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Ok, I get the issues. As for his position within the college, it is more of an "outside the normal structure" kind of thing. If you don't want the college being fleshed out yet I could go with the second idea for after the cave collapse. Instead of what really happened his master died in the cave collapse and after Chrollo's escape he didn't return to the college. I could probably think of a reason he would be helping the rose knights.

Instead of that, I could merely lower the rank of his master to something of a "head of a department". That would lower them both down in importance, and avoid touching the main NPC's of the college. Also in regard to the "power-hungry and outright violent", I wouldn't consider Chrollo to be the first descriptor. He has no real need to climb the social or political ladder, and most times couldn't care about rank. And for the outright violence, he is leaning towards a lack of inhibition. He doesn't seek violence or instigate much of it, but you will probably not find him actually monologuing on the merits of pacifism. If in his personality it came off as either of those I can change it up. When I was thinking of his personality I took considerable inspiration from Pariston in HunterxHunter if that gives any good context. I can change the very end of the history if it was giving off that impression.

Ok time to tackle the big thing: Gravity magic. Ok, so I'm just gonna kinda say most of what's in my head about this and hope it makes decent sense. So when you spoke of more small-scale and single-target spells, that is 95% of gravity spells. They can range from changing the weights of objects to manipulating the momentum of a swing. The only traditional attack spell it has is condensing air with gravity and launching that at people. All that is the stuff that would be considered low to low-high tier. Of course, manipulating larger or living creatures take exponentially more mana and concentration.

Beyond that is the range of AOE gravity spells, aka the hard ones. Using them is balancing multiple very fine lines. Of course the larger the area the harder it becomes. (while already being extremely difficult) Another boundary to watch out for is as you said allies. The nature of Gravity is very impartial, and its magic is no different. Both the caster are affected in the area just as much as the intended targets. This makes it a very technical study of magic that has potentially incredible abilities, but a just as dangerous potential for a devastating crack back. The most powerful users of it (which Chrollo is currently nowhere near) can make multiple areas of effect, thus avoiding themselves and allies. The ability Chrollo has is to be unaffected by his own gravity magic (and maybe others idk) thus allowing him to avoid one of the major pitfalls of the dangerous field of magic. An AOE use of gravity magic of 5x5 feet would probably leave a normal person exhausted for a week after using it. An average mage could probably hold that for 10 min before exhausting. Chrollo can probably hold the 5x5 for around twenty min. One of the most powerful mages can probably manage about 10 of those separate areas for the same amount of time. Any large AOEs attempted by Chrollo would probably only last around 10 seconds depending on the size. Anything army-sized probably is out of reach of all but the top 2/3 mages in all the world.

As for his normal attacking magic he mostly uses fire and earth magics around intermediate levels. He could probably manage a high-level fire spell like a fire tornado or something. These are the spells he would have learned naturally studying at the college.

Thx for working with me on this! I know this character is pretty out there, so I appreciate this. Also, I'm sorry I'm filling up a whole OOC page with my explanations lol.
@Raineh Daze
I'll number the points to make this a bit easier.
1. Sure thing, we can change it to that other reason. It would probably make sense that after dealing with so many magically empowered enemies the knights might decide they need a mage's assistance. Up to you guys though, I was just thinking of this from a different way.

2. All cool, the mana glow really makes no difference in regards to this.

3. I guess my wording was a bit weird with this one. For most mages, gravity magic is quite dangerous, because you are susceptible to the effects of your own spell. AOE gravity spells are incredibly effective for subjugating groups of enemies, but there is always a chance you get caught in it and end up hurting yourself. Chrollo has a form of resistance to his own gravity spells, and thus can utilize gravity magic with more "broad strokes". At least that is what I was thinking.

4. As for his actual power I am somewhat unsure because I am not completely sure of the strength of mages in this world. I am completely fine with you guys making that decision if you want to, but I would guess somewhere in the upper half of mages. While he still is inexperienced and has plenty of room to grow, he is currently working right under the Headmaster of the college. I would probably put him on the level of a college battlemage, but with less experience. He has the advantage of wider use of gravity magic but lacks experience in combat, as well as proficiency in much outside attack magic.

Hope that did a good job answering some questions. I am just struggling a bit to find the power scale for him because while there are a few minor mages in the knights there hasn't been much high-level magic shown. On the other hand in Tyaethe's lesson recently someone stressed that the 2 things you should never fight head-on are a well-fed ancient vampire and an extremely powerful wizard. I obviously don't want to be that strong, so I am trying to find some middle there. Thx.
@VitaVitaAR Sure thing, I'd be happy to answer. So for the reason he is hanging around the Iron Roses is that he was sent to observe the captain. (or something like that) In the OOC description, you talked about how many of the nobles outside, and inside, the order want the way the captain is chosen to be changed. I'm just spitballing here, but it could be that a faction of nobles finally pressured the king enough that he had to appear to be doing something. An "impartial" judge like the college could have been chosen to observe the operation of the knights, and see how effectively their new commander is running it. I am entirely open to change that reasoning, but that is what I thought of as of this moment.

As for his abilities, I was going for something akin to an elemental mage. He is adept at most of the basic elements, but his specialty is gravity-based magic. With magic, he is able to change the weight and mass of objects. (or something like that) He also has the ability to see mana particles very clearly.

As for how the backstory links back to this, I was really interested in the Witch-Queen of Orodagor in the Locations section. My basic idea is that what happened to him was that a group of cultists who dedicate themselves to the "long-dead queen" were the ones who collapsed the tunnel. They are mostly very low-powered in magic and were able to do that by having multiple people working together. When they realized their luck at capturing a mage Chrollo was trapped and experimented on. The tattoos are mostly a dark language the cultist didn't understand but didn't want to risk cursing themselves with. They managed to write down actual enchantments twice while tattooing his body by pure chance. The first one was his eyes, which gave him the ability to see mana particles, and the second was a strengthening enchantment. This strength enchantment allows him to survive the stress of using gravity magic. After his eyes began to glow they realized they had accomplished something and began to scribble whatever they could find, including the elvish words Chrollo had been studying in his journal. And then in some probably elaborate way, I don't want to waste your time with Chrollo eventually escaped.

The reason I didn't put that part in was that I had begun to get really worried that my CS was getting way too long. Though I guess I ended up writing it all anyway so... If you have any questions or changes pls do not hesitate to state them, I know I can be a bit difficult and tend to ramble so I am sorry. Thx
Hey, I asked about a character like this nearly a year ago, but then I became extremely busy. I am now able to have some free time, so here is my cs finally lol. I am open to making changes and/or questions. Thx.



Hey, I asked about a character like this nearly a year ago, but then I became extremely busy. I am now able to have some free time, so here is my cs finally lol.



Hey, I've been reading through and this looks incredibly interesting. I would love to join if there are still some slots open for people to join. I also have a question or two to ask that would influence my character's creation. Thank you very much.
This looks really interesting!! Hope to be a part of it.
Hey this looks really interesting, and I wonder if you are still accepting. I'm thinking of a general or minor king who was betrayed in life before he could make his stand against the undead(possibly by callidus idk). In death he has kept his discipline and pride because in his mind he never lost to the necromancer. He requires all of his "soldiers" to look presentable just like in life. This now includes polishing bones and such like that. For appearance wise him and his I'll would look something like the ossiarch bonereapers from AoS. Such as they all appear mostly uniform and still wear armor, but it is now made from bone. That is all I have so far.



Dionysus
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God of Hangovers


Constantinople was a city that never stopped moving for any occasion. The world could be ending and sure enough, there would be a vendor trying to sell you some trinket. The large market that filled the westernmost plaza of the city was no exception to this habit, even a few hours after the sun had set. Covered lanterns lit up the large area that would have been an open field if were not for the hundreds of tents that cluttered the plaza. People shuffled through the small corridors that naturally opened up between ramshackle shops. Citizens of the metropolis, rich and poor alike, came to purchase many of the items they needed in their day to day lives. At one vendor a wealthy patrician could be seen purchasing some form of roasted meat, while only a few steps away a small peasant woman was haggling over a rough piece of sheep’s wool.

Between the thousands of people gathered in the orange light of the lanterns, the god Dionysus was attempting to purchase some herbs from a small eastern woman who might just have lived as many years as the ageless diety. “Trust me, this wine is worth more than any gem or ore anyone could try and trade you. Just take a sip and you’ll understand what I mean.” Dio used his best smile while he said this, the same smile that could sway any mortal being only a few decades ago. “As if I would drink something a strange boy tries to force-feed me. You don’t get my age just trusting any honeyed words that come your way.” The old trader showed a near toothless grin as she pushed the skin of wine away from her.

“You also apparently didn’t live that long by being generous.”, Dio spat back at her. He was growing increasingly frustrated with this imp of a woman who dared defy him. Mortality was still something that Dionysus was adapting to daily, even though he had previously spent centuries roaming the planet. Back then he had been something “beyond” human, a being who merely existed near humans. Never did he have to pretend to be one of them.

“If you're going to take that kind of attitude with me I might as well raise the price to four denarii.”

“Fine, fine take your money, you greedy woman.” Dio tossed the money onto the table next to him and grabbed the herb before she could raise the price another time. Rushing away from the vendor Dio slipped through the crowds back east towards the center of the city. No matter how agile he was he couldn’t help but bump into some people earning himself some indignant shouts and curses. The young god ignored the insults and focused on making it out of the plaza as quickly as possible. Finally reaching an end to the mass of people Dio took a deep breath before continuing his jog into the city. As he headed inwards the smell of the sea receded somewhat and new scents began to overwhelm the senses. Imported spices from India and cured leather from the western edge of the empire dominated his nose as he passed by the shops of the many craftsmen who inhabited the city.

Dio stopped on a dime and ran down an alleyway between two tall buildings. He pulled aside a small curtain on the side of the rightmost building and made his way up the stairs that started at the entrance. Only once he reached a small door at the top did the god slow his ascent. Before entering Dio leaned against the wall and steeled himself against the growing pain he could feel pierce his heart. Dio faked a smile and entered the small room.

The room was cluttered and looked more like a large cupboard than anything. Shelves on the walls held an assortment of plates, cups, and random personal belongings. The floor was covered with colorful Persian rugs that only matched if one happened to be color blind. In the middle of the room, furs were piled to form a makeshift bed that was currently occupied. A slender form was curled up on top of the furs fast asleep oblivious to the world. Dio stood still not wanting to wake the resting woman and merely stood there gazing down at her. He didn’t know how long he stayed like this, Dio just knew he could wait here forever if she could be at peace asleep like this.

Eventually, the sleeping form began to move and raise its head. It was then that Dio could see the eyes of Ariadne, his wife. Even though her brunette hair was disheveled and she was a shade paler than healthy, Dio could feel his heart stop. Ever since he found her crying on the island of Naxos he had felt this way. Before the Colossus had happened he used to tell her she made him feel mortal. When Ariadne had asked what he meant by this he had at first hesitated, before voicing it best he could. “I have never feared death, for why should I? I am something beyond mortals and their limited view on life. I was born in the underworld of all places, dying would be a simple trip home. But when I am with you I truly feel afraid. I feel afraid that I could die at any moment. That I could be ripped away from you. An eternity in the pit of Tartarus can’t even compare to a minute without you.”

The tired eyes of Ariadne panned over the room until she saw her husband standing at the entrance. “How long have you been standing there?” When Dio saw his wife attempt to sit up he rushed to her side and put a hand on her back. Looking into her eyes Dio stopped faking his smile and whispered in her ear, “Not any longer than I would have wanted.” Ariadne giggled at him until a dry cough overtook her and she brought her hands to her mouth. When the coughing finally subsided Ariadne pulled her hands away from her face and let them fall onto her lap. A small amount of blood was visible on her palms and Dio quickly began to lay her back down. Dionysus pulled the herbs he bought out of his pocket and began to crush them into a bowl with the pommel of a small dagger.

“You are such a hopeless romantic. When I’m gone you better find someone to take care of you.” Dio winced when she said that last sentence, not wanting to remember the new mortality of his wife. “Dio, I need you to look at me.” He turned to face his wife and could see her clearly in pain trying to stay awake. “I need you to promise me you won’t cry for eternity when I’m gone. Try to enjoy your time here on earth. You can finally truly interact with humans without hurting them, I know you hated that your curse hurt those around you. Enjoy this freedom and live. Not as a god or a king, but as a human. Trust me, it’s not as bad as you think.”

She grabbed his hand and held it to her lips. She lightly kissed his knuckles before pulling him into a real kiss. Dio embraced her as best as he could without hurting her any more. Letting him go, Ariadne, stared into his eyes. “Hold me for the next few minutes, until I am gone. I want to feel your warmth.” They sat there still for a time with her eyes closed. Dio watched her breath as her breaths became more and more shallow. Tears could no longer be stopped as he waited for the love of his immortal life to die. His vision now clouded Dio couldn’t say if he sat there for seconds or hours, but when he could finally see again her breathing had stopped.


The entire world seemed to rock as Dio rocketed awake, jumping up from where he had been sleeping. As the world continued to spin he put a hand on a nearby wall to stabilize himself with. Eventually, the spinning stopped for long enough for him to realize the wall he was leaning on was brick, which happened to not be what his walls were made of in his apartment. Taking a look around himself Dio could make the simple observation that he was in some kind of back alley. As he turned to take in his surroundings a sharp pain pulled his attention towards his abdomen where he could see his shirt was covered in blood. Confused Dio used his free hand to search the pain he was feeling. It was there that he could feel an incision just below his ribcage on his left side. It was then that he saw a small glint of steel towards the exit of the alley. As he got closer he saw it was a small pocket knife covered in blood. Seeing it caused Dio to somewhat remember what had happened before his unplanned nap. A young adult had approached a drunk Dio and attempted to rob him. When the young god had proved uncooperative the youth had tried to scare him off with a knife. This conflict escalated until the thief had stabbed Dio. To the would-be murderer’s surprise, his victim had taken being shanked better than most. Dio took it so well in fact he pulled the knife out and stabbed it into his attacker’s shoulder. It was then that the thief decided Dio’s wallet wasn’t worth the trouble leaving Dio to pass out from either alcohol consumption or bleeding.

Leaving the back alley Dionysus began to make his way towards the general direction he was sure he lived. He checked his phone and noticed it had been several days since he had wandered away from the conclave to get drunk somewhere. Thinking to himself as he walked he came across a genius idea. He stopped in the middle of the sidewalk and clapped his hands together. Dio had finally solved how to be rid of the colossus and return to his wife. “I just have to die, that’s it!” The problem was he wasn’t sure if death by leaving the colossus was the same as a normal death. It was better to be safe and find another way to die. “Now I just need to find someone who can kill me.”



Dionysus
Seattle Univerity, Seattle
God of Puncuality


Dionysus knew he should have skipped his morning class in favor of arriving on time to the conclave. When he left Casa de Acropolis at dawn while everyone else had been passed out drunk he was sure he would make it on time. All he had to do was leave class a few minutes early and cross the campus. No big deal, right? Of course, today just happened to be an exam day that he hadn’t prepared for. After struggling up till the last question, the young god had no time to spare as he walked across campus. He could have run, but of course, he couldn’t show up even more disheveled than he currently was. Half the gods that attend the Conclave believe they are at Paris fashion week sometimes. As he rounded a corner he saw a large and somewhat familiar man walk inside with his dog and felt a sense of relief.

“Okay, I can’t be too late if others are barely beating me here.”

With a weak smile, Dio jogged the last few steps and caught the door handle before it shut fully. He pulled it open about halfway before he froze at the sight inside. Ares had a gun drawn on one of the Yoruban gods that Dio was sure he had met a few times before. Near the center of the room, Hera was accusing Zeus of murdering her child, and the large man Dio had followed was asking about evidence. It took Dio only a few seconds to figure out what was happening and he let the door shut with a thud. Stepping to the side of the entrance he let himself slump onto the wall and slide onto the ground. Dio pulled his schoolbag in front of him and began to search through it halfheartedly. Eventually, he found what he was looking for and pulled a small flask from inside the bag.

For a minute Dio sat there looking off into the distance with a blank stare as he thought. He thought of the happy times he had shared with Hephaestus, as well as the few rough ones. Silently tears began to stream down his face and he could feel a familiar sensation in the back of his head. At first, a dull throbbing began to form before it evolved into something worse. Words began forming in hushed whispers that soon began to rise in volume. Before the voices could get any louder Dio opened up the flask and took a deep drink out of it. After the third or so swig the voices began to quiet down and once again turned into hushed whispers. Closing the flask Dionysus pulled his legs up into his chest and let his head hang. While he sat there if he listened closely he could still hear what those inside were saying. Out here he wouldn’t have to deal with the noise of the other gods and could mourn his cousin the only way he knew how.
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