: Do we get to pick a favorite in the OOC? :P (Just for fun, not to change/decide anything!)

You will pick a favorite, and I will personally go ahead and kill the loser hoard you voters up and host a "VS" team sequence. Of course, it's all for the lolz.

All for the lolz, indeed...

<3

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HylianRose said
@Kenshi BrettVery nice! I must ask, is this your first time RPing or just new to the site?Anyway, I'll get on to giving feedback...~Powers~His powers are a bit... strange. 1) I don't think we're accepting anymore 'healing' characters. We already have quite a few with that ability, my own included.2) I'd be interested in hearing details about this 'Luck' power and how it would be applied in the RP. We've already denied a character with a power very similar to this.3) Welsh. Now, words spoken in another language in an English RP are interesting. I have a format I'd like you to use just so it's easier for everyone to understand. "[Insert Non-English Language Here]" Make sure you use the italics tags to signify that it is the translation. Being able to calm animals is an interesting ability. I like it!We'll adjust weaknesses once we iron out powers. It's important to have a well balanced character. ;)Everything else is fine though, if you want to be a better writer over all, I'd try to get more variety in your sentence structure. How can you make the sentences flow more easily with little of those awkward pauses? You don't always have to start each sentence with 'He...' It sounds very awkward after a while.Make some changes and then try again. ^-^

I would like to also add in a positive bit of feedback. The vampire bit is... interesting. Here's hoping that someone would make a vampire character.

-cough- -cough-Hylrose -cough- - cough- -cough-

Post by some random dude

Lillian Thorne said
I hid the post. Did you attempt to contact the person and explain how things work around here? Chances are he didn't know.

He has now submitted a CS to our OOC thread. I only wanted to hide the post so that it would not disrupt the flow of the roleplay, and our Game Master (I'm only the Co-GM) is willing to teach Kenshi on the guidelines. I am sorry that this post was vague, but I must thank you for hiding the post!

-NarayanK-

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Kenshi Brett said
Name: Kenshi BrettAge: 17(Second year)Gender: MaleSpecies: HumanPowers: Can cast spells in Welsh. Also He has a great healing ability. Many animals like him as his presence seems to calm them. Also his luck seems to change with his mood, when he is unfocused his has standard luck however.Weaknesses:  He has a long ancestrial bloodline of hunters. Due to this his blood smells and tastes more desirable to vampires. Also Sunlight gives him headaches for no known reason. He has minor hay fever so he prefers indoors as it is a nuisance.Personality: He is very proud of his welsh heritage and learnt the language long before he discovered his spellcasting ability. He is depressed at tthe death of his parents. He gets aggressive easily at anything that offends them, or at least the memory of them. He is a good person at heart. He can be cheery when he wants to be.Background: At 16 His house burned down. He was locked inside his bathroom. The house was wrecked but he was found coughing heavily bit unburnt. He was left orphaned and alone on the streets. One day some people tryed mugging him. As they took his money. They decided not to leave witnesses. One of them took out a knife while the other light a fag. In his frustration he screamed out in welsh. To his surprise the flames from the cigarette light up and started burning the one who was watching. He decided to experiment. He yelled in welsh again. The knife did not come to him. But a iron pipe did. He managed to beat the other guy over the head with the pipe. Killing him. He fell to the floor. Ashamed at what he did. It was in that state that someone walked up to him. Touching him on the shoulder he told him about a school where they would teach him to use his power.Studies: English, Maths (Or math to the americans), science, welsh and British history.III

@HylianRose: Can you review it this time? I'm afraid I might say something stupid and totally unnecessary. (omg the wolfensteinz are real)

I will input, however, that his powers are kinda... scattered. He can cast spells in Welsh(?) and cast a great healing ability, which is the main part I am concerned about.

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Animelover_princess said
I'm on! won't be on for much longer thoughsorry guysi have to make up community service hours (i'm in the National Honor Society at my school)and i'm like 15 hours short and i have a week :panything interesting happen while i was gone?

Mattily VS Baelily.

I am still waiting to see some blood tearful romance-festival to begin. More feels = more addiction = more roleplay.

Profit for everyone.

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FaithsRose said
Ok...wasn't saying he/she should be accepted into the roleplay NK, just making conversation about were-dragons :S

I know, I just like overusing Bold and Underlined text when the chance calls for it. I also just felt like pointing that out for anyone else (other than the roleplayers here) out there reading the message.

And were-dragons... hm. Interesting, but I probably won't make one to at least pay "Kenshi" some respect. It'll make me feel terrible if I suddenly just strip away an idea and not accept that person's idea.

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I am inking the 4koma. :D

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EDIT:

Driving Park said
Ignoring the fact that he ignored the basic RP joining procedure for a bit: to be fair...neither the IC nor the OOC say closed currently. They say "We'll be accepting more player!"

I forgot that HylianRose edited this, though I'm pretty sure that we accepted the last player.

<_>

W/e, I suppose we keep it open.

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FaithsRose said
That's what I thought when I saw it...He/She didn't send me a CS though just said 'Hello, just joined the forum and looking for people to RP with' :S Random! Think it's because I was the post before his/hers in the IC to be honest ^^' Re-directed them to the new to the guild guide and rules :S figured that was enough...Were-dragons though, interesting idea ^^'

As much as how interesting the Weredragon idea is, he ignored the prominent message in both the IC and the OOC, which says that this roleplay is "CLOSED," which means that we are not accepting any more characters. And he is also skipping the basic procedures of joining roleplays, which is basically defeating the purpose of having to sign up. If he had read the Guide at least once, he would know what to do, honestly.

I love roleplayers: I always have something to connect with this giant family of a Guild. But the last thing I want to see are these kinds of posts. End of story.