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Ben Solo


Ben sped through Coruscant, the metal world whizzing by in blurs of bronze, silver, and copper. Immersed in the Force, the young descendant of Anakin Skywalker felt the danger ahead. They: the padawans, could be heard now. Their whimpers was meshed with the sound of scraping metal, the cringe of sharp, pointed steel on Coruscant's titanic metal surface.

A sense of urgency sent him even faster into motion, until his hair, robes, and skin felt like a flicker on his body. He burst through and came to a stop, looking upon the smaller, canine-like animals that surrounded the ship. A few were larger than the rest but they all looked alike. Silver fur with a line of black fall down its spine and tail. They were numerous, he counted a dozen himself.

Ben ignited his lightsaber, its powerful crackle brought the attention of the beasts to him and away from the padawans held up in the ship.

"You've picked the wrong children to mess with," he thought, eyeing them and absently wondering what they doing there.

A large one snarled maliciously at the three, the others fell into order and did the same. They were now all focused on them and all Ben could do was smile. He reveled in the thought, in the chance that he'd be able to let out all his anger instead of holding it in. He didn't care how reckless it would be, he'd go all out today and crush this beast.

He snapped a hand forward and with the Force crushed the windpipe of the beast that had growled first. Afterwards, its body went them and lifless. The sizzle of his ligthsaber burned, awaiting the next to fall to the princling.
@AHeartlessNobody Sorry about the delay. Between sleeping and work, the time sorta just slipped from me. I'm gonna get a post out right now.
I'm honestly just happy that the world is on a good roll.

The one step thing at time is something I'm more-than pleased about. I was unsure, however, if the beginning of my post was fine. I sorta skipped the details of entering, so it worried me. But since I didn't get called out on it, I'm guessing I'm fine.
Michael Sonnen


The light from his helmet showed poorly through the rusty hue of the cave. He always took note of the small things, the inconsequential details that seemed so minuscule that it was nearly worthless at the time. In the long run, they were just things to distract him. A sequence of intuitive observations to keep him sane, to keep him from acting on his emotions. He furrowed his brows while his large fingers felt the raw surface of the cavern.

He moved on mentally and decided to remind himself of his duties.

Mineshaft 27... he mused to himself, always moving forward. The rock here is hard, harder than Dumas anyway.

Michael pounded on the rock and felt the echo of his impact flow back through him. they had worked meticously to keep the mine strong, either that or it was a New Earth-made fortress. Natural and wholly unmoving. The Red Rock mines were certainly for Class 3 miners and above, and now he could see why. Novices would ruin it; they would waste precious veins, get lost in the winding and dazing tunnels, or die from unexpected drop or fall. He hadn't been in there for more than a few mintues when he stumbled upon one himself. Nearly slipped down into a dark pit.

It hadn't taken long for the mines to widen. The entrance had been massive but he could tell from the walls afar that it would be narrow before widening again. He felt like water might had carved its path through it once but its absence was unnerving to his judgement. Not a sound of a river or drop anywhere. Only heat and humidity had blown from its hollow halls now.

Finally he peered into the dark, where his helmet's light revealed stalactites arcing the cave ceiling and stalagmites dotting the floor way down and near the walls. A heavy breath left him as he unraveled the map from his pocket to place himself and his goal in perspective. His uniform was already half way off, the sleeves tied around his waist and hanging near his ankles. The gray-shirt he wore was stained by sweat... his cousin's daily planner was tucked in his back pocket.

"Not too long now," he said softly, before sliding the map back in his pocket. He readjusted the circlet of rope over his shoulder and picked up his pickaxe; he eyed the blast sticks nervously before packing those up as well.

Maybe I should go back and get things straightened out.
@AHeartlessNobody I would have been okay with anything. The danger was an okay for you to do whatever you want, but I'll do it.
Ben Solo


"No," Ben repeated Luke's answer to Odette to his mind. Of course not. Every step of the way I want her next to me. The truth was... is, that I needed her there.

He didn't spare her a glance. He only followed behind the Master, the eyes of the students and their worry was palpable in the Force. Ben had felt determined to finally discover his past, to scratch away the veil in hopes that it would rectify his struggle. It was the only explanation for his confusion, for his anxiety, and temper. What else could it be after all.

The buzzing of life soon picked up, the once low hum became a growing grumble as they ventured further away from the padawans. Ben thought pointedly on his actions before, on the anger and frustration that drove him there, on the cold and night-stricken warrior that hammered the final nail in. And though he hated to admit it, more than anything else, on the fear that provoked it. Luke's back was broad and strong, his age hadn't done much to bend or hump it.

For the first time in a long time, Ben thought.

He's truly strong.

Than he lowered his head, his curling strands falling below his chin. He half-smirked, a devious if not wholly unnatural grin. ... too strong. The strong always holds the darkest secrets.

Before long the Master leapt onto a four story stature, a building of some sort made of pure bronzed metal. Ben followed suit with a Force augmented jump of his own; he felt graceful in that moment, the wind pulling at his face and his robes, the sunlight striking over his pale countance. He felt supernatural, inhuman. But that was everything he invoked or immersed himself in the Force. It made him feel godly, if not completely invincible.

When he landed with a thump, his crouched form perceived Luke's back to him, the old man's eyes were off in the far distance. Ben didn't have time for his mediocore dramatics.

"Explain, Master Luke. I'm trying my best to understand... and I'm coming up blank. I need this guidance," Ben said stonily.

Luke nodded in agreement before half-turning to face them. The sun lit his face witih a clarity, discerning the past-etched wrinkles and the pain in his soft-spoken eyes. "Very well," he sighed, the wind caressed the deep folds of his light robes. "Ben... your mother and I, you, we are descendant from Anakin Skywalker. His name carries an immeasurable weight, his deeds both glorifying and demented are worth hiding from anyone but you even more so. But I've glimpse what the Force holds for you and I'm fearful of it..."

Ben had begun to rebuke the obvious but Luke's paused stopped him. It was meaningful, he remembered thinking.

"He was thought to be "The Chosen One" first, after that, he was a powerful leader and Jedi Knight; a hero of the Clone Wars... and even further down, he became a unmoving killer. He slaughtered the Jedi in the temple. Lulled by the Dark Side, he cast aside his friends and his family. He destroyed everything he loved before my Master, Obi-wan, killed him. The Jedi Temple is stained by that, immersed by the void that was his anger. You both could feel it right, the powerful connection to the Force inside the temple. It can dreg up bad memories but this also allows the Force to work in mysterious ways."

"So he died then?" Ben asked not so much for himself, rather, he was guided to that question by the Force.

"Anakin, yes. His shadow not so much." Luke eyed Odette shortly without warning. Unbidden the Master strode towards the northern edge of the building, staring in the direction of the padawans. "We'll finish this later, Ben, Odette. Something is amiss and heading towards the padawans, we must hurry." He was calm.

Ben hadn't noticed it before but now he felt a sense of danger for his peers as well. "You bet we will." He set in stone.
I'm glad we're not going to wait any longer. I tend to lose touch with my characters quickly if I don't use em.
Ben Solo


Ben felt distant from the Master, Odette, and the padawans. Outside the Temple, they had converged on the monumental steps. With Luke at the top gazing intently back, thoughtfully so, at the former Jedi temple. Ben had grown tired, exhausted. All of his worrying, his visages, frustration, his anger... all of it had physically drained him. It made him ill-tempered. Not even the quirkiest of padawans had dared near him, feeling his anger through the patchwork of the Force.

They would be hairline fractures in the grand scheme of things he imagined.

His fear of the dark-armored warrior stayed close to his heart. It was a cold, ghostly feeling. A spectral hand that beckoned and caged him all at once. His thin dark brows lowered over his cold eyes, his lean face was pale even in the brisk, warm, sunlight. Ben looked down at his hand. His fingers were calloused and dirty, long and strong.

He could still feel Odette on his palm. When she embraced him in that dark hall, he instantly embraced her back but refused to speak. After a meaningful minute, he had grabbed her shoulders, slipped his hand in her's, and retraced their steps back; his lightsaber's crackling blue light led them back. He had nearly hurt her in his desperation. It was scary for him.

Now, they waited for Master Luke to give his orders.

There's too much Vader in him...


I won't allow myself to be lied too! Not anymore, not after this. I will find the truth! His fist balled until his veins knotted against his skin.

While the master spoke, Ben motioned down the stairs and strode away. At the moment he cared little for whatever they were talking about. It all seemed meaningless now, the training, the mentoring, the lies... the secrets. Ben's jaw tightened as he called on the Force and pulled his lightsaber into his hand, with a swift motion the blade crackled to life.

The padawans were startled into looking his way.

He felt their curiosity in the Force. But he didn't have anything for them look into, to peer at. It was simple hostility, anger that felt uncontrollable. With a brutal slash he scarred the stairs black. A piece of the squarded brick split in two and broke apart. Ben heaved vehemently from the onslaught he delivered afterwards.

"I'am broken and split in two, Master. Yet you've done nothing to piece me together. These talks are only making it worse, pushing it back so that it can explode later. You will tell me the truth about what you're hiding from me," he tried to control his madness but felt it slip towards the end.
@AHeartlessNobody Today was my day off so I took the time to indulge in some Dark Souls lols. Anyway, I'm going to post now ^_^
Ben Solo - Dissent


Fear ripped through Ben, her scream a nightmare come true, a different kind of terror that he had all but avoided. He rushed towards her voice, carried by the Force almost instinctively. Still though, he was a moment too late. His clenched fist slammed into the wall before he scrambled across its surface, frantically searching for a pad, keyplate, or trick brick.

"ODETTE!"

He felt his breathing quicken, his fear turn into frustration, into anger. So badly he wished to lash out against it with all the might of the Force but his gut and heart warned him against it. If Odette was still close to the wall, he could hurt her gravely. For he was strong in the Force, incredibly so. His potential was... unkind and unfair.

"Don't worry, I'll get you out! I'll get to you... somehow," he uttered.

He felt trapped. As usual the feeling, the helplessness was crippling. His breathing was so heavy that it filled the silence and darkness in the hall, without Odette's lightsaber to warm and light his path, It was pitch black.

Soon afterwards his urgency was alone. His friend had gained composure, found calm in her perilous situation. He couldn't explain how frustrating it was to hear her assure him of her safety. How could she know that? How could she be certain? The temple was a forgotten relic of a terribly dark past, the Force granted power, but it also crafted horrific dreams too.

His breaths slid out in frustration, swift but deep. For a long time he paused, his mouth fighting with his heart until it relented. "... O-Odette, please be careful,"

He pushed off the wall, only a large palm remaining against it. In the Force, he could feel her significant mote of light coinciding with his own presence. She was right there, her palm, on his. All that was between them was a obstacle he couldn't get over. And that lit a flame so violent in his stomach that he had to step away. Lest he tear it down around her and himself.

Dumbfounded, Ben backed up until he bumped into a half-a-broken pillar and fell onto his bottom in pain. Dammit! Was all he managed before feeling his words become stuck in his throat. For some reason, he could see his breath now, a wisp of air that flowed with his lungs. He felt... cold.

Rising up, he realized that the hall he was in was no longer there. In a flash, he was standing in a grand hall, a throne room of sorts sitting admist a dim cerulean light, crimson armored guards with energy staffs lined its path. Its seat was empty and it called to him persuasively, as if apart of him and wanting to return. Ben was still, his arms clenching tight to his sleeves.

In the darkness, he heard but a single sound. Ominous, intimidating, and hollow. A deep, regulating sound. A exhale and inhale. Ben felt instant fear as a black, reflective boot stepped out of the peerless darkness outside the throne's light. Another breath slid through the darkness like a fog. Than a deep voice, just as intimidating, and just as cold spoke,

"Claim your destiny child, claim our seat," he declared.

The vision suddenly ended and Ben found himself backed up against the wall, sweating profusely, though the cold had still chilled his bones. He hustled to his feet, and with frustrated beyond reason plaguing his heart, lashed out against the wall behind him. A swing of his tense arm sent a blast against it, smoke and debris was inside the darkened room. Smoke drifted out by his feet, while a dim glow in the darkness glimmered in his eyes. A blue glow that beckoned like a moth to a flame.

The blowback cradled his hair gently.

Apprehension kept him grounded for a moment. If he had taken a step near it would another vision torment him? He decided to take that bet; he knew that familiar glow. The importance of that dim light. It was a crystal, one meant for a Jedi's weapon. Perhaps... perhaps it was time. The Force was telling him so. He stepped through the makeshift hole, made his way into the room, and heard the terrible crack of bone and flesh. Ben looked down and cringed with disgust.

Damn, rats.

Once up on the light, he noticed it was concealed partly inside of something. Taking a knee he loomed over it till he discerned what it was. The end result was a lightsaber, a broken one but a lightsaber nonetheless. Picking it up, he felt its weight in his hand and knew then that both Luke and Odette had been carrying a powerful burden. He could feel himself become... more. Ben raised up and glanced towards the wall that Odette had been trapped behind.

His movement was instant, the Force driving him quickly towards the target. With a crackle and crippled hum, the blue lightsaber came to life and forced its way into the wall. He doubted she'd still be behind there but it was easier following her footsteps. Rock melted against the overwhelming force as he etched, with effort, a path. Once done, he kicked the wall down and stepped through it.

She was gone. But he figured that himself.

"Odette! You here?"

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