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1 yr ago
Current Yearly Update… I’m alive. The end.
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2 yrs ago
Why do I post the same status twice? It's like I'm-Motherf-
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2 yrs ago
Why do I post the same status twice? It's like I'm-
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4 yrs ago
Haven’t updated this in about a year, better think of something clever to put- Oh goddamnit!
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4 yrs ago
Haven’t updated this in about a year, better think of something clever to put- Oh goddamnit!

Bio

So, I just realized this exists... After about an year... Right time to fill this out.

So hi, I’m Shiyonichi and as you can tell from my user name meaning death four one, in Japanese. I am...

An Edgy Weeaboo!


So yeah, I am basically human garbage.

I may or may not disappear on you during role plays. From either being dead, trying save the world, trying to destory the world, or a sudden case of being dead inside.

My favorite animals are dogs, I like red velvet cake, and I am obsessed with the katana.

If you need to contact me off forum I have a discord. Though I’m not straight up give it to you, because I’m human garbage.

Though here’s a hint: The first part is the most over used horror cliche of the last decade and the last part is a place with pretty damn good meatballs.

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Suddenly before anyone else could answer… a roar of a motorcycle reverberated through the air as a dust cloud was picked up and headed towards them at high speeds. A cloaked man on a motorcycle rode down the street at high speeds. As the man came to a stop, the sudden stop caused the gale picked up and blew towards the rest of the Defense force as if the rider and the cycle was the herald of the wind.

The man slowly dismounted the Motorcycle. Before taking heavy steps like an old cowboy movie, as an air of intimidation exuded from the figure. From under the cloak eyes seemed to have glared at the group. This was what people would think when they heard Netherworld Warrior. A mysterious and dangerous warrior, everyone else in the market was silenced by this man’s sudden appearance causing his footsteps to sound like approaching thunder.

The rider stood in front of the group. Before slowly pulling out the poster for the Netherworld defense force, making it clear what this person was here for. A powerful warrior can come to join in on the defense, to fight against the empire. Whispers start to speculate on who this figure was, an Overlord? A Majin? Maybe even a Tyrant? The sheer aura that was coming off of the man was one that warranted such speculation. The demons in the market seem to hold their breath as the mysterious rider puts his hand on his cloak to reveal themselves, taking it off and tossing it aside and revealing…

“Hello, the name’s Kai, convenience store worker. It is nice to meet ya.”
@Darkmoon Angel Mind sending a new discord Link, the current one is broken.
I’d be interested in joining a Disgaea RP.
@Shiyonichi: Right, form analysis...
  • I think at her core, your character is a bit too tonally dissonant from the rest of the cast. I can feasibly see child soldiers in the criminal underbelly; that's a very commonplace thing. But the specific circumstances behind the character's inception (the whole kodoku-esque creation method in particular) leaves a bit of an unwanted taste in my mouth, as the very specific trait of "possibly bloody psychopath hitman child murderer" with no real narrative weight behind it isn't something I think would fare well in the world...
    And, if I'm going to be honest, feels a bit one-note as written. A boss with a high difficulty spike who appears out of nowhere with no real meaningful history feels more like... Well, just that. I'd point to, say, SMT3's Matador, for example. People remember that boss because you're forced to fight them on the back foot and kind of just sucker punches you because you don't expect them, but otherwise isn't exactly memorable as a character.
  • The circumstances behind her entry into the school in this 'timeline' feel a bit contrived. While I would agree that she would need an excuse to get off the streets to attend, "saving the headmaster's kid and getting adopted by him as a result" seems a bit too convenient. There are probably better, more reasonable routes to doing so that would lead to a character who ended UP with a reputation as a damn good killer (and you don't need to be put into a tournament to the death to facilitate being good at killing, if I'm being completely honest; it gets you the person who is the best at surviving, not killing), and I'd recommend considering those routes. Easy examples include things like "forced nobility to adopt her into the family" or "missing child now found" and so on and so forth, but I'm not going to force anything in that regard.


For the reasons above, I'm choosing to reject the form as it is right now.


Ah sorry, I didn’t get my idea across too well. You know how you have a flash of inspiration and because you’re so caught up in it that you forget to make it clear to other people? Yeah I think that’s what happened.

To explain

The original Aliciana is meant to be a force of Nature Villain. She’s not a villain with understandable motivations. She’s more or less a concept in a human face. Like how the Joker Represents Chaos, Aliciana is meant to be a representation of Bloodlust, specifically of the Serial Killer kind, a kind of Bloodlust that finds killing euphoric.

So the concept with Shinobu and Aliciana is like a good person taking over the Joker’s body, but the Joker has a bit of Influence over them and they have to fight it off to keep their own identity.

As for what is in the game is that, I accidentally made it seem like she is meant to be a simple one off boss, rather she’s meant to be a more like Liu Bu from Dynasty Warriors or Nemesis from Resident Evil. Basically they are meant to be that enemy that shows up and is hunting you and you need to run and in the story they basically take the same role. Everyscene they are meant to be a “bomb”. She can and will kill someone, you just don’t know when or who. She is basically meant to be the collective boogeyman for the fan base.

Which is why I had Shinobu be a cinnamon roll. Because it would be the equivalent of something like Nemesis walking up and instead of killing Jill, hands her a flower and says. “Wannabe Friends?” You can’t say that wouldn’t be amusing.

As for the backstory. I’ll get rid of the whole having them fight to the death part, it’s only there to show the cruelty of the location. The point was just meant to be an explanation of why she is so strong despite her age.

As for the contrivances, is because I wanted to show that Shinobu at her core is still a good person despite the her situation, as it is meant to mirror her death and that she is still willing to do the same thing. I didn’t want to leave this scene as a one off scene and actually have some sort of consequence for her heroism, so I tied it into the reason why she went into the academy.

I’ve got my interest in this RP. Room for one more?
The third appeared with the roar of an engine. A blue motorcycle and rider stopped infront of the duo of magical girls, before the rider stepped off the vehicle, with a fairy floating behind her. “Evening.” the rider said taciturn as she took off the full faced helmet before hanging it off the handle bars.

“Kana, you’re just going to leave it at that? I know your shy around others, but they are your comrades now you shouldn’t be so shy.” the fairy spoke behind her as if they were a mother trying to encourage their child to make friends. “Shu-Shut up, Quant. We’re just here to kill Shades.” Kana responded in a rather Tsundere kinda way. The Delinquent Girl was actually the newest of the team. She was a Magical Girl only for a relatively short amount of time and the amount of time she spent with the on the team was even less, so there was a still a bit of awkwardness when she was with the others.

“So, I guess the rest haven’t arrived. So do we know what’s on there or are we going in blind?” Kana stated the obvious as she saw Takara looking like she wanted to shove her fist into something and Abigail bring out a stall of snacks. ”Oh I’ll take a Calpico! Thanks Abigail!” The fairy floated over to take a bottle from Abigail. Though Kana didn’t seem to take any.


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