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@Sinerathin

Uhhhh... into Liaena's satchel, never to be seen again? ^^
@POOHEAD189

I'll take the fact that you haven't fled this thread at the sight of me as a good sign ^_^
"HEY! MISTRESS IS NOT DONE WITH YOU YET, MONKEY!" Lithrielle would exclaim as Liaena suddenly ran off, her purple cheeks gaining a distinct blood red hue!

However, as she looked over at Serphia, Lithrielle would immediately frown as she noticed Serphia wasn't really paying the situation any real attention. Opening her mouth a bit, Lithrielle would tilt her head as she eyed her mistress to see if she was all well.

"Uhhh... mistress Serphia?"

"Mmmmhhm... let her go." Serphia simply said as she waved her hand towards Lithrielle, motioning for her to calm down.

"We will let the midget go and try to deal with the giantess problem in the yard herself." She continued, turning to give Lithrielle a smile.
"If she just so happens to get trampled, eaten or otherwise obliterated by her massively overpowering foe, we will simply deal with the problem ourselves! And if they destroy each other, that's just a win-win for us!"

"B-but... " Lithrielle stammered, looking worried.
"What if the giant Draenei wins?"

"Go find Naliyah and go see if she doesn't have something in her stash that we cannot use against the Draenei."

"Naliyah?! You can't be serious, mistress!"

"Ohhh, I know we can rely on her." Serphia smirked as she formed a slight grin with her purple lips looking down at Lithrielle.
"Tell her that I know where her Rithrynn is."

Lithrielle remained silent for a moment, yet her worried expression soon faded into that of a smile as she looked back up at her mistress!

"Ohhh, that's brilliant! I'll go find her right away, mistress!"

*

Malizia had already bent over and was in the process of moving over towards the tiny sentinel and Silje, both of whom had nowhere to run now as Mei had already ran past them and shut the door behind them, leaving them outside and alone before the gigantic ebony draenei that was rapidly closing in on them!

That was, until her head suddenly snapped around at the sound of another beautiful creature... !

"Could it be? ... "

“I don’t suppose…you could step away from the screaming human? It would be very nice of you”

Stopping right in her tracks, Malizia would turn around and spot Kathlin! She did look a little bit different, in her heavy protection gear, but even through the heavy guide, her person was unmistakable! Malizia's eyes would widen into star-filled orbs as she smiled with glee!

"Little mushie-wushie!" She exclaimed, and in one sudden show of (giant) acrobatics, the giantess had swung around, launched herself across the yard, knocking and tearing up a good number of the trees and bushes in the process, before slamming down on her butt in front of Kathlin and swooping her up in one hand, holding the tiny human up in front of her!

"I sooo missed you!" Malizia exclaimed as she looked down at the little human in her hand, her face bright with joy!
"I was so worried some of those mean elves might have hurt you!"

As Malizia said that, the giant draenei would throw a dirty look down towards the sentinel holding Silje, all the while the Sentinel was slowly trying to inch towards the door to frantically knock on it in hopes that Mei would open!

Turning back to Kathlin with a huge grin, the Draenei would notice the tiny device in the human's hands, before raising a finger and motioning towards it.

"D'aaaaawwwwhhh! Did you bring that gift for me?" Malizia would exclaim with a sound of exasperation.
"You are soooo wonderful, I could just eat you up, cutiepie!"

I did a small reinvention of the character sheet to emphasize the frail psyker trait :D


@Andreyich

I never said I'd turn her into the hulk ^^
@Rithy
So here are the issues with your character that need to be corrected.

First on appearance, psykers are typically fairly drained of their physical traits due to the severe strains their bodies go through when becoming sanctioned. It typically makes them a little more feeble. Another thing I see a bit of an issue with is that your character is this very powerfully built character, but very feminine? I’d need to see an example of this to really understand I guess, but mainly psykers typically aren’t very buff because of the strain their bodies went through.
The appearance is more of a flavor thing I did. I did plan to make her sort of like a "battle mage" kind of character, so I figured it'd make sense if she a bit more physical than your run-of-the-mill psyker. In RPG terms, imagine someone who spent a lot of points in stamina! :D
I might draw a picture to illustrate!


Powers: Psychic powers are sampling from several disciplines. Canon dictates that while it is possible for Psykers to use multiple schools, it is extremely hard. Divination and Telekinesis are two separate disciplines, Smite and Storm of Lightning come from Biomancy. Thus, Adrianne has skills from three separate psychic disciplines when mastering one is considered a grand achievement.
That is true. Granted, if she is with the Inquisition, she usually has some notable talent that puts her above the rest. Or at least so I think!
I could limit it just to Telekinesis with a few tidbits from biomancy, if you think the original was too much.


Equipment:

Main weapon: Weapon misnamed. The weapon described here is a Glaive, not an oversized Saber with an extended handle. Not that big of a deal

Pistol: You’re a psyker? Not sure why you need this, plus it would be more like a autopistol which are honestly not all that great. But I'll accept it if you want to keep it.
There are times when even a Psyker could need to rely on more mundane tools! Though if you'd allow it, I would upgrade it to a Plasma Pistol. I was just unsure what equipment would be Ok to start with.

Ceremonial Dagger: I’m not against it, but I’m curious as to why?
How many action scenes haven't you seen when the hero is being beaten by the enemy in a wrestling match, only for the hero to pull out a dagger and shank its determinator foe?! ^^

Refractor field: This is pretty rare tech. Not a whole lot of people use it. White Scars Souldrinkers use them, as well as Imperial Guard officers and enginseers.
Since I'm planning on giving her a background involving the guard and seeing as she's now involved with the Inquisition, I imagined it wouldn't be too far fetched for her to have obtained one!
Besides, who in their right mind would want to risk a stray bullet disrupting the psyker when she was channeling raw, terrifying arcane energies?!


Servo Skulls: I’m fine with you having one, but I’d prefer you only have one.
There goes my plan of a servo skull swarm...

Events:

Savior: Events given are unclear. Personal Augury allows one to see the fate of a willing target, but it was never specified to have been used. Preternatural Awareness gives impressions of future events, but is also not described being used. Overall, very foggy and could use more detail.

Guide: I'll buy that. Glimpse allows for a look into the future to see what might happen. Coupled with Far Sight could make for a pretty effective "Guess and check" system.

Hates Surprises: Why is this here? Feels more like a quirk than a meaningful event.

Fireteam: Prescience is an effective ability, but I don't believe it is that effective.

Warpstorm: This event seems to catapult her straight into "Rogue" territory. The line "What had been a cautious girl that had stepped onto the planet would instead emerge a seemingly reckless with little to no restraint on her powers!" Tells me that she'd probably be suspected of falling to chaos pretty quickly and killed on precaution.

I wrote a lot of these events a while ago. If you want them to better reflect the character's direct abilities, I could adjust them!

As for the whole reckless thing, she plays risky, and has reaped great rewards for it. It's much of the reason why she became so powerful! She is playing with fire, and chaos hasn't claimed her... at least not yet!
Her theme is basically that she is living on the edge, though hasn't gone over it yet :D


@Andreyich

T'was after all a custom model ^^

I changed its technical description from Handgun to Handcannon. I imagine it's the second best alternative to trying to fit a bolter pistol down your pocket! :D
@Andreyich

When I searched for "Handcannon", this is basically what I got xD



If this was a comedy show, I might consider using it as a weapon ^^
C.S. UP



adding it here for formality :D

I'm also going to give a callout to Team Psyker, while I'm at it!
People blessed with extraordinary powers beyond that of common "normies" ought to stick together! ^^
I did speak a few words with emperor(that being blade, not THE emprah), though you probably have a point!

In my defense, it's been 1 year since I joined a big RP :D
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