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Current I think watching fight scenes can help in general terms with writing combat, since it can give you an idea of flow and choreography.
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At least if you're writing something you know, with knights.
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I mean, depends on what you're writing, and the tone and theme of what you're writing. Trained armored knights were legitimately monstrous on the battlefield, so looking up how they fought helps.
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"... Of course that thing is here."

That one again. That foul odor. That unpleasant feeling on the air.

Of course it's here. Where else would it be? It's going to lurk in the most vile, unpleasant location it can find. Just hearing its voice is bad enough.

I can't understand why Mathiassen-san wants to try talking to it. It's a monstrosity. It's a rotten thing that shouldn't be here in the first place. All it will do is laugh and do whatever it wants. There's no point in talking to something like that.

If I knew where it was, I'd hit it with one of my bombs. I don't know if I'd be successful, but at least I have to try.

The dead, that vile jester. A city that has succumbed to the end...

I cannot allow such things to cloud my judgement. I have to do everything I can, without fail, to ensure that we succeed. There's no point otherwise.

---The air smells like rot. It's itching at my nose, burning away at my senses. The death smell of countless corpses.

I wish I could simply burn them all away, but I couldn't possibly accomplish such a thing, and attempting to do so would be counterproductive to our duty. All I can do is watch every possible angle of approach the jester could come from as I follow Laruelle-san.
Rylia Ainsberg

Paladin of Reon


Hmph. At least standing watch let me have some time away from that idiot. And that other idiot!

Why did so many idiots have to come on this job? Surely there's plenty of non-idiot adventurers, aren't there?

That stupid curse-user ingvarr, the snake with no sense personal space, isn't there other jobs they couldn't have gone with? There certainly should have been!

... In any case, nothing particularly happened over night, either. Not during my shift, and not during anyone else's. At least it wasn't too uncomfortable to sleep here, and I didn't have to deal with any stupidity either.

---Still, it's frustrating. I was hoping we'd have a quick handle on where to go to find the source of the curse and what to do, but so far that hasn't materialized. Aside from the curse being directly on the land, we still don't really have any solid information. Who, exactly, would plant this curse in the first place, anyway?

Did someone have a grudge against this farmer and his cute sheep?

---Not that them being cute is important, but it's true. Watching them sleep and gently walk around the field, it's pretty hard not to notice. The look like fluffy clouds wandering around, what's even the purpose of making them sick and disappear to begin with?

Well, it's not as if I can't think of a reason. There's plenty of dark rituals someone could perform with the blood of animals, as unpleasant as a thought that may be. As a paladin, I've been instructed on how to recognize and destroy such wickedness. Of course, animal blood is used in some regular magic as well, but surely they would just go to a butcher or something in those cases, wouldn't they?

If I didn't know already, this place certainly wouldn't look cursed during the day. Right now, none of the sheep are frightened, and the fields around Fletcher's farm look entirely peaceful. The only disturbance is the light breeze, making the grass move like a wave.

"I agree, it's for the best if we get to see as much of your land as possible," I say in response, "Especially if there's anywhere that you don't take care of all the time."

If there was anywhere a curse might be planted, it would be somewhere that was often left out of sight. It stood to reason.

@Raineh Daze@ERode@Octo@Rune_Alchemist




Fort Magrial


With the opening assault commenced, many of the goblins were simply unable to fight back. It was no surprise, for creatures for eyes suited to darkness and such large ears, light and sound was an excellent weapon for their disruption. The archers, who had been further from the initial blast, were the first to recover, but Reeva's swift archery proved to be more than enough to dispatch them before they were capable of locating any targets.

With so many goblins dead so swiftly, and many still disoriented, the goblins who had their senses overwhelmed the least were beginning to retreat make into the fort, making rough, scratchy calls in their tongue for some response to the invasion of the structure they had claimed.

There were other sounds from within the fort. The shuffling feet of further goblins, likely attempting to take up positions within to try and put together a defense, but another noise as well.

As strangle rattling, almost hollow sound. It grew louder, and more cacophonous, as if multiple sticks were being brought together and struck against one another.

What next loomed out of the dark of the fort's interior swiftly made the source clear.

A fixed grin. Empty sockets. Worn, white, and thin.

The first animated skeleton raised a rusty sword, clad in rusted and weak plate and gripping a half-distintegrated wooden shield. It was followed by another, this one raising a spear, a pitted helmet sitting upon its fleshless head. And still more animated dead were emerging from the depths, their number difficult to gauge.

The goblins, it seemed, and a mage among their ranks, and the unscrupulous creatures were hardly hesitant to employ necromancy.

@Raineh Daze@Animal@Psyker Landshark@Eisenhorn@The Otter
At the very least, everyone who is a part of the Kirins is alive and able to move. That is what is most important, for the sake of completing our mission.

For the moment, that matter is no longer of chief concern. As long as everyone can move, then we must proceed as quickly as possible.

That is where the next challenge lays.

I have never seen a sight of this nature before. The animated corpses of the once-living, moving in a massive swarm. Why? How? For what purpose? How did such a thing occur here? While I certainly believe that Valheim's dogs would be willing to use the bodies of the dead in such a fashion, I do not think they had the capability to do so.

What could possibly have happened?

---It's disgusting.

But I cannot allow myself to linger on such thoughts. For now, I must locate the ideal spot.

Preferably, one where an explosion would destroy or incapacitate as many walking corpses as possible, while also helping to clear our path forward. Nodding towards Mathiassen-san, I reach into my bag and produce the black sphere that is one of my explosives.

This situation is beyond abominable, but I will not let it shake me from performing as effectively as possible. And so, my eyes scan the shambling fingers to find the ideal point to cause maximum disruption and damage.
The blurring world around me necessitates only one thing---To act without thinking. Dying here would have no worth.

I'm only somewhat conscious of what my body is doing as we fall. Twisting, curling, throwing myself down and trying to remain stable as sound fills my ears. It's all I can do, all I can possibly do, to ensure my life is not wasted.

If I'm going to die, it should be for the sake of accomplishing something.

I can feel myself thrown. I can feel the impact. The sound. I tuck by limbs against myself, the sharp impact, the dull throb through my back, and then---

... It's over.

I can stand. That's the first assessment that I make. That's all I need to know. While something throbs in my lower back, it's clearly not enough to inhibit my movement. As long as I can move, then everything should be fine.

Before anything else, there's something far more important that I must do.

"Can everyone move?"

Since I can move, it's more important to assess the conditions of the others. Many of the others onboard the ship did not make it....

But for them, there is little that I can do. Rather, I must focus on the other Kirins.

If conditions had been somewhat better, I would have immediately departed to attempt to locate the saboteur and kill them immediately, but that does not appear to be an option.
"A-ah..."

Dame Lizaelea's cheeks colored to match her hair almost immediately, the hundi almost freezing for a second before swiftly averting her eyes.

"O-of course not!" she stammered, "D-d-doing it here, in s-such a place, a-at a tournament..."

She fidgeted, shifting from one foot to another, her gaze now slowly drifting downwards towards the ground, clasping her hands together as she found herself unable to meet the gaze of either of the other knights.

"I-it's not as if a duel at a tournament is unromatic, b-but it's not the setting I would like for such a thing..." she managed, her previously-enthusiastic voice having faded considerably in volume, "I-I d-didn't know you would bring up such matters so abruptly..."

Perhaps matters of romance were a difficult subject for the Lady Lizaelea.

@Psyker Landshark@Eisenhorn




"Nothing so grim," replied the old swordsman, a now-friendly smile on his weathered features. "Merely a chance for discussion among those of my homeland and yours. Of trade, of diplomatic endeavors, and other such matters. And for far more direct communication between those of us who wield the blade."

He paused for a moment as Sir Fleuri spoke, as if turning the knight's words over in his head for a few moments.

"So you know of that one, then?" he responded, his voice remaining polite, "She is of a nature unlike most others. A heart singularly focused on capturing the pinnacle of the sword, no matter what hindrances may encumber her. I cannot say many can pursue the very same path that she has."

@HereComesTheSnow@Crimson Paladin




The horn that rang out over the field snapped Fanilly's mind sharply to reality.

Ah---

Had she been daydreaming? Had she really been daydreaming the entire time? Certainly, it was incredible to be taking part in the Valours tournament, but surely it was entirely unbecoming for the Knight-Captain of the Iron Rose Knights to begin daydreaming in the middle of the field!

Maybe no one had noticed.

She took a deep breath in order to help compose herself. That horn signaled the opening of the tournament, in which steel would meet steel and warriors from across the lands would be tested against one another. Perhaps even some from far more distant places, here for matters of diplomacy or even simply due to wanderings over a great distance, would be present.

There was absolutely no way she could do anything less then put on the image of a fitting Knight-Captain. Do do anything less would be a failure in her role, wouldn't it?

Fanilly turned and began heading for the tournament ground. Originally, she had intended to visit the more festive side of the Valours tournament first, but she had managed to waste her time daydreaming.

She couldn't help but kick herself internally from frustration.
There is a part of me that desired to test my newest acquisition, but the patrol was clearly not prepared enough for this sort of attack. And so, it was not necessary. The Valheim dogs were extinguished plenty fast without it.

I flick the blood from my blade and sheath it.

A... mystrel?

---A mystrel who looks quite familiar.

Is that---

No. The time for assessing him further can wait. For the moment, I must focus on his words.

City of the dead.

I am uncertain how to respond to this. There was no news of such a thing occurring until this very moment. Not even the slightest hint of it.

---No. That's not entirely true. The nature of the Valheim patrol was strange, and they hadn't been looking for us at all. But that still didn't imply anything about the state of the city.

Mathiassen-san has taken the lead, and there is no reason not to follow his intent. As such, I can simply take a position opposite to him, in order to prevent a hasty escape for the mystrel. He needs to answer these questions, and he needs to answer them quickly before anything else can be done.
Perhaps she should have attacked first. In a way, this was more frustrating then simply springing a trap would be as the Saber-class Servant had initially expected to do.

With that being said, however, it was not a total failure. While she would have preferred to reveal herself in battle for the sake of the advantage being a mystery figure would offer, this at least gave some level of understanding of one of the enemy Master's capabilities and tactics. That, if nothing else, was worth something.

"Distasteful," she responded, her eyes scanning the construct once again. Its resemblance to a corpse, its unsteady movements, there was not a single aspect of it that she found pleasant to look upon, "Surely, with such craftsmanship at your disposal, you could create something far more pleasing to the eye, could you not?"

Saber cocked her head as she frowned, eyes traveling over the puppet's form once more. While her stance seemed less guarded, it would be a mistake to assume as such. She was prepared to move or attack at a moment's notice, if the situation demanded, her body tensed and ready no matter how she may appear.

For the moment, however, the conversation was the most fruitful path at her disposal.

"I assume this was the outcome you had hoped for," the Servant continued, "Or at least close to it."
"Very well."

This is, after all, what I wanted to do in the first place. There is no reason to hesitate when I was ready to kill Valheim's dogs from the very beginning.

I tilt my body forward, one hand sliding to the hilt of my blade---

And then I throw myself towards the patrol.

It's trivial. It's simple. There's no way that they're prepared enough for another angle of attack when they've already been ambushed. They clearly were not pursuing our patrol, and thus they are not prepared for us as opponents.

I will take full advantage of this.

But first, I need to locate the radio.

As the figures of the Valheim dogs loom closer in the darkness, my eyes rush over their forms. I have to take in their equipment as quickly as possible, to register my target before he can understand what is occurring.

Sword. Rifle. Dagger. None of those weapons are what I am looking for.

---There. The black object gripped in one gloved hand, raising towards the soldier's mouth.

He is within reach. A few paces away.

My legs tighten as I hurl myself forward. I won't allow him to contact any reinforcements.

He opens his mouth as I reach him. His eyes shift, I can see his gaze coming to rest on my form.

He was not likely prepared to be attacked so immediately. Near the center of their formation, even in the chaos of an ambush, he likely believed he had a moment to contact his allies.

My sword descends, and in a stream of crimson his hand is parted from his wrist, carrying his communications device with it.

I do not allow him to scream.
Fort Magrial


The green, wiry figures that emerged into the yard were unmistakable, with their beady red eyes, batlike ears, and long, hooked noses. One did not need to be an expert to identify them.

The goblins' formation was disorganized and scattered. The had armed themselves, of course, at least a dozen of the green-skinned creatures having filtered into the open yard wielding spears, daggers, and swords. A trio of goblins with crude shortbows stood in the back, closer to the entrance to the deeper fort, but aside from that it seemed they were more intent on investigating for potential intrusion than aware it had already begun. Most were clad in pilfered armor, likely from the remains of deceased warriors found in low places judging by is rather rough condition. Some weapons were wood and carved bone, while others were crudely worked metal, and a handful of daggers and spears were clearly taken in a similar manner to the armor.

And certainly, none of the fort's current occupants were ready for what came next.

A chorus of surprised, cacophonous shrieks arose from the fort as the blinding light filled the air above them, and an earsplitting crack assaulted the goblins' ears. Unprepared for the spell, many of the creatures covered their eyes and staggered back, unable to swiftly recover.

@Raineh Daze@Animal@Psyker Landshark@Eisenhorn@The Otter
Asteriel and Saber in the Abandoned Workshop


Her Master’s mana was nothing to complain about. A staggering amount, perfectly suitable for fueling her in combat.

Her Master had been nothing but courteous towards her. There was no reason not to treat her in kind, and indeed on her honor it was improper to do otherwise.

—However.

She had developed a honed sense for those who could display recklessness, who would endanger themselves far too easily.

It was that which concerned her about her Master.

Regardless, this was the Holy Grail War. They could not, should not, and would not remain idle.

She was a Knight. She was a swordswoman. She would ensure her Master did not fall, and she would ensure that they obtained victory. That was her purpose in this summoning.

Therefore, she would answer her Master’s question of their strategy openly and honestly.

“While I believe we should exercise caution, a proactive approach is most suitable,” replied Saber, brushing her lengthy braided ponytail back with her fingers, “The sooner that we defeat an enemy, the sooner we can conquer their territory and utilize it for staging further attacks.”

There was no doubt in Saber’s mind, at the very least, that her Master’s resources could permit such an approach. Multiple locations of safety within the city would benefit their cause and also ensure that they could retreat if necessary for her Master’s wellbeing.

So, Saber was in favour of being preactive, but the specifics remained up to her. Red eyes drifted back to focus on the storage unit, regarding its protections once again.

In all honesty, it wasn’t bad work. If the owner – foe or local – had just wanted to avoid attention, it was thorough and would escape the attention of most that came looking without any issue. But anything that would drive Asteriel away would need to be considerably more thorough.

For one, the bounded field was not without its effects; the protections unavoidably impacted the flow of mana through the local area. Any magus was somewhat sensitive to the spiritual land they stood on – one only need look at the precipitous decline of the Makiri in the scant centuries since their move to Japan for evidence of that – but she was aware of the world in a way that a human wasn’t. To be part of nature, even artificially… well, it was hard to hide from her.

Secondly, a compulsion to look away when her attention was drawn would find no purchase on the Einzbern. She was no easy target, and to try to do to her what she could do with her eyes alone? For all that she loathed the old man, his stubborn iteration when it came to their Masters had its benefits.

No, the defences here were well-made, if entirely insufficient for a workshop. She was just the wrong intruder.

But this didn’t mean she should be reckless. There could be hidden defenses or even mundane traps. Especially with that door opening, visibly trying to demand her attention. Saber, though… unless an enemy Servant lay in wait, there was nothing a modern magus could have prepared that would imperil the Knight of the Sword, and a stronger defence would only empower her further.

“Then lead the way, Saber.”

“Very well, Master. In that case—”

Saber had nothing to fear from the defenses in place. Of that she was certain. Anything short of the work of a mage from the Age of Gods would be insufficient against her. Therefore, to her mild relief, her Master’s insistence that she lead the way was a wise decision motivated by her knowledge of her Servant’s capabilities.

She would spring what would quite likely be a trap herself.

“Keep a safe distance.”

It was in the span of an instant that the Knight of the Sword reached the door and pushed it aside, the thin blade of her sword materializing in a flurry of brilliant white lights. And yet, there was no movement inside.

However—

She could sense something strange here. Something wasn’t right. A table housed some form of modern devices there, which appeared to be for use as appliances. That, in and of itself, was not strange when it came to the purposes of some form of base of operations. That much would be expected.

But the slumped, lifeless-looking shape on the other hand, was quite abnormal. At a glance, Saber could not discern if any blasphemous and wicked rituals had been conducted upon the body. Indeed, it simply appeared motionless.

“There is what appears to be a corpse here, Master,” the brunette knight said, without removing her eyes from the body. She took a step closer, then paused, running her eyes over the lifeless shape once more. She could detect something from it.

A presence. The source of the sensation of being watched?

“It seems as if it is no ordinary body,” added Saber, “I am no mage, but I can sense some sort of presence from it.”

Stepping closer to the body, more details became visible in the dim, dusty half-light of the workshop. The lifeless form appeared now to be a construct rather than a carcass, its design as spartan and functional as its surroundings. What at first glance seemed to be the pale skin of a corpse yet to peel away from the rotting meat and dry bones beneath was now evident as rubber stretched taut over a frame that merely approximated human shape; for whatever the designs of whoever had left it here were, it seemed that they had little interest in dipping their toes into their discipline’s darker depths.

And yet, that came with little relief.

Though it may not have been a corpse violated or manipulated to some end by blasphemous ritual, the figure was yet unnerving to behold. Even if one were to overlook or fail to perceive the current of energy that seemed to run through it, a particularly dense pocket collecting in its chest, there was no mistaking the perverse intent that had been placed into the figure’s construction. While its frame was of apparently mundane origin, a mannequin that could just as well been snatched from a warehouse as crafted from scratch, the way in which it had been positioned was meticulously arranged to provoke discomfort. The sickly shade of its synthetic skin and the way in which it rested lifelessly in the chair had clearly been designed to evoke a body left to rot; and even before that, the very nature of its shape drew the common response of humanity to the uncanny, whether it was pure instinct or the learned paranoia of a warrior that made them alert to the unknown.

Compounding the unease was the head that rested slumped on those clammy shoulders: the skull of a large animal, stripped of flesh and polished such that the light of Saber’s sword gleamed against its ivory surface. Although it didn’t seem to have been excessively tampered with beyond being affixed to its new body, a cord ran from one of the devices on the table behind it, running up and through the nape of the neck that joined them-

And as it raised its head to look directly at Saber, piercing red light glared out of the depths of its dark, empty eye sockets to regard her.

It was no simple corpse. While Saber’s knowledge of magecraft was restricted largely to how to combat it and some passing familiarity due to the exploits of her allies, her understanding of what she was observing as it began to move swiftly sharpened. As repulsive as it was, it was at least no blasphemous manipulation of a corpse.

That did not make its appearance any less perverse, and in utterly poor taste. Who designed such a thing? Surely, as some form of servile construct, they could have made it less repulsive.
Then again, perhaps the strange servitor’s appearance was related to the techniques used to animate it? Such things could be so, as far as Saber understood, when it came to the topic of magecraft.

“Unidentified.”The voice that came from within the skull was tinny and distorted, and its movements weren’t significantly divorced from that. The sudden upwards jerk of its head had seemed almost involuntary, the rest of its frame failing to shift even an inch in concert; the pinpricks of light that bore into Saber felt equally ambiguous, their assessment of her feeling more of a statement than an accusation.

“Your presence has been logged.” Perhaps it was too early to discern whether or not it was a conscious entity; but the deep, mechanical monotone suggested that whatever spark of life animated it was faint. That the intelligence it possessed was as rudimentary as its form. “What is the purpose of your visit?”

There was a lack of hostility from the corpse-like puppet, at least for the moment. After some consideration, Saber concluded it was best to attempt to extract more information from it before moving on and destroying it if necessary.

“Stay back, Master. It is some form of construct,” she called, looking back over her shoulder only briefly before returning her attention entirely to the puppet.

“I am here as a visitor, merely to observe this workshop,” she said in response to its question. It was not entirely a lie, and as of this moment no further action had been determined. Saber found it unlikely that the workshop was not some form of trap that would need to be destroyed, but if further understanding could be extracted from the construct then that meant it was best to take things more slowly.

The construct’s impassive stare held throughout Saber’s deliberation, either oblivious or entirely indifferent to the very real possibility of its destruction by her hands. It did, however, shift away from her the moment she called out to Asteriel; leaning briefly in tune with her own movement to stare past her, towards the doorframe and the woman just beyond it.

It maintained that position for a brief moment, the red light doing its best to penetrate the steely gleam of the sword at its guest’s side, which disturbed the darkness its primitive senses had presumably been tuned to. No response seemed forthcoming as Saber attempted to maintain its attention on her-

”Master.” As it returned slowly to its upright position, it spoke not in its previous monotone, but in the Servant’s own timbre; not conscious imitation, but a frequency decoded and replicated through its mechanical larynx. Its unblinking gaze was now squarely back on her, and though there was yet no sign of immediate hostility, the light seemed more intense than before. ”Subject identified. Servant, designation unclear. Secondary subject, Master. Unidentified. Unnaturally high mana throughput.”

There came another lull: unlike before, however, it was precipitated not by silence, but by a strange sound that came from within the puppet’s skull. Though she was unlikely to have encountered it directly since manifesting, the knowledge that the Grail supplied Saber would quickly identify it as the sound of a digital phone ringing, the electronic sound running in concert with flashes of light from one of the devices behind the skull-headed puppet.

”Request received. Stand by for transfer.” And with a click, the sound stopped, returning the workshop to silence.

“Aaaah, you really should have attacked first. Now they know we’re here,” Asteriel seemed to have some idea what was going on – or, perhaps, she had just been able to hear the ringing of a phone, “But then, perhaps this is better? It makes our search far shorter.”

”We’ll call that a matter of perspective, dear.” Once again, a tinny voice broke the silence. But this time, as the puppet rose from the chair to stand upon its own two feet, it was neither its initial mechanical monotone nor its mimicry of Saber, but a new, unfamiliar voice. ”Either way, you needn’t fret. I knew you were here the moment you invited yourself in.”

Well, now they definitely should have destroyed it. Maybe it would have made the other Master come visiting without stopping to consider the levels of mana she could bring to bear.

But if they knew anything about the war, then they would identify her on sight. It hardly mattered – she was just going to stay over here and wait.
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