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Reason added.

Also, poor Shana. She's going to be the first one to lose. Most likely by burning her LP to death.

Doll Master: A Partners RP Interest Check

chukklehed said
You should at least make the OOC because the mods do get upset when you keep using the Interest check after people have expressed interest.

Never seen that happen. Just calm the hell down, most Interest checks take several days to a week.

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Like I said, personal bias. The Honest can stay.

Cryfder should be fine now.

And... yeah, that's also better. Thanks.

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IVIasterJay said
It was in a different RP, so they will need to be accpted for this one. Each RP has different standards.The Azure fusion monsters aren't intended to actually be fusion summoned. That's really just placeholder for them to be summoned from the extra deck (kind of like those ).Edit: Not like it's going anywhere, so there isn't any rush on reviewing.

Okay, I see now. Well, I don't think the deck should cause any serious problems. Possible ludicrous LP gain, but it should be within manageable confines for everyone.

Tenebrous Gaze said
Regarding Cryfder I was having some trouble deciding how powerful the effect should be relative to how many Truth Counters it would be but I'm not really sure what to go with.Anghenfill I can accept is confusing. The effect was meant to be that it had the ATK of all three tributed monsters' ATK put together and the DEF of all three tributed monsters' DEK put together but with the advantage of doubling that if every monster used was a Celestial Seeker, which I now see is actually kind of powerful given Chwilio and Nova Summoner. On top of that, its ATK mode effect was that if it destroyed a monster, it gained 25 times their level in ATK and DEF (so a level 4 would give it 100 ATK and DEF while a level 12 would give it 300 ATK and DEF) which would be kind of messy but far too powerful if that was 100. I could replace that with another effect but I wanted to keep the effect of it growing more powerful the more it destroyed.Like I said, all feedback is greatly appreciated and I'll try and figure out how to tone it down.

Hm... well, I'd suggest a static ATK boost whenever it destroys something. Drop the double ATK, and have it gain something like 500-800 ATK whenever it destroys something?

Okay, onto the characters themselves.

Aeron: I don't know how Empire would feel about a criminal character, but he could lead to some interesting dynamics with the others. The closest thing to a 'problem' with your deck is Honest, but that's just me being biased. Everything checks out with me, so... let's see what the other two say.

Ian: Not entirely sure about beating people with cattle prods, but Empire would have the final say on that bit. Otherwise... don't think there's anything serious to address.

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Too tired to look at the bios in depth, though I'll try and do so tomorrow. I skimmed the archetypes though, so here's what jumped out to me.

@Gaze: Anghenfill's first effect seems way too strong, and... confusing. It can gain double the total ATK of the tributed Celestials, which is already quite big, but multiplying it by 25 when it destroys a monster? That's either way too much, or not as big as I imagine, but only leads to messy calculations.
The backrow recovery from the Field spell also seems quite strong, to me. I don't know if you're deck's capable of quickly synchro summoning the Celestials off the field for easy counter gathering, though. But still, backrow isn't really something that should be recovered in bulk, I think.

@Jay: Seems like it was accepted before, so I guess there wasn't any issues with the deck. The Fusions don't have materials listed, though. Any two/three Azures, I take it?

I'll get back to these after I sleep. Though if you'd prefer to wait for Empire's word, or Kuragiri's, that's fine.

Doll Master: A Partners RP Interest Check

Name: Ada Hayward
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance: "A Noble? Me? Ufufu, unfortunately~!"
Personality: A girl who hates her elevated status in society, finding the rules and customs she must adhere to incredibly boring and stifling. Having seen poorer children playing happily in the street, and comparing it to her life of quietly adhering to the words of her father, or flattering party guests, Ada realised that she would much rather dirty her dress rolling down a hill, than carefully avoid getting even speck of dirt on it. She has not had the confidence to speak up about her desires, though she displays a more playful and cheerful side to herself when taking strolls around town, out of sight of her parents.
Backstory: Daughter of a Landlord and a shop owner, Ada had no shortage of money. This also meant she had a shortage of friends, as she was home-schooled, and her parents' associates had no other children her age. She had been raised with the expectations of following her duty as a daughter to the Hayward family, although Ada has tried acting out on her own, outside of the house.
Skills: Has the rare and useful ability of curtseying politely. Somewhat adept at cooking, and skilled at mathematics.

Beacon's Light: Rising - OOC (RWBY)

I do. It was pretty great.

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Okay, think I've gotten everything I need down in my profile by now.

@Keyblade: Your appearance seems to be broken, though I don't know if that's just me. The bio's also put down twice, but aside from that, I'm not seeing anything too objectionable. Empire will have the last word on that, though. He should be able to confirm by tomorrow.

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Doll time.

Name: Alice

Gender: Female

Appearance: "Don't bother with the formality; we're simply using each other." Alice also has some scarring around her right eye. And her height... just over four foot tall.

Personality: A strangely bitter and anti-social person, Alice treats everyone with a cold, dismissive demeanour. Not even her partner seems to gain any preferential treatment, but she is at least willing to maintain conversations. She will be quick to point out that she is simply using others for her gain, and thus the favour should be returned. That way, no attachments are formed, and she can perform her task efficiently.

Despite her attempts at remaining aloof and distant, it can be remarkably easy to make her drop her guard. She is weak against sweets, and seems unusually wary of dogs. Emotional stories also seem to garner some kind of reaction from her, but of course, this is all simply in one's imagination. That said, she is quick to aid someone in trouble, and all pretenses of calm tend to disappear when Hunters or Puppeteers are within sight.

Abilities: Alice can form a diamond casing around her hands and feet, increasing the potency of her melee.

Weapons: Aegis, The Unbreakable Shield - A circular shield of diamond that is exceptionally difficult to scratch, let alone break. While that is possible, the shield can weather a lot of abuse.

Misc: She lost her right eye to a Hunter a while ago. She didn't like that.

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It's still possible to join, yeah. The OOC's already up.