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If I went too far, let me know and I'll edit. Otherwise, we should find a Pad to make this interaction more fluid (since At'chaa would have interrupted both Kasari and Eevy, but for the sake of the RP, I didn't do that).
Now a collaboration posted by @mattmanganon
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3262866
Please ignore the posts directly above and below this post by @mattmanganon
http://www.roleplayerguild.com/posts/3262866
Please ignore the posts directly above and below this post by @mattmanganon
I'm sorry if I'm not giving you enough @NeutralNexus. But I'm thinking it going to be short posts for a bit as action occurs.
And my post didn't tell what Malov did...only alluded to the idea. ;)
@Sohtem@mattmanganon
I interjected. ;)
EDIT: Let me know if I'm going to far. I don't want to ruin your guys' plans.
And my post didn't tell what Malov did...only alluded to the idea. ;)
@Sohtem@mattmanganon
I interjected. ;)
EDIT: Let me know if I'm going to far. I don't want to ruin your guys' plans.
It talked too much for Ael's care. It was quite similar to the Dark Jedi he'd encountered many years ago, but this one was different if only due to the blanket of sadness and fear over the both of them.
He wasn't surprised the Sith had found them and glared at them through a black glass, but Ael was still irritated that it was trying to demean and intimidate them. He stepped in front of his Padawan, her entire body disappearing behind his own, but she still tried to peer around him. There was something about the Dark Creature that held Javilla's interest, or, at the very least, attention.
"It tries to take mind," Ael told Javilla but looked straight at the Creature. He wouldn't give the Sith the courtesy of using gendered pronouns. In his culture, the workings of Evil were done by Dark Creatures devoid of gender and emotion. They fed on the emotions of his people, but he would not allow this physical manifestation of such negativity affect him in such a manner. He called upon his Ancestors to keep up the screen in an attempt to block out it's negativity.
"Focus on me," Ael told his Padawan through his mind. He didn't know if it actually reached her, since his telepathy skills lacked entirely. More so, the current situation was probably too much for the girl.
"Javilla. Run," he turned his head with his eyes still following the Creature across the room. She understood that he wanted her to reach the ship and flee the planet. "Now!" he shouted, his voice making the metal around them vibrate.
Ael's concern for the female turned into a fire that shot toward their attempted mental aggressor. With the generator between the two of them, the heat from the fire threatened to make the contraption explode. He then fled through the tunnels, attempting to track down Javilla's now erratic Force signature. His 7'4" figure made quick work through the pipes but couldn't remember or even recognize any of the passages as he raced through.
He followed Javilla's erratic Ancestral Essence. He eventually found her hunched over, allowing the loud, dull hum of another generator counteract the welling negativity inside her.
"Javilla," his voice growled in an attempt to show concern. "You do well?" he wondered aloud in his still-broken Basic.
She sniffed, she was clearly crying. "It was awful," she whined.
Before she could complain further, the Darkness that surrounded them fell down hard. Javilla, once again, wailed in emotional distress and Ael turned to see if the Creature had followed them or if he was performing this trick from afar. "You must get up, Javilla!" he shouted, trying to make his voice exude the Light to reach her, for he hadn't the focus anymore to perform this mentally.
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"No, don't bother," a rather callous female voice stated behind a wall. Master Cluyr had arrived as per the request of one of the Jedi chasing the unknown Force-user on the planet. "There is no threat from him."
Her tone made her seem irritated with the four Jedi tasked with this mission. At'chaa's understanding of how the mission proceeded made her wonder if these Jedi, in particular, were a poor choice or if the man was truly so elusive. But the quick, and rather rash, decisions made by the girl, Eevy, at least made the retrieval quick.
"He is no Sith and I've had enough of you both claiming he is. He is a Gray Jedi at the most. He poses no threat to the Order, or anyone for that matter."
At'chaa believed Gray Jedi to be weak. They did not hold the resolve to keep the Jedi Code and they were cowards to not turn to the Dark. She held no interest in what the "Neutral Side" of the Force held. She'd done her fair share of studying, as any Jedi Master had, on the subject. To her, it was denial of the Force rather than an accepting or controlling of it. It was a strange philosophy that she passed off as unconventional and unnecessary.
"I'm surprised even you, Kasari, could not pick up on this man's unusual Force signature. He's clearly trying to be so negative," she stated. Master Cluyr was gifted in the use of Force Senses. The Master was surprised she wasn't consulted in the selection of the team for this mission since the Master, herself, was one of the best trackers in the Galaxy.
"However, I am not surprised by your actions, Miss Hunt. I warned the Councilors of your lack of training in self-control. I don't understand your deductive skills that led you to igniting your Lightsaber in public and shouting through a crowd. You lack grace and understanding, my dear girl."
The Nikto had always been offensive and condescending to every member of the Order, even her fellow Masters. But not quite to this degree. However, if At'chaa would make the girl cry from this, it would not affect her as it wouldn't have been the first time.
He wasn't surprised the Sith had found them and glared at them through a black glass, but Ael was still irritated that it was trying to demean and intimidate them. He stepped in front of his Padawan, her entire body disappearing behind his own, but she still tried to peer around him. There was something about the Dark Creature that held Javilla's interest, or, at the very least, attention.
"It tries to take mind," Ael told Javilla but looked straight at the Creature. He wouldn't give the Sith the courtesy of using gendered pronouns. In his culture, the workings of Evil were done by Dark Creatures devoid of gender and emotion. They fed on the emotions of his people, but he would not allow this physical manifestation of such negativity affect him in such a manner. He called upon his Ancestors to keep up the screen in an attempt to block out it's negativity.
"Focus on me," Ael told his Padawan through his mind. He didn't know if it actually reached her, since his telepathy skills lacked entirely. More so, the current situation was probably too much for the girl.
"Javilla. Run," he turned his head with his eyes still following the Creature across the room. She understood that he wanted her to reach the ship and flee the planet. "Now!" he shouted, his voice making the metal around them vibrate.
Ael's concern for the female turned into a fire that shot toward their attempted mental aggressor. With the generator between the two of them, the heat from the fire threatened to make the contraption explode. He then fled through the tunnels, attempting to track down Javilla's now erratic Force signature. His 7'4" figure made quick work through the pipes but couldn't remember or even recognize any of the passages as he raced through.
He followed Javilla's erratic Ancestral Essence. He eventually found her hunched over, allowing the loud, dull hum of another generator counteract the welling negativity inside her.
"Javilla," his voice growled in an attempt to show concern. "You do well?" he wondered aloud in his still-broken Basic.
She sniffed, she was clearly crying. "It was awful," she whined.
Before she could complain further, the Darkness that surrounded them fell down hard. Javilla, once again, wailed in emotional distress and Ael turned to see if the Creature had followed them or if he was performing this trick from afar. "You must get up, Javilla!" he shouted, trying to make his voice exude the Light to reach her, for he hadn't the focus anymore to perform this mentally.
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"No, don't bother," a rather callous female voice stated behind a wall. Master Cluyr had arrived as per the request of one of the Jedi chasing the unknown Force-user on the planet. "There is no threat from him."
Her tone made her seem irritated with the four Jedi tasked with this mission. At'chaa's understanding of how the mission proceeded made her wonder if these Jedi, in particular, were a poor choice or if the man was truly so elusive. But the quick, and rather rash, decisions made by the girl, Eevy, at least made the retrieval quick.
"He is no Sith and I've had enough of you both claiming he is. He is a Gray Jedi at the most. He poses no threat to the Order, or anyone for that matter."
At'chaa believed Gray Jedi to be weak. They did not hold the resolve to keep the Jedi Code and they were cowards to not turn to the Dark. She held no interest in what the "Neutral Side" of the Force held. She'd done her fair share of studying, as any Jedi Master had, on the subject. To her, it was denial of the Force rather than an accepting or controlling of it. It was a strange philosophy that she passed off as unconventional and unnecessary.
"I'm surprised even you, Kasari, could not pick up on this man's unusual Force signature. He's clearly trying to be so negative," she stated. Master Cluyr was gifted in the use of Force Senses. The Master was surprised she wasn't consulted in the selection of the team for this mission since the Master, herself, was one of the best trackers in the Galaxy.
"However, I am not surprised by your actions, Miss Hunt. I warned the Councilors of your lack of training in self-control. I don't understand your deductive skills that led you to igniting your Lightsaber in public and shouting through a crowd. You lack grace and understanding, my dear girl."
The Nikto had always been offensive and condescending to every member of the Order, even her fellow Masters. But not quite to this degree. However, if At'chaa would make the girl cry from this, it would not affect her as it wouldn't have been the first time.
@NeutralNexusB!tch, I wasn't talking to you. Slow your role...
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@Phoenix I get what you're saying and I'm adjusting that a bit more in my next post, I may have overdone it a tad, was just trying to get a message across is all, she can usually be pretty tame about such incidents, I just wanted to add a little more to it, get the ball going straight away so to speak.Sorry again for my harshness.
My point was, and this is purely from my understanding of what the Jedi Order is "supposed" to represent, Jedi are taught to proceed with caution and only enter combat as the defendant. With Eevy not knowing how to interpret Orias' Force signature, I, personally, feel that Eevy reacted in a very non-Jedi manner. Yes, some Padawan might behave that way, but before ascending to Knighthood, that probably would have been beaten out of her.
However, I'm not sure how Nite intended to have the Order be represented by others and within themselves. I know one of the Councilor NPCs I created, should she have learned about this action, would make a movement to place Eevy back under a Master and deem her a Padawan again. And this would be an action considering still the fact that this "may have been" a 1-time thing. Possibly something that could be explored in the near-future.
As far as the Force goes, mostly movies and games and such, but I'm also allowed the previous EU stuff as well.Well, I'm more wondering the extent of individual's control/power with the Force. Is Luke/Vader/Anakin/Obi-wan/Revan/Meetra the norm? If so, I'm going to have to add some things to my character.
Also, the Jedi Order is not quite as strict as they had been previously, such as allowing relationships and romance.
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Oh I don't know. Star Wars Canon as well as the old EU is full of young Jedi who don't exactly follow instructions and take things into their own hands.
Disclaimer: I understand that you will interpret things differently than what I have experienced, but that is why I'm asking questions.
To me, Revan/Meetra/Vader (Anakin) are exceptions to the norm for most Force-users. In my opinion, they are over-powered. Still, during combat, one cannot use Force Powers while striking at an opponent. Time (however little) and Focus (however quick) are necessary for both actions (Lightsaber Combat and Force Powers) and performing both simultaneously is, to me, considered a no-no.
But I just want to get your opinion so I understand how I should proceed with combat/skills.
I didn't suspect you would have this Jedi Order so strict on relationships, marriage, children, etc. But thank you for clarifying considering my character has so many children -_-...that fu(king family tree is a nightmare.
Well, that Star Wars canon follows Luke and Anakin. Anakin being one of a vast many Jedi. Even as a Knight, he didn't portray such blatant aggression (as a Jedi). Luke, on the other hand, only had Obi-wan...and look at that man's track record for training Jedi -_-...heh
My understanding is that most Padawan/Young Knights exhibit a great level of self-control (something that is trained very at the beginning and throughout). My point was, the degree to which Eevy took action to an unknown and not knowing the possibility for aggression was out-of-place in the Jedi Order. Even if she was like that only rarely, she would be severely reprimanded for such behavior. Again, I'm not saying this is a bad thing, just something to consider. But, like before, I'm not passing a judgement on this manner. I mean to only state my opinion and try to clear up what tenants the Jedi are following and how closely. ^^
@NeutralNexusYAAAAAAASSSSSSSS
Give it to me!! *groan
*Ninja'd
I just realized how harsh I sounded. I haven't been on the computer in a while. I'll get on after work today. (:
I didn't mean to say that she is. But the Council would have been able to judge if her lack of self control would still show up and put others (Jedi and others) in danger. The post portrays an inability to approach an unknown situation in a hyper-aggressive manner that is entirely uncharacteristic of a Padawan, nevermind a Knight.
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