@Scarifarcurrently trying my best. sigh i hate my failures in language what about i just bail out if it really ends up to be the worse thing ever a simple "expell" would fix that
isn't that more important in advanced or high casual
Hayato heard the bus stop and tried to get off the bus as fast as he could. He hated traveling by car or by bus and was happy to finally get off, wondering what the inside of the building was like. He walked into the building, following someone else who had already entered the building before him. Hayato took the elevator up to the 11th floor with him and quietly waited for the other person to get his deck and duel disk before making a move of his own.
Looking at the uninterested person handing over the deck and the duel disk, he walked towards the teacher and simply told him "Just give me the samurai warlords deck and a return of the duelist pack." The boy quickly received his deck after a long sigh of the teacher. They were opening the deck and replacing one of the cards with another, saying that the card that was in the structure deck was forbidden and needed a replacement. Hayato nodded as he received his deck, pack and duel disk and walked off to the arena and took a seat next to the person he followed. He started staring at the duel disk wondering how to use it "Hmm... My parents had never let me use one of these... How does this even work...?"
alright then let's go then... (oh dear grammar is going to be a horror but i'll try my best) i'll do my post right away since it is the first post after all
Name: Hayato/Hayate Ray Age: 15 gender: (Fe)male Appearance: Wearing a simple shirt black shirt, covered with a large coat modeled after a samurai's clothing and wearing blue jeans, he has long black hair in the old samurai ponytail style (when acting as a male)
Personality: Hayato is a young man who doesn't mind losing and enjoys a good duel as long as he can have fun with his opponent, she likes to eat his sweets along with talking to girls about things he usually wouldn't talk about if his parents were around, she is always easily surprised by the smallest things when he is dueling like a card that looks cute or a card that's scary History: Hayato was born in a family of professional duelists always aiming to be the best quickly after his third birthday he was already being forced to learn how to duel with the best decks, while he did enjoy dueling by itself he wasn't having fun being given decks build by his parents, but he secretly wanted to play with more fun and interesting decks and wanted to start over, when he hit the age of 15 his parents send him to a duel academy to learn how to be a better duelist on his own. despite duelling being a activity for both males and females Hayato was forced to use a voice changer and had to act like a male. Hayato never asked for this and would cherish every moment she had to not be like a guy Favorite Card/Archetype or theme: Six samurai (as a Hayato) Madolche (as a Hayate) Chosen Structure Deck: Samurai Warlords Chosen Pack: Return of the Duelist Current deck:
Monsters: 22 Legendary Six Samurai - Kageki x 1 Chamberlain of the Six Samurai x 1 Grandmaster of the Six Samurai x 1 The Six Samurai - Yariza x 1 The Six Samurai - Zanji x 1 The Six Samurai - Nisashi x 1 The Six Samurai - Yaichi x 1 The Six Samueai - Kamon x 1 The Six Samurai - Irou x 1 Great Shogun Shien x 1 Shien's Footsoldier x 1 Enishi, Shien's Chancellor x 1 Spirit of the Six Samurai x 1 Future Samurai x 1 The Immortal Bushi x 1 Hand of the Six Samurai x 1 Legendary Six Samurai - Kizan x 1 Legendary Six Samurai - Enishi x 1 Shien's Squire x 1 Shien's Daredevil x 1 Elder of the Six Samurai x 1 Shien's Advisor x 1
Spells: 10 Shien's Smoke Signal x 1 Dark Hole x 1 The A. Forces x 1 Reinforcement of the Army x 1 The Warrior Returning Alive x 1 Supply squad x 1 Cunning of the Six Samurai x 1 Six Samurai United x 1 Temple of the Six x 1 Shien's Dojo x 1
Traps: 8 Rivalry of the Warlords x 1 Return of the Six Samurai x 1 Double-Edged Sword Technique x 1 Fiendish Chain x 1 Musakani Magatama x 1 Shien's Scheme x 1 Six Strike - Thunder Blast x 1 Six Style - Dual Wield x 1
Extra deck: 1 Shadow of the Six Samurai - Shien
Collection:
1 Chamberlain of the Six Samurai 1 Grandmaster of the Six Samurai 1 The Six Samurai - Yariza 1 The Six Samurai - Zanji 1 The Six Samurai - Nisashi 1 The Six Samurai - Yaichi 1 The Six Samurai - Kamon 1 The Six Samurai - Irou 1 Great Shogun Shien 1 Shien's Footsoldier 1 Enishi, Shien's Chancellor 1 Spirit of the Six Samurai 1 Future Samurai 1 The Immortal Bushi 1 Hand of the Six Samurai 1 Legendary Six Samurai - Kizan 1 Legendary Six Samurai - Enishi 1 Legendary Six Samurai - Kageki 1 Shien's Squire 1 Shien's Daredevil 1 Elder of the Six Samurai 1 Shien's Advisor 1 Dark Hole 1 The A. Forces 1 Reinforcement of the Army 1 The Warrior Returning Alive 1 Supply squad 1 Cunning of the Six Samurai 1 Six Samurai United 1 Shien's Smoke Signal 1 Temple of the Six 1 Shien's Dojo 1 Rivalry of Warlords 1 Return of the Six Samurai 1 Double-Edged Sword Technique 1 Fiendish Chain 1 Musakani Magatama 1 Shien's Scheme 1 Six Strike - Thunder Blast 1 Six Style - Dual Wield 1 Shadow of the Six Samurai - Shien
Uniflora, Mystical Beast of the Forest x2 Damage Mage Sishunder Madolche Lesson Madolche Baapie Chronomaly Moai Geargiaccelerator x2 Madolche Chateau Fairy King Albverdich Heroic Challenger - Spartan Stonehenge Methods Trance the Magic Swordsman Pahunder Hierophant of Prophecy Heroic Chance Chronomaly Golden Jet
updated history and personality but... i seriously need help with grammar it is a bit rough around the edges but i think im happy with it as this does put me in a situation where i don't have to be a good duelist
well my history needs more work for sure but what about the character itself is that alright? i'll think of a better history that hints at his real gender like everyone in ooc probably already knows the secret if they dont they should?
